Talk:2010–11 Temple Owls men's basketball team/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: YE  Tropical  Cyclone 17:04, 28 June 2011 (UTC)

First off, I fixed the redlinks in the article.


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YE  Tropical  Cyclone 16:17, 28 June 2011 (UTC)

I really like this article, it is well-written and has very good content. If this article goes to WP:FAC, the wirtting may need to be more encyclopedic. However, I am passing the article, but watch out for redlinks. YE  Tropical  Cyclone 17:04, 28 June 2011 (UTC)
 * Do you have any examples of the writing not being encyclopedic enough? ~ EDDY  ( talk / contribs ) ~ 05:29, 6 July 2011 (UTC)