Talk:2011 Bahrain Grand Prix/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Kpddg (talk · contribs) 05:38, 6 January 2022 (UTC)

Hello. I will be reviewing this article over the coming days. Please inform me regarding any problems. Thank You. Kpddg  (talk)  05:38, 6 January 2022 (UTC)

Section-wise Assessment
After an initial review, the article looks very good. All sources are fine, prose is clear, and article is stable. Though it is short and lacks good images (considering the nature of the article), it is fine. Anyways, I'll be doing a proper review below. There will be some important corrections needed.

Lead Section

 * 'On 3 June, it was announced that the race would be held on 30 October, thus making it round 17 of the 20 to be held during 2011.' Could this sentence be made more clear?
 * Re-worded by User:HumanBodyPiloter5 (Special:Diff/1064071135). SSSB (talk) 13:12, 7 January 2022 (UTC)
 * This sumarizes the further content, which have the required citations. So citations are not needed here. It is clear, consise, and very well-written.

Postponment

 * 'Ecclestone stated that....' It would not be necessary to link the protests again, for it has already been done before and is understood.
 * Resolved. (Special:Diff/1064261698) SSSB (talk) 13:12, 7 January 2022 (UTC)
 * Otherwise, the section is fine

Provisional reinstatement and cancellation

 * I made a small grammatical correction (added a comma)
 * I feel this section can be broken into a couple of paragraphs.
 * This section is now over 4 paragraphs rather than just the two. (Special:Diff/1064261698) SSSB (talk) 13:12, 7 January 2022 (UTC)

On Hold For Improvements
@SSSB, This article is put for a time period of 3 days. Please help make the required improvements, after which a decision can be taken. Thank You. Kpddg  (talk)  08:49, 6 January 2022 (UTC)
 * Thank you for taking this on. I think I've addressed all the concerns you raised. SSSB (talk) 13:12, 7 January 2022 (UTC)

Final Decision
Thanks SSSB for your contributions. Kpddg  (talk)  13:31, 7 January 2022 (UTC)


 * thank you for the speedy review! SSSB (talk) 13:37, 7 January 2022 (UTC)