Talk:2011 Astana season/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Jezhotwells (talk · contribs) 17:18, 3 December 2011 (UTC)

I shall be reviewing this article against the Good Article criteria, following its nomination for Good Article status.

Disambiguations: none found.

Linkrot: none found. Jezhotwells (talk) 17:20, 3 December 2011 (UTC)

Checking against GA criteria

 * GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * Gasparotto turned in a fourth place ride at Tre Valli Varesine, equal closest to victory in a single-day race with the two leaders' performances earlier in the season. I think I understand this, but the construction is rather clumsy. Can you recast it? ✅
 * An MRI taken after the Romandie prologue, spurred by the Croatian suffering severe shoulder pain, revealed that he had a cracked vertebra. MRI should be wikilinked, I think "spurred" is the wrong word here. ✅
 * Kreuziger, along with most of the race's best riders, was again distanced by Contador on the Grossglockner, "out-distanced" not "distanced" ✅
 * ' ' He had surgery in Aurillac the next day, with recovery time such that the injury likely meant the end of his season, and consequently, his career.'' A little clumsy ✅
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (references): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * Sources are RS, statements adequately cited, no OR. It would be good if publication dates in citations were consistent
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * Good coverage
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * NPOV
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * Stable
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * One image used, adequately licensed and captioned.
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * On hold for seven days for above issues to be addressed. Jezhotwells (talk) 18:01, 3 December 2011 (UTC)
 * OK, thanks for fixing those issues. I am now happy to list this. Congratulations! Jezhotwells (talk) 01:20, 4 December 2011 (UTC)
 * OK, thanks for fixing those issues. I am now happy to list this. Congratulations! Jezhotwells (talk) 01:20, 4 December 2011 (UTC)