Talk:2014 Bahrain Grand Prix/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Zwerg Nase (talk · contribs) 13:54, 12 October 2017 (UTC)

Review will follow shortly. Zwerg Nase (talk) 13:54, 12 October 2017 (UTC)
 * I just realized that I completely forgot about this review... will give it very soon, so sorry! Zwerg Nase (talk) 10:08, 8 November 2017 (UTC)
 * Still haven't heard anything regarding this review. Is everything alright? I understand fully if real life commitments are taking priority. MWright96 (talk) 20:19, 24 November 2017 (UTC)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
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 * Same issue as the Monaco article with wording of tyre choice in quali section.
 * ✅ MWright96 (talk) 20:44, 26 November 2017 (UTC)
 * He went off into the corner's run-off area onto the exit kerbs.. - it is unclear who "he" is in this context.
 * That would be Daniel Ricciardo who made that error. MWright96 (talk) 20:44, 26 November 2017 (UTC)
 * Hülkenberg took advantage of Bottas sounds weird, I would recommend rephrasing that. He did not rape him after all...
 * Changed to Hülkenberg overtook Bottas
 * Having saved more fuel, he would have more horsepower available - I guess "he" is Rosberg, not Ricciardo??
 * Yes it was Rosberg. MWright96 (talk) 20:44, 26 November 2017 (UTC)
 * Ricciardo locked his tyres going into turn one and narrowly avoided impacting the Ferrari - which Ferrari?
 * Raikkonen's Ferrari. MWright96 (talk) 20:44, 26 November 2017 (UTC)
 * Maldonado was unable to react to Gutiérrez steering right into the first corner and hit his right-rear corner, rolling over twice in the air - this sounds like Maldonado rolled over, but it was Gutierrez
 * Have changed the wording of this statement. MWright96 (talk) 20:44, 26 November 2017 (UTC)
 * Pérez fended off a challenge from teammate Hülkenberg for third and defended from Vettel. Button fell to seventh after being passed by Vettel - the timeline seems off here. I would recommend just removing the second part of the first sentence which mentions Vettel, because it also sounds like Perez and not Hülkenberg was defending from him.
 * Removed. MWright96 (talk) 20:44, 26 November 2017 (UTC)
 * Ricciardo passed teammate Vettel for fourth - for fifth if I am not mistaken??
 * Ah yes, changed it MWright96 (talk) 20:44, 26 November 2017 (UTC)

As you can see, mainly some inconsistency in the race report prose need to be sorted out here. Great work so far! Zwerg Nase (talk) 19:48, 26 November 2017 (UTC)
 * I have implemented the changes that you have suggested and made some of my own edits to the prose. MWright96 (talk) 20:44, 26 November 2017 (UTC)
 * Looks good! I can promote this to GA. Sorry again for the huge delay and congrats! Zwerg Nase (talk) 20:59, 26 November 2017 (UTC)