Talk:2013 Macau Grand Prix/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Courcelles (talk · contribs) 20:33, 2 May 2018 (UTC)

Starting the review. Courcelles (talk) 20:33, 2 May 2018 (UTC)


 * "with these drivers given priority in receiving an invitation to the meeting." With whom getting priority?  The prior sentence says that drivers must compete in certain series to be able to be invited...
 * "so the highest-placed German series participant at Macau was John Bryant-Meisner." What was his German F3 rank?
 * "The 2013 Macau Grand Prix was the 60th running of the event and the 31st time the race was held to Formula Three regulations." needs sourcing.
 * "King the highest-placed rookie" Source for him being a rookie somewhere, please?
 * "The qualifying race to set the grid order for the main race started at 14:00 Macau Standard Time (UTC+08:00)." On Saturday?
 * Check phrasing in "Rosenqvist made a fast getaway and took the lead only for Lynn to slipstream up behind the latter and pass him" Not sure latter is what you mean here.
 * "after losing fraction in his tyres" What does "fraction" mean in this context?  (Or is it a typo for traction?)
 * "ason was black-flagged as he opted to continue racing and not take his penalty." That meaning what?  Also, source?
 * "Giovinazzi battled Gelael for seventeenth with ended in Giovinazzi's favour." With is not the word you want.
 * "The race began at 15:30 local time." On Sunday now, right?
 * "Mandarin Oriental Bend" or "Mandarin Oriental bend". Not sure which is right myself, but pick one.

Other than that, great work! Courcelles (talk) 20:57, 2 May 2018 (UTC)
 * I have made the suggested edits and I hope that your queries have been addressed adequately. MWright96 (talk) 07:28, 3 May 2018 (UTC)
 * Good word as always, promoting. Courcelles (talk) 13:24, 3 May 2018 (UTC)