Talk:2016 Austrian Grand Prix/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 14:24, 10 August 2016 (UTC)

Will have a look at this. MWright96 (talk) 14:24, 10 August 2016 (UTC)
 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b ''([[WP:IMAGE RELEVANCE|appropriate
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b ''([[WP:IMAGE RELEVANCE|appropriate
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b ''([[WP:IMAGE RELEVANCE|appropriate

use]] with suitable captions)'':
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * Pass/Fail:


 * no dab links

Lead

 * "and marks the thirtieth running of the Austrian Grand Prix" - Marked since the race was held in the past
 * Remove the link to Austria in the prose and infobox

Championship

 * Wikilink both the Drivers' and Constructors' Championships

Circuit changes

 * Spell out the FIA in full

Free practice

 * "with Vettel and Kimi Räikkönen third and fourth respectively" - a comma is needed at the end of this sentence
 * Delink Max Verstappen since he's already link in the circuit changes sub-section
 * Link gravel trap to Run-off area
 * Link intermediate tyres to Rain tyre
 * Fernando Alonso is not linked

Qualifying

 * Delink Nico Hülkenberg, Romain Grosjean
 * Spell out Bottas as Valteeri Bottas since it is the first time he is mentioned and add a wikilink
 * Same for Felipe Massa

Race

 * All mentions of the word "pitted" should be "made a pit stop" to reduce motorsport jargon

Post-race

 * "Their head of motorsport," - I think director of motorsport would be better
 * Captialise constructors'
 * "on now 295 to 192 points." - swap the words "now" and "on"

Classification (Qualifying)

 * The fourth note has a citation needed tag