Talk:2012 Macau Grand Prix/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Harrias (talk · contribs) 12:25, 20 November 2017 (UTC)

I'll take another.


 * Lead
 * "..having won the event's Qualification Race the.." qualification race probably doesn't need to be capitalised here.
 * ✅ MWright96 (talk) 18:04, 20 November 2017 (UTC)


 * Entry list
 * The flag thing again.
 * Have removed the entire entry list as I have done in the other Macau Grand Prix good article. MWright96 (talk) 18:04, 20 November 2017 (UTC)


 * Report
 * "The 202 Macau Grand Prix.." Typo! 2012.
 * Ah, need to slow down while writing so I see mistakes such as this. Fixed. MWright96 (talk) 18:04, 20 November 2017 (UTC)
 * "..ahead of three of Nasr's Carlin teammates Félix da Costa.." Could do with a semi-colon between teammates and Felix.
 * ✅ MWright96 (talk) 18:04, 20 November 2017 (UTC)
 * "..both of which being 30 minutes." "were" might be better than "being".
 * Changed. MWright96 (talk) 18:04, 20 November 2017 (UTC)
 * "Following them were harAbt.." Typo.
 * ✅ MWright96 (talk) 18:04, 20 November 2017 (UTC)
 * I'm not convinced it is necessary to list the entire grid during the prose of this section (in each of the the qualifying, the qualifying race and the main race sections.)
 * "..Mandarin; alas, the pole-sitter regained his lead.." Alas definitely doesn't seem the right word to use here, it seems to apply an editorial voice, rather than an WP:NPOV.
 * removed the last section of the text. MWright96 (talk) 18:04, 20 November 2017 (UTC)


 * Classification
 * Tables would benefit from being sortable.
 * ✅ MWright96 (talk) 18:04, 20 November 2017 (UTC)


 * References
 * Referencing looks good, spot checks don't reveal any issues. Harrias  talk 12:25, 20 November 2017 (UTC)
 * I have addressed all of the queries except for reducing the list of the starting grid and the finishing order in the prose. MWright96 (talk) 18:04, 20 November 2017 (UTC)
 * Update: have reduced the starting grid in the prose to include only the first twenty qualifiers. MWright96 (talk) 18:43, 20 November 2017 (UTC)
 * Thanks, that's good enough for me to make this Good. Harrias  talk 19:04, 20 November 2017 (UTC)