Talk:2015 Africa Cup of Nations final/GA1

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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 13:52, 13 July 2021 (UTC)

Comments That's all I have for now. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!&#33;!&#33;) 13:45, 14 July 2021 (UTC)
 * "The game finished..." reiterate "The final finished..."
 * Done. &mdash; Amakuru (talk) 18:56, 14 July 2021 (UTC)
 * France24 - our article has a space in there.
 * Done (and italicised too, along with BBC Sport, CNN etc). &mdash; Amakuru (talk) 18:56, 14 July 2021 (UTC)
 * "Ivory Coast had the game's only shot on target on 12 minutes..." seems odd to go back chronologically...
 * Reordered. &mdash; Amakuru (talk) 18:56, 14 July 2021 (UTC)
 * "fourth kick" perhaps "fourth penalty kick" and link it.
 * Done. &mdash; Amakuru (talk) 18:56, 14 July 2021 (UTC)
 * "Coast the title..." I would include the final penalties score here too.
 * Done. &mdash; Amakuru (talk) 18:56, 14 July 2021 (UTC)
 * "of the tournament, ... The tournament" mildly repetitive.
 * Reworded a little. &mdash; Amakuru (talk) 18:56, 14 July 2021 (UTC)
 * "but CAF" explain/link CAF first time.
 * Done. &mdash; Amakuru (talk) 18:56, 14 July 2021 (UTC)
 * "They have previously..." had?
 * Done. &mdash; Amakuru (talk) 18:56, 14 July 2021 (UTC)
 * 1992 is overlinked.
 * Done, and also switched links to the finals, which seems more relevant. &mdash; Amakuru (talk) 18:56, 14 July 2021 (UTC)
 * Check it out, we have Group of death.
 * Well isn't that lovely. &mdash; Amakuru (talk) 18:56, 14 July 2021 (UTC)
 * "Their opening game..." Ghana's opening game...
 * Done. &mdash; Amakuru (talk) 18:56, 14 July 2021 (UTC)
 * Link corner.
 * Done. &mdash; Amakuru (talk) 18:56, 14 July 2021 (UTC)
 * Link foul.
 * Done. &mdash; Amakuru (talk) 18:56, 14 July 2021 (UTC)
 * Link substitute first time.
 * Done. &mdash; Amakuru (talk) 18:56, 14 July 2021 (UTC)
 * "game, Ghana faced Algeria. The game.." game/game, maybe switch one for match?
 * Done. &mdash; Amakuru (talk) 18:56, 14 July 2021 (UTC)
 * "Ghana who scored right" perhaps "took the lead" to avoid repeating "scored/scoring".
 * Done. &mdash; Amakuru (talk) 18:56, 14 July 2021 (UTC)
 * "by BBC Sport as" previous article italicised this.
 * Done. &mdash; Amakuru (talk) 18:56, 14 July 2021 (UTC)
 * Link referee.
 * Done. &mdash; Amakuru (talk) 18:56, 14 July 2021 (UTC)
 * "Guinea, who had not been able to play any home games" did you mention where this one was played?
 * Done. &mdash; Amakuru (talk) 22:45, 14 July 2021 (UTC)
 * Link sent off.
 * Done. &mdash; Amakuru (talk) 18:56, 14 July 2021 (UTC)
 * Keïta is missing his diacritic.
 * Sounds painful. &mdash; Amakuru (talk) 18:56, 14 July 2021 (UTC)
 * General: you don't include the location of most of the matches, why not?
 * Most of the sources, such as the BBC, didn't seem to mention the locations. I have now located separate sources for each game and added. &mdash; Amakuru (talk) 22:45, 14 July 2021 (UTC)
 * "game kicked off" attendance, ref?
 * Done. &mdash; Amakuru (talk) 22:57, 14 July 2021 (UTC)
 * "the wall" link to the gloss.
 * Done. &mdash; Amakuru (talk) 22:45, 14 July 2021 (UTC)
 * Use 's for The Guardian...
 * Done. &mdash; Amakuru (talk) 22:45, 14 July 2021 (UTC)
 * Ref 23 says "SMmth," is this a notable Alan Smith by the way?
 * I don't think so. I'm pretty sure it's not that guy who used to play for Arsenal, at any rate. &mdash; Amakuru (talk) 22:45, 14 July 2021 (UTC)
 * "long balls" maybe "long passes"
 * Done. &mdash; Amakuru (talk) 22:45, 14 July 2021 (UTC)
 * "first booking" link.
 * Done. &mdash; Amakuru (talk) 22:45, 14 July 2021 (UTC)
 * "off-ball" don't we normally call these "off-the-ball"?
 * Done. &mdash; Amakuru (talk) 22:45, 14 July 2021 (UTC)
 * Link penalty area.
 * Done. &mdash; Amakuru (talk) 22:45, 14 July 2021 (UTC)
 * "goalkeeper Wilfried Kanon," overlinked.
 * Done. &mdash; Amakuru (talk) 22:45, 14 July 2021 (UTC)
 * "combined on the right-hand side" I know what you mean but do all our readers?
 * Copyedited. &mdash; Amakuru (talk) 22:45, 14 July 2021 (UTC)
 * You link midfielder but I don't think I saw you link defender, goalkeeper, attacker etc.
 * Unlinked. &mdash; Amakuru (talk) 22:45, 14 July 2021 (UTC)
 * Five "chance" in one para, maybe mix it up a little.
 * Done. &mdash; Amakuru (talk) 22:45, 14 July 2021 (UTC)
 * Link cross (in the Ivory Coast route to the final section).
 * Done. &mdash; Amakuru (talk) 22:45, 14 July 2021 (UTC)
 * "penalty shoot-out. In their report of the game, BBC Sport said" both overlinked.
 * Done. &mdash; Amakuru (talk) 22:45, 14 July 2021 (UTC)
 * "to step up and" do we need that?
 * Removed. &mdash; Amakuru (talk) 22:45, 14 July 2021 (UTC)
 * France24, same as before.
 * Done. &mdash; Amakuru (talk) 22:45, 14 July 2021 (UTC)
 * "Afriyie Acquah was" overlinked.
 * Done. &mdash; Amakuru (talk) 22:45, 14 July 2021 (UTC)
 * That sentence is unreferenced.
 * Done. &mdash; Amakuru (talk) 22:57, 14 July 2021 (UTC)
 * Scorelines in ref titles should be en-dash, not hyphen.
 * Done. &mdash; Amakuru (talk) 22:45, 14 July 2021 (UTC)
 * Britannica is a work.
 * Done. &mdash; Amakuru (talk) 22:45, 14 July 2021 (UTC)
 * goal.com can be linked in ref 7.
 * Done. &mdash; Amakuru (talk) 22:45, 14 July 2021 (UTC)
 * Why isn't BBC Sport consistently formatted/linked?
 * Done. &mdash; Amakuru (talk) 22:45, 14 July 2021 (UTC)
 * Ref 14 - the -> The
 * Done. &mdash; Amakuru (talk) 22:45, 14 July 2021 (UTC)
 * Spaced hyphens should be en-dashes.
 * Done. &mdash; Amakuru (talk) 22:45, 14 July 2021 (UTC)
 * External link isn't 2015-specific.
 * Removed. It's a dead link. &mdash; Amakuru (talk) 22:45, 14 July 2021 (UTC)
 * I think I've looked at all these points now. Cheers &mdash; Amakuru (talk) 22:57, 14 July 2021 (UTC)
 * Nice work, I'm happy to promote. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!&#33;!&#33;) 12:00, 15 July 2021 (UTC)