Talk:2013 Sepang GP2 Series round/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Kpgjhpjm (talk · contribs) 16:03, 2 September 2018 (UTC)

Lead

 * but He -> but he - H in lowercase'''
 * his startline advantage to the advantage
 * Typo in Coletti's name

Background

 * Medium was identified by yellow stripes and hard by orange - what about soft tyres and medium tyres were not mentioned in the previous line about tyre allocation.

Practice and Qualifying

 * Change driver who won the pole position to driver who won the pole position and his team and and Team's Championship to and Team's Championship respectively.
 * Team names in brackets are not required.
 * Remove the bracketed words after Sam Bird's name.
 * Remove the brackets after Fabio Leimar's name and write like this  Fabio Leimar of Racing Engineering.
 * Was the four seconds faster lap that Coletti set was that one minute 44.280 lap . ? If yes, ping me and I will tell the modifications.
 * Change the track's final sector to the final sector of the track
 * What is meant by Nasr usurped him ?
 * No need for the bracketed team names.

Feature Race

 * In slalom past the middle of Calado and Nasr, remove the words - the middle of
 * There is possibly a typo in Ericsson's name.
 * Why did the field slow into turn 9 ? If it was for braking, you could write braked into turn nine.
 * Didn't a yellow come out after either incident ?
 * and they retired after contact to and both of them retired after making contact with each other.
 * Change Coletti struggled with his soft compound tyres degrading to Colleti struggled as his soft tyres were degrading.
 * Move Leimar's pitting sentence after the sentence describing Abt's incident.
 * Why did Evans and Richelmi put themselves wide ?
 * Is the Dillmann swerving sentence and the Evans running wide sentence separate sentences . If yes, add a full stop between them.

Sprint race

 * The sentence describing Nasr having space can reworded to As a result, his teammate Nasr used the vacant spot left by his teammate Palmer to get ahead ...
 * There has been a repetation in the word ran.

Comments

 * That's all I have . Sorry for the long time this has taken . Kpg  jhp  jm  16:05, 7 September 2018 (UTC)
 * Thanks again for doing another review of an article I have expanded. As with the question about the yellow flags, no information is available in the sources to say there waved to warn drivers about the incident. MWright96 (talk) 16:51, 7 September 2018 (UTC)
 * Promoting . Kpg  jhp  jm  08:39, 8 September 2018 (UTC)