Talk:2015 Vuelta a España/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Zwerg Nase (talk · contribs) 08:47, 30 September 2015 (UTC)

Glad to review this. Zwerg Nase (talk) 08:47, 30 September 2015 (UTC)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
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 * Pass/Fail:

An exquisitly written article on this year's Vuelta. I made several minor changes myself which leaves only minor things to do:
 * The the last paragraph of the lead, I feel the wording should be slightly changed. At the moment it sounds like Valverde won the classification on the last stage alone. Maybe better: was decided during?
 * Pre-race favorites: last paragraphs: I feel it is quite the generalized statement to assume that all sprinters were preparing for the WC.
 * Caption for the stage 11 photo: It might have been the most difficult stage, but that is not an objective statement.
 * Any chance for a source on the mountain points?

That's about it. Great work! I put it on hold for now. Zwerg Nase (talk) 19:58, 3 October 2015 (UTC)
 * Thanks, . How does that look? Relentlessly (talk) 20:51, 3 October 2015 (UTC)
 * Excellent! Another one off the list :) Congrats! Zwerg Nase (talk) 22:27, 3 October 2015 (UTC)