Talk:2015 FIA GT World Cup/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Courcelles (talk · contribs) 20:24, 21 May 2018 (UTC)


 * I'll do this one tonight. Courcelles (talk) 20:24, 21 May 2018 (UTC)

Courcelles (talk) 18:43, 22 May 2018 (UTC)
 * "and was open to any make of car meeting GT3 rules" Do you perhaps mean model here?
 * For the inaugural running of the event, why do we have a defending champion?
 * "The motorsport organisation Stéphane Ratel Organisation (SRO)" Could need a reorganization to not say "organization" twice in five words.
 * "renew its contract with the FIA two years prior" Two years prior to what?
 * " Despite lapping at his pace in the early stages of the race," Lapping?  He wasn't lapped, so I'm not sure what you meant here.
 * "At midpoint in the race," At the midpoint, or "At the race's midpoint, I would think?
 * " latter's car lodged onto his left rear tyre." His is ambiguous here.
 * I made three small edits as I went, please check them.
 * Thanks for another review. Everything has been addressed. With your edits, they have improved the article. MWright96 (talk) 20:51, 22 May 2018 (UTC)
 * Promoting. Courcelles (talk) 21:03, 22 May 2018 (UTC)