Talk:2011 Alabama Crimson Tide football team/GA2

GA Review
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Reviewer: Rp0211 (talk · contribs) 20:16, 22 June 2012 (UTC)


 * GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (references): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:

Infobox

 * Information in article needed to support "Offensive scheme" information
 * Could not find any information to support "Base defense"
 * I have provided citations for both the offense and defense in the infobox. Patriarca12 (talk) 03:30, 23 June 2012 (UTC)

Lead

 * In April 2012 eight members of the 2011 squad were selected in the NFL Draft... → Put comma after "2012"
 * Done Patriarca12 (talk) 03:30, 23 June 2012 (UTC)

Before the season

 * No issues

Personnel

 * The most notable departures from the previous year were defensive end Marcell Dareus; left tackle James Carpenter; tight end Preston Dial; quarterback Greg McElroy; wide receiver Julio Jones; and running back Mark Ingram, Jr.[22] → Commas should be put between names, not semicolons
 * Done Patriarca12 (talk) 03:30, 23 June 2012 (UTC)


 * See also: American football positions, Glossary of American football, and Recruiting (college athletics) → Information not necessary for "See also"
 * Removed "See also" links Patriarca12 (talk) 03:30, 23 June 2012 (UTC)

Schedule

 * No issues

Game notes

 * No issues

Rankings

 * Sources needed to verify all of the information in the table, week by week
 * I have provided an overall citation for the table at bottom that does link to all of the information provided for in the table. I feel this is the most appropriate way to handle this otherwise 49 separate citations would need to be added. Patriarca12 (talk) 03:30, 23 June 2012 (UTC)

After the season

 * No issues