Talk:2013 Paris–Nice/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 08:19, 29 August 2016 (UTC)

Will review. MWright96 (talk) 08:19, 29 August 2016 (UTC)
 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:

Teams

 * "Among the 184-rider start list was only one previous winner of the race, with 2000 race winner" - reptition of winner

Prologue

 * Wikilink roleurs

Stage 1

 * The last part of the first paragraph is not cited
 * "made the early breakaway from the field, and managed to e* xtend their advantage to the main field" - reptition of the word field
 * "an increase of pace in the peloton caused it to split apart," - I know what it split apart means but separate would be better

Stage 2

 * "and the rest." would be better as and the rest of the field

Stage 3

 * "The climb itself was seen as the pivotal point of the day's action, whether the sprinters could stay with the main field before the descent back into Brioude." - needs a reference

Stage 5

 * "mainly second-category and third-category climbs compared to the first-category finishing climb" - better mainly second and third-category climbs compared to the first-category finishing climb
 * "some nine minutes in arrears of the overnight leader Garmin–Sharp's Andrew Talansky." - some nine minutes behind the overnight leader Garmin-Sharp's Andrew Talansky

Stage 6

 * The last part of this section's first paragragh needs a citation
 * "With 64 points, Tschopp held a 40-point lead over Argos–Shimano's Thierry Hupond, with only ten points left to be taken at the finish of the following day's individual time trial at Col d'Èze." - ditto

Stage 7

 * "Evaldas Šiškevičius of the Sojasun team was next to hold top spot," - first place
 * "Indeed, Quintana's time" - remove Indeed