Talk:2013 El Reno tornado/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: CycloneIsaac (talk · contribs) 00:05, 10 April 2017 (UTC)

Reviewing later.&mdash; CycloneIsaac ( Talk ) 00:05, 10 April 2017 (UTC)

*I believe I have addressed everything. QatarStarsLeague (talk) 00:51, 21 April 2017 (UTC)
 * Three dead links - check the external link checker
 * This one's been on hold for a while, so I figured I would help out. Links fixed. QatarStarsLeague (talk) 00:44, 21 April 2017 (UTC)
 * Two of them are still dead, check the external link checker again.&mdash; CycloneIsaac ( Talk ) 02:37, 24 April 2017 (UTC)
 * After fixing two dead links, I'm not seeing any more via the checker, so I think you can count this issue as fixed. Master of Time   ( talk ) 01:57, 25 April 2017 (UTC)
 * "The widest tornado in recorded history, it was part of a larger weather system that produced dozens of tornadoes over the preceding days." Change the middle part to "history was part".
 * "The widest tornado in history was part..." would allow for some readers to assume that the "widest" claim refers to a different twister; to me this makes it clearer that we are referring to this tornado. QatarStarsLeague (talk) 00:44, 21 April 2017 (UTC)
 * The full name of CAPE should be mentioned before it can be abbreviated.
 * Put in a primer on CAPE. QatarStarsLeague (talk) 00:44, 21 April 2017 (UTC)
 * "Thunderstorm activity across Oklahoma during the mid-afternoon hours was largely limited to far northern parts of the state due in part to a capping inversion that did not erode farther south until later in the day, aided by a shortwave trough that pushed into the region from the Texas Panhandle and a stronger trough located over Colorado." Citation needed.
 * Claim removed, couldn't find a reference. QatarStarsLeague (talk) 00:44, 21 April 2017 (UTC)
 * "Many were located in a region northeast of the tornado's circulation, which was both in the direction of travel of the tornado and in an area known as the "bear's cage." WP:SPS.
 * Link removed and citation added. QatarStarsLeague (talk) 00:48, 21 April 2017 (UTC)
 * "They are the first known tornado-related deaths of either recreational storm chasers or scientific researchers." Past tense.
 * Past now. QatarStarsLeague (talk) 00:51, 21 April 2017 (UTC)
 * Access dates aren't consistent.
 * I have addressed this point. Master of Time   ( talk ) 00:44, 24 April 2017 (UTC)