Talk:2011 European Pool Championships/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 05:10, 1 October 2020 (UTC)

Going to review for the GAN October 2020 Backlog Drive. MWright96 (talk) 05:10, 1 October 2020 (UTC)
 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * Pass/Fail:

Lead

 * "The events were played between 23 March, and 3 April 2011" - I don't think the comma is necessary
 * Done Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 10:56, 3 October 2020 (UTC)
 * "was a part of the European Pool Championships; " - were part
 * Done Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 10:56, 3 October 2020 (UTC)
 * "and saw events for men, women and wheelchair players across four pool disciplines:" - featured
 * Done Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 10:56, 3 October 2020 (UTC)
 * "Austria was the most successful nation at the event, winning three events" - try to avoid close repetition of the word "event(s)
 * Done Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 10:56, 3 October 2020 (UTC)
 * " Jouni Tähti won two of the three wheelchair events, losing just one match in the final of the nine-ball event to Henrik Larsson." - same issue as above
 * Done Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 10:56, 3 October 2020 (UTC)

Background

 * "Every event has a separate tournament for '''both men, and wheelchair competitors" - men, women and wheelchair competitors.
 * Done Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 11:24, 3 October 2020 (UTC)
 * "The eight and ten-ball events was played as a race–to–8 rack, with the women's and wheelchair events as race–to–6 racks" - none of this is mentioned in the source attached to it. Another source containing all of this information is required
 * Added ref. Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 11:24, 3 October 2020 (UTC)
 * "The eight and ten-ball events was played as a race–to–8 rack, with the women's and wheelchair events as race–to–6 racks." - same issue as above
 * Added ref. Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 11:24, 3 October 2020 (UTC)
 * "The eight and ten-ball events was played as a race–to–8 rack, with the women's and wheelchair events" - repetition of the word "events"
 * Done Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 11:24, 3 October 2020 (UTC)
 * "The nine-ball event was held as race–to–9 racks for the men's and juniors events, with women's and wheelchairs as race–to–7 racks." - same issue as above
 * Added ref. Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 11:24, 3 October 2020 (UTC)

Tournament Summary

 * When the player is mentioned a second time, just using their surname will suffice
 * Done Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 12:43, 3 October 2020 (UTC)
 * "In the semi-finals, Tomasz Kapłan defeated Petri Makkonen and Fabio Petroni defeated Roman Pruchay." - what were the scores of both matches?
 * Added Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 12:43, 3 October 2020 (UTC)
 * "the eight-ball tournaments" - tournament
 * Done Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs)
 * " Nick van den Berg defeated Huiji See in the first semi-final 9–7 in a match filled with mistakes," - this portion of text is not mentioned in the source attached to it. Please use another source that explictly mentions this information
 * added ref. Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 12:43, 3 October 2020 (UTC)
 * "The nine-ball event was held between 28 and 31 March," - 1 April; also this portion of text needs verifying by a reliable source
 * "The all Austrian final" - all-Austrian
 * Done Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 12:43, 3 October 2020 (UTC)
 * "where Cohan won 8–6." - Cohen
 * Done Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 12:43, 3 October 2020 (UTC)
 * " to Marika Poikkijoki in the quarter-finals of the eight-ball" - eight-ball competition
 * done Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 12:43, 3 October 2020 (UTC)

Results

 * The hyphens in the date(s) column need to be replaced by en dashes (–) per MOS:DASH
 * Done Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 11:36, 3 October 2020 (UTC)
 * For all of the players' names in the results tables, they should be sorted in alphabetical order according to their surname with the Template:sortname template combined with the flagathlete template e.g. 🇵🇱 (POL)
 * fixed Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 11:50, 3 October 2020 (UTC)
 * The end dates for the women's nine-ball and wheelchair nine-ball events are 1 April not 31 March per the source of the information
 * "Roman Prutschai" - his surname is spelt as Pruchay in the source provided
 * Done Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 11:36, 3 October 2020 (UTC)
 * "Konstantin Stepanow" - his surname is Stepanov
 * Done Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 11:36, 3 October 2020 (UTC)
 * Marika Poikkijoki is Finnish not Dutch
 * Done Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 11:36, 3 October 2020 (UTC)