Talk:2010 Philippine Bar exam bombing/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Crisco 1492 (talk) 05:22, 20 August 2011 (UTC)

I am currently reading the article. Crisco 1492 (talk) 05:22, 20 August 2011 (UTC)  :
 * (a) ;
 * Lead
 * What theory? (second paragraph)
 * A couple of the paragraphs (second and third especially) may need to be merged.
 * Incident and response
 * "People in the area thought that the noise from the explosion was from fireworks that are a normal part of the post-bar celebrations. A commotion followed as people panicked and ran for safety." - Wouldn't they have to realize that it was a bomb first?
 * Manila Doctors Hospital - does it not have an apostrophe? (i.e. not Manila Doctors' Hospital?)
 * The third paragraph should probably be merged with the second, near the casualties figure.
 * Lazaga accused
 * Instead of writing (trans) after a translated quote, perhaps you should use, like used in Sitti Nurbaya so that the original can be read as well, but not intrude on the text.
 * Indictment
 * "... (for almost killing the two amputees) ..." implies that they were amputees prior to the blast. Rephrasing may be in order.
 * (b).
 * Perhaps Lazaga accused and Identification and surrender to Binay should be standardized, as having Lazaga's name in a header but not Nepomuceno's seems POV.

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 * Looks fine. Spotchecks on a couple sources show no paraphrasing problems.
 * (a) ;
 * (b) ;
 * (c).

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 * Looks fine.
 * (a) ;
 * (b).

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 * Fine, aside from the header issue above.

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 * Looks stable to me, most recent edits were for improvement and took place over a month ago.

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 * (a) ;
 * I am worried about the FUR for both non-free images. They seem to indicate that the use is primarily for identification of the suspect, which is generally not considered a valid reason for fair use. The identification card, if produced by the government, may be Public Domain but I cannot guarantee it. The court image should probably be removed.
 * (b).
 * Fine.

Summary: On hold Please address text issues per G1 and image issues per G6a. Crisco 1492 (talk) 08:20, 20 August 2011 (UTC)
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