Talk:2010–11 Princeton Tigers men's basketball team/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: YE  Tropical   Cyclone  00:46, 5 May 2011 (UTC)

Here are my comments:

Lead

 * "The team competes in the Ivy League athletic conference. The team is coming off of a 22–9 2009–10 season in which it achieved the most wins by a Princeton men's basketball team since the 1998–99 team, its first back-to-back finishes of at least second place in the Ivy since 2001–02 season, its first postseason appearance since the 2003–04 team went to the 2004 NCAA Men's Division I Basketball Tournament" sentence is too long
 * O.K.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 02:29, 5 May 2011 (UTC)
 * "and its first postseason victory since the 1998–99 team won two games in the 1999 National Invitation Tournament." Sicne when do you start a sentence with and
 * the prior "." was suppose to be a ","
 * Remove the two red links in league
 * O.K.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 02:21, 5 May 2011 (UTC)
 * You say "Princeton" tto many times during the lead. YE  Tropical   Cyclone
 * I cut it from 7 to 5 times.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 02:17, 5 May 2011 (UTC)

Preview

 * Remove red link in section
 * O.K.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 02:32, 5 May 2011 (UTC)
 * "It was the first Princeton team to be the preseason selection since the 2004–05 Princeton team." Preseason selection? wtf is that?
 * Fixed.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 02:36, 5 May 2011 (UTC)

Paying Style
No comments here

Schedule

 * "The team posted a perfect 12–0 home record.[22] In early February, the team lost its adopted pediatric brain tumor patient who had previously sat on the team's bench" Two things: Did he die or just was too ill too watch anymore? and what role did he play?
 * Fixed up a bit.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 03:07, 5 May 2011 (UTC)
 * Any info on the first Harvard-Princeton game.
 * added a bit.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 02:49, 5 May 2011 (UTC)
 * If I recall correctly, the one of the player of Princeton hit the game wining shot in the Ivy League one game playoff.
 * added his name.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 02:49, 5 May 2011 (UTC)
 * "Princeton was quickly declared the winner of the imaginary payscale champion of the tournament for having the highest starting salary among its graduates as well as the champion for a host of academic related superior comparisons" wtf? what does this half to do with anything?
 * Removed.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 03:09, 5 May 2011 (UTC)

Honors
I'm putting the article on hold for now.YE  Tropical   Cyclone  00:46, 5 May 2011 (UTC)
 * The table is broken.
 * Fixed.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 03:13, 5 May 2011 (UTC)
 * Passed. YE  Tropical   Cyclone