Talk:2010 G20 Toronto summit/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Nikkimaria (talk) 03:22, 18 September 2010 (UTC)

Hello! I'll be reviewing this article for possible GA status. My review should be posted within the next day or two. Cheers, Nikkimaria (talk) 03:22, 18 September 2010 (UTC)
 * I've decided to place this article on hold to allow time for the below issues to be addressed. cheers, Nikkimaria (talk) 16:58, 18 September 2010 (UTC)
 * No responses in 2 weeks...are contributors still working on this, or should the review be closed to allow for a possible later renomination? Nikkimaria (talk) 00:09, 17 October 2010 (UTC)
 * If there's still work to be done, then this will have to be failed since there's been no progress in a couple weeks. Wizardman  Operation Big Bear 14:21, 18 October 2010 (UTC)

Writing and formatting
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 * This article needs a general copy-edit for clarity and flow


 * Working on it. EelamStyleZ (talk) 22:26, 18 September 2010
 * As I construed the situation, the GA review was put on hold pending a word from EelamStyleZ that this review was completed. In 2011, I am willing to copy-edit superficially as I review the citation format and links. --Tenmei (talk) 19:26, 6 April 2011 (UTC)

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 * Don't include "th" in dates



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 * "supported by countries of the European Union, as well as France and Germany" - aren't both France and Germany part of the EU?


 * Fixed by EelamStyleZ here --Tenmei (talk) 16:40, 27 September 2010

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 * "Taxes...was a major issue" - grammar


 * Fixed by EelamStyleZ here --Tenmei (talk) 16:40, 27 September 2010

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 * Avoid linking the same terms multiple times



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 * Avoid passive-voice and other indirect constructions where possible



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 * Include conversions for measurements



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 * PMs were elected, not appointed


 * Fixed by EelamStyleZ here --Tenmei (talk) 16:40, 27 September 2010

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 * Correct title for Mutharika is "Chairperson"


 * Fixed by EelamStyleZ here --Tenmei (talk) 16:01, 27 September 2010

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 * Why is the ASEAN Chairman a piped link to Prime Minister of Vietnam?


 * Fixed by EelamStyleZ here --Tenmei (talk) 16:40, 27 September 2010

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 * At the time of the summit, Draghi was head of the FSB, not FSF


 * Fixed by EelamStyleZ here --Tenmei (talk) 16:01, 27 September 2010

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 * Why are the links for Zenawi and Muthariki piped to the list of heads of state for their respective countries instead of their biographies?


 * Fixed by EelamStyleZ here --Tenmei (talk) 16:40, 27 September 2010

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 * OECD uses "Secretary General" without the hyphen


 * Fixed by EelamStyleZ here --Tenmei (talk) 16:01, 27 September 2010

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 * "Canadian Corridor" or "The Canadian Corridor"?


 * Fixed by EelamStyleZ here --Tenmei (talk) 16:40, 27 September 2010

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 * How does one perform a power of arrest? Do you mean they performed arrests?


 * Fixed by EelamStyleZ here --Tenmei (talk) 16:40, 27 September 2010

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 * Don't link terms in See also that are linked in the article text


 * Fixed by EelamStyleZ here --Tenmei (talk) 16:40, 27 September 2010

Accuracy and verifiability
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 * See here for problematic links


 * Working on it --Tenmei (talk) 15:37, 27 September 2010
 * As I understood it, the GA review was put on hold pending completion of "general copy-edit for clarity and flow" as noted above. In 2011, I am willing to re-examine the links which are now identified as broken here, etc. --Tenmei (talk) 19:26, 6 April 2011 (UTC)

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 * "Toronto Transit Commission announced that its subway stations would remain open and operational" - source?


 * Fixed by EelamStyleZ here --Tenmei (talk) 01:54, 5 April 2011 (UTC)

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 * "Recently appointed heads of government, namely British Prime Minister David Cameron and Japanese Prime Minister Naoto Kan, made the G8 and G-20 summits their first diplomatic conferences" - source? Source for following sentence mentions both leaders but does not support this assertion


 * Fixed by EelamStyleZ here --Tenmei (talk) 03:07, 28 September 2010

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 * "Canada has answers for even the toughest puzzles" - check wording, doesn't match source


 * Fixed by EelamStyleZ here --Tenmei (talk) 03:07, 28 September 2010

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 * Use a consistent formatting for references


 * Working on it. --Tenmei (talk) 15:37, 27 September 2010
 * As it appeared to me, the GA review was put on hold pending completion of "general copy-edit for clarity and flow" as noted above; and I was waiting for some kind of confirmation that format consistency was satisfactory in the table which is in the Attendance section. In 2011, if formatting in the table is deemed adequate, then I am willing to re-examine each cite in the other parts of the article, making edits where necessary. --Tenmei (talk) 14:25, 6 April 2011 (UTC)

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 * Italicize print-based sources like newspapers



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 * Ref 11: fix formatting



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 * Include a publisher for all sources, and name publishers consistently. For example, you include both "english.aljazeera.net" and "Al Jazeera"



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 * Ref 37: add missing information


 * Fixed here --Tenmei (talk) 22:21, 29 September 2010

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 * Ref 68: author formatting


 * Fixed here --Tenmei (talk) 00:53, 28 September 2010

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 * All web links should include a retrieval date



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 * Be consistent in including or not including publisher location



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 * Ref 100: typo


 * Fixed here --Tenmei (talk) 22:21, 29 September 2010

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 * Ref 142: formatting


 * Fixed here --Tenmei (talk) 08:34, 28 September 2010

Broad
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 * "Prior to the Toronto summit, it was speculated that it would not see the same outcome as previous summits" - please clarify/explain



Neutrality
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 * What made the fence "unscalable"?



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 * Be careful of WP:W2W



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 * Use an encyclopedic tone at all times



Stability
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Some vandalism, but no recent edit-warring, so stability is not an issue


 * No action needed. --Tenmei (talk) 15:37, 27 September 2010 (UTC)

Images
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 * The summit is not a family


 * Disagree. The "family photo" is a term of art for a group photo at an international diplomatic conference, e.g.,
 * 2003 G8 summit, French official site
 * 2007 G8 summit, German official site
 * 2009 G8 summit, Italian official site
 * 2010 G8 summit, Whitehouse official site
 * An objection to the use of the word "family" is unjustified. The caption is consistent with conventional usage which is verified by reliable sources. --Tenmei (talk) 22:24, 20 September 2010 (UTC)