Talk:2015 Belgian Grand Prix/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Z105space (talk · contribs) 17:00, 4 December 2015 (UTC)

I will be happy to review this article. Comments will appear soon. Z105space  (talk)  17:00, 4 December 2015 (UTC)

Background

 * There should be a mention of Pirelli being Formula One's sole tyre supplier.


 * "Constructors standings" - The world standings should be replace with championship which should be capitalised.

Regulation changes

 * Delink Daniel Ricciardo in this section as he is already linked in a another sentence in the main background sub-section.
 * Removed all repeat links (there were a couple more).

Lotus legal troubles

 * It would be helpful to explain who Bernie Ecclestone is to the general audience.

Free practice

 * "two 1.5-hour sessions on Friday and another one-hour session before qualifying on Saturday" - I feel the word 1.5-hour should be replaced by 90-minute.


 * "The session was stopped for ten minutes to repair the barriers." - Who repaired the barriers?


 * "separated by the Red Bulls" This should be amended to say "separated by the Red Bull drivers"/

Race

 * Wikilink is needed for Virtual Safety Car.


 * "a little less than two laps from the finish," - It's better remove the words "a little less".
 * ✅ Removed "a little".


 * "Unharmed by his teammate in second" - The word Unharmed needs to be reworded to Unchallenged.

Post-race

 * "Vettel received additional support from former driver David Coulthard" - Should be written "Vettel received additional support from Coulthard" and you should place the words former driver to the first mention of Coulthard in the post-race subsection.


 * "ahead of the two Manor Marussias" - this should say "ahead of the two Manor Marussia drivers".


 * "He also called for immediate action considering the Italian Grand Prix" -It would read better if the word "considering" was replaced with "for".
 * I feel that "considering" is warranted, since it gives a causal connection between the fact that Monza is a high speed track and the dangers of tyre blowups at that track.