Talk:2016 Atlantic hurricane season/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Yellow Evan (talk · contribs) 00:01, 29 May 2017 (UTC)

Given I'm about to nominate a bunch of GAN's and we have some sort of backlog going, I'll knock this one out, given how shitty the 2016 WW is. YE Pacific Hurricane  00:01, 29 May 2017 (UTC)
 * "Furthermore, damage from Matthew is estimated to be at least US$15.1 billion" why mention USD when you do so above? YE Pacific Hurricane  00:01, 29 May 2017 (UTC)
 * Oops, didn't notice that--12george1 (talk) 01:48, 29 May 2017 (UTC)


 * "The first forecast for the year was issued by CSU on December 11, who anticipated that one of four different scenarios could occur.[16] " worth going into detail on this? YE Pacific Hurricane  00:01, 29 May 2017 (UTC)
 * I should, considering that they didn't actually make any numerical predictions--12george1 (talk) 01:48, 29 May 2017 (UTC)


 * " Most significantly, one of the strongest El Niño events recorded in history" mind delinking the link to the El Nino article? it's linked already in the previous section. YE Pacific Hurricane  00:01, 29 May 2017 (UTC)
 * Fixed--12george1 (talk) 01:48, 29 May 2017 (UTC)


 * " With 81 lives lost in Mexico during the passage of Earl, it was the deadliest in the country since 2005.[24]" Hurricane Manuel, which you promoted to GA, begs to differ. YE Pacific Hurricane  00:01, 29 May 2017 (UTC)
 * Oops. Yeah, deadliest Atlantic hurricane in Mexico since Stan--12george1 (talk) 01:48, 29 May 2017 (UTC)


 * "A weak area of low pressure developed over northwestern Cuba in association with a stationary front on January 6." link to stationary front here. YE Pacific Hurricane  00:01, 29 May 2017 (UTC)
 * Done--12george1 (talk) 01:48, 29 May 2017 (UTC)


 * "The presence of deeper convection and an eye on conventional satellite showcased the storm's transition into a fully tropical cyclone and intensification into a hurricane by 06:00 UTC on January 14." link to eye (cyclone). Also ET storms have an eye and deep convection sometimes, so for starters, at least clarify the convection was near the center, a key feature for tropical cyclones. YE Pacific Hurricane  00:01, 29 May 2017 (UTC)
 * Done--12george1 (talk) 01:48, 29 May 2017 (UTC)


 * " Alex transitioned into an extratropical cyclone " link to extratropical cyclone (and delink extatropical transition in Colin's section. YE Pacific Hurricane  00:01, 29 May 2017 (UTC)
 * Done--12george1 (talk) 01:48, 29 May 2017 (UTC)


 * " After the low passed over the Yucatán Peninsula on June 5, the National Hurricane Center upgraded it to Tropical Depression Three." link to NHC and put the acronym in there. YE <sup style="color:#666660;">Pacific <sup style="color:#666660;">Hurricane  00:01, 29 May 2017 (UTC)
 * Done--12george1 (talk) 01:48, 29 May 2017 (UTC)


 * " However, a strong burst of convection increased the winds to 50 mph (85 km/h). " a strong burst of convection doesn't automatically increase the winds. I'd re-word to " However, the NHC increased increased the winds to 50 mph (85 km/h) following a strong burst in Colin's convection. " YE <sup style="color:#666660;">Pacific <sup style="color:#666660;">Hurricane  00:01, 29 May 2017 (UTC)
 * Done--12george1 (talk) 01:48, 29 May 2017 (UTC)


 * "A tropical storm warning was issued along the coast of Mexico from Laguna Verde to Rio Paranuco." link to tropical cyclone warnings and watches here. YE <sup style="color:#666660;">Pacific <sup style="color:#666660;">Hurricane  00:01, 29 May 2017 (UTC)
 * Done--12george1 (talk) 01:48, 29 May 2017 (UTC)


 * "an ASCAT pass indicated" expain and/or link what ASCAT is for the layman :P YE <sup style="color:#666660;">Pacific <sup style="color:#666660;">Hurricane  00:01, 29 May 2017 (UTC)
 * Done--12george1 (talk) 01:48, 29 May 2017 (UTC)


 * "About 24 hours later, the storm deepened to a Category 3 hurricane, " mind noting SSHWS in here? YE <sup style="color:#666660;">Pacific <sup style="color:#666660;">Hurricane  00:01, 29 May 2017 (UTC)
 * Done--12george1 (talk) 01:48, 29 May 2017 (UTC)


 * ". This was later upgraded to a warning with the addition of including the Pamlico Sound. " why is tropical storm warning inked here of all places? YE <sup style="color:#666660;">Pacific <sup style="color:#666660;">Hurricane  00:01, 29 May 2017 (UTC)
 * Because someone thought having an article for the TD was a good idea and I forgot to delink that :P--12george1 (talk) 01:48, 29 May 2017 (UTC)


 * "but briefly restrengthened on September 24." missing a subject. YE <sup style="color:#666660;">Pacific <sup style="color:#666660;">Hurricane  00:01, 29 May 2017 (UTC)
 * Done--12george1 (talk) 01:48, 29 May 2017 (UTC)


 * "Overall, Matthew caused at least 603 deaths and about $15.1 billion in damage.[28][109][105][110]" order refs numerically. YE <sup style="color:#666660;">Pacific <sup style="color:#666660;">Hurricane  00:01, 29 May 2017 (UTC)
 * Done--12george1 (talk) 01:48, 29 May 2017 (UTC)


 * "About 5,600 ft (1,700 ) of power lines were damaged, causing power and water outages.[119] " units? YE <sup style="color:#666660;">Pacific <sup style="color:#666660;">Hurricane  00:01, 29 May 2017 (UTC)
 * Done--12george1 (talk) 01:48, 29 May 2017 (UTC)


 * "Other systems" why is this plural when there is just 1 system listed here? YE <sup style="color:#666660;">Pacific <sup style="color:#666660;">Hurricane  00:01, 29 May 2017 (UTC)
 * Done--12george1 (talk) 01:48, 29 May 2017 (UTC)


 * "On September 15, Météo-France began monitoring a cyclone in the Bay of Biscay that they claimed was subtropical, having apparently possessing an asymmetric wind field of tropical-storm force winds and a warm thermal core.[123][122]" order the refs numerically. YE <sup style="color:#666660;">Pacific <sup style="color:#666660;">Hurricane  00:01, 29 May 2017 (UTC)
 * Done--12george1 (talk) 01:48, 29 May 2017 (UTC)


 * "There are conflicting views on the classification of this storm. Météo-France, which is the official French national meteorology service, released a statement on September 15 claiming that the system was a subtropical cyclone – meaning it had characteristics of a tropical and extratropical cyclone.[127][128][129]" you alreay mention this above so it's redundant. YE <sup style="color:#666660;">Pacific <sup style="color:#666660;">Hurricane  00:01, 29 May 2017 (UTC)
 * Removed--12george1 (talk) 01:48, 29 May 2017 (UTC)

Otherwise, it's good. YE <sup style="color:#666660;">Pacific <sup style="color:#666660;">Hurricane  00:01, 29 May 2017 (UTC)
 * "as proven by surface analysis data from NOAA, which showed that the cyclone still had an occluded front connected to it – signs that usually indicate an extratropical cyclone.[130]" we can't source images. YE <sup style="color:#666660;">Pacific <sup style="color:#666660;">Hurricane  00:01, 29 May 2017 (UTC)