Talk:2010 Subway Fresh Fit 600

Delisted GA
As the assessment was done by a socking and essentially banned user, major issues such as prose were not adressed. There should be some element of a progression of the race, but a lap by lap recount is not proper prose. I would suggest a reassessment of this and any other articles the user reviewed once the issues are addressed, see some of the other (more thourough) reviews of other similar articles or ask me for further information. Some examples: "Jimmie Johnson led them to the flag" who is "them"? Everyone? A second group? and what made the restart "faulty"? Did a driver make a mistake? Did an official make a mistake?-- Terrillja talk  05:10, 15 June 2010 (UTC)