Talk:2011 Leopard Trek season/GA1

GA Review
The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.''

Reviewer: GreatOrangePumpkin (talk · contribs) 10:22, 26 July 2012 (UTC)


 * GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (references): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * File:Daniele Bennati-Vuelta a España 2011.jpg was nominated for deletion
 * Deletion discussions in Commons are often extremely long, so I just hided it. As the article is very long, it may take some days to fully review it. Regards.--Kürbis (✔) 13:51, 5 August 2012 (UTC)
 * Surely you're not saying you're waiting for that deletion discussion to finish. I have replaced the image in the article. It's no longer relevant. Green-eyed girl  ( Talk  ·  Contribs ) 19:34, 6 August 2012 (UTC)
 * I did not say that I will wait until the discussion will be closed.--Kürbis (✔) 17:58, 7 August 2012 (UTC)
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * Deletion discussions in Commons are often extremely long, so I just hided it. As the article is very long, it may take some days to fully review it. Regards.--Kürbis (✔) 13:51, 5 August 2012 (UTC)
 * Surely you're not saying you're waiting for that deletion discussion to finish. I have replaced the image in the article. It's no longer relevant. Green-eyed girl  ( Talk  ·  Contribs ) 19:34, 6 August 2012 (UTC)
 * I did not say that I will wait until the discussion will be closed.--Kürbis (✔) 17:58, 7 August 2012 (UTC)
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:


 * Genesis of the new team
 * Looks good--Kürbis (✔) 08:29, 7 August 2012 (UTC)
 * Spring classics:
 * One minor point: I would remove "itself" in "The second group on the road gradually whittled itself down to a select group of top favorites. "--Kürbis (✔) 08:40, 7 August 2012 (UTC)
 * Removed. Craig  (talk)  11:20, 11 August 2012 (UTC)
 * Fall races:
 * Define "neo-pro" in "In August, Nizzolo continued his strong neo-pro season with a fifth place ride at the GP Ouest-France, ..."
 * Link added. Craig  (talk)  11:20, 11 August 2012 (UTC)
 * I don't understand this sentence: "Zaugg then showed a portend of his coming late-season form at the Giro dell'Emilia,"
 * Portend refers to this. Altered to signs. Craig  (talk)  11:20, 11 August 2012 (UTC)
 * Yeah, I thought you could use that word as a noun. Evidently not :$ Green-eyed girl  ( Talk  ·  Contribs ) 18:26, 11 August 2012 (UTC)
 * Repetition of "behind"; suggest rewording: "eventually finishing the day in 7th place behind 21 seconds behind the winner Filippo Pozzato.[77] "
 * Doesn't need to be reworded at all; taking out the first behind and adding a comma makes the sentence flow better. Craig  (talk)  11:20, 11 August 2012 (UTC)
 * Forgot signing--Kürbis (✔) 11:14, 7 August 2012 (UTC)
 * Stage races:
 * There is a typo at the end: "The elder Schleck brother held his advantage through the flat stage and individual time trial on day two of the three-staage race," --Kürbis (✔) 17:34, 7 August 2012 (UTC)
 * Rectified. Craig  (talk)  11:20, 11 August 2012 (UTC)
 * Giro d'Italia
 * Looks good.
 * Death of Wouter Weylandt
 * "Race doctor Giovanni Tredici, and the doctor for the Garmin-Cervélo team " - I would remove the comma
 * Removed. Craig  (talk)  11:20, 11 August 2012 (UTC)
 * Tour de France
 * Looks good.
 * Vuelta a España
 * Looks good.--Kürbis (✔) 17:51, 7 August 2012 (UTC)
 * rest:
 * Looks good.--Kürbis (✔) 17:58, 7 August 2012 (UTC)

Looks like Craig got the remarks taken care of. I found a few other small errors (typos mostly). Green-eyed girl ( Talk  ·  Contribs ) 18:32, 11 August 2012 (UTC)
 * Pass Good work and a shame that it was so long in the queue. Regards.--Kürbis (✔) 20:04, 11 August 2012 (UTC)