Talk:2013 Bahrain GP2 Series round/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Courcelles (talk · contribs) 16:14, 9 May 2018 (UTC)

I'll do this one now. Courcelles (talk) 16:14, 9 May 2018 (UTC)


 * "Leimer fended off pressure from the fast-starting Coletti to maintain his pole position advantage in the opening sequence of corners." The first half of this paragraph in the lead is talking about which race?
 * "Leimer pulled out an healthy advantage in the following laps and ceded " Maybe "but" and not "and" here?
 * "cut by a solitary point" Cut by a solitary point or cut TO a solitary point?
 * "Leimer then moved to the top of the time sheets with a new GP2 Series lap record of the Bahrain International Circuit and later lowered it to a one minute and 39.427 seconds lap time" This is saying he a) set the record, and then b)broke his own new record.  Is that accurate?
 * Yes. MWright96 (talk) 18:17, 9 May 2018 (UTC)
 * "not allowed to make pit stops." Not allowed or not required?
 * "when Richelmi after which a steady stream" sentence could use more words or a rewrite
 * "the circuit's the run-off" tpoo many "the";s
 * "The second race began at 10:50 local time." Specify the date.
 * In one section you say "The top eight finishers scored points towards their respective championships.", but you later say that the top-ten scored points in the feature race...
 * "o win for RUSSIAN TIME after only four races" No all caps.
 * " nine races left in the season." Nine races or nine  race meetings?

That's all from me. Made two minor edits as I went. Courcelles (talk) 16:40, 9 May 2018 (UTC)
 * Thank you for taking the time to review this article. Every one of the above points have been actioned. MWright96 (talk) 18:17, 9 May 2018 (UTC)
 * Looks good now, promoting. Courcelles (talk) 18:23, 9 May 2018 (UTC)