Talk:2013 Football League Championship play-off final/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 10:11, 9 May 2020 (UTC)

Will be reviewing this article as part of the GAN Backlog Drive of April to May 2020. MWright96 (talk)
 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * Pass/Fail:

Lead

 * EFL Championship should be Football League Championship for this time period
 * Done. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 15:47, 9 May 2020 (UTC)
 * "It Palace's fourth win in five" - a word is missing here
 * Done. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 15:47, 9 May 2020 (UTC)
 * "Crystal Palace ended the next season in 11th place in the Premier League, while Watford finished the following season in the Championship 13th place." - repetition of the similar phrasing
 * Done. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 15:47, 9 May 2020 (UTC)

Route to the final

 * "The game ended goalless but Palace's top scorer Glenn Murray was injured" - what injury?
 * Done. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 15:47, 9 May 2020 (UTC)
 * "Palace went into the match having won once in their past eleven game" - typo; should be worded as games
 * Done. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 15:47, 9 May 2020 (UTC)
 * "without Murray who was replaced by Aaron Wilbraham who had scored once in his 25 appearances that season." - I think this portion of text could be changed a little?
 * Done. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 15:47, 9 May 2020 (UTC)
 * Wikilink Leicester City the first time it is mentioned in the prose
 * Done. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 15:47, 9 May 2020 (UTC)
 * "The hosts won the match 1–0 with a David Nugent header from a Anthony Knockaert free kick late in the match." - repetition of the word "match"
 * Done. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 15:47, 9 May 2020 (UTC)
 * Wikilink penalty to Penalty kick (association football) and corner to Corner kick
 * Done. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 15:47, 9 May 2020 (UTC)

Background

 * Wembley should be spelt out in full and wikilinked on the first mention
 * Done. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 15:47, 9 May 2020 (UTC)
 * Wikilink transfer window
 * Done. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 15:47, 9 May 2020 (UTC)

First half

 * Wikilink free kick to the relevant article
 * Linked earlier. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 15:47, 9 May 2020 (UTC)
 * "went down injured in the 15th minute" - what was the injury?
 * Calf, done. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 15:47, 9 May 2020 (UTC)
 * "who delayed too long" - delayed too long in doing?
 * Reworded. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 15:47, 9 May 2020 (UTC)

Second half

 * "in the Palace goal." - Palace goal area.?
 * No, this is fine in Brit Eng, he was "in goal". The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 15:47, 9 May 2020 (UTC)
 * "a cross from Zaha was headed across goal" - think there are some words missing here
 * It makes sense to me, but I've added "back" to see if that makes it clearer. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 15:47, 9 May 2020 (UTC)

Extra time

 * "a free kick from Abdi from 25 yards" - use the convert template here?
 * Done. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 15:47, 9 May 2020 (UTC)
 * "Two corners for Watford came to nothing and the referee blew" - think it would be better to clarify that it was a whistle that the referee blew to end the match
 * Done. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 15:47, 9 May 2020 (UTC)