Talk:2016 Monaco Grand Prix/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 11:47, 4 August 2016 (UTC)

Reviewing this one as part of backlog drive. MWright96 (talk) 11:47, 4 August 2016 (UTC)
 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources):  (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b ''([[WP:IMAGE RELEVANCE|appropriate
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b ''([[WP:IMAGE RELEVANCE|appropriate
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b ''([[WP:IMAGE RELEVANCE|appropriate

use]] with suitable captions)'':
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
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Lead

 * Remove the second link to Formula One

Background

 * FIA should be spelt out in full since its mentioned once
 * Link Drivers' Championship to List of Formula One World Drivers' Champions
 * It would be appropriate to link Constructors' standings to List of Formula One World Constructors' Champions
 * Daniel Ricciardo is linked twice, remove the second link
 * All ✅

Free practice

 * "two ninety-minute practice and one sixty-minute session were held before qualifying on Saturday." - change to 90-minute and 60-minute
 * The way it is now is well within the regulations of WP:NUMNOTES.


 * "in order to minimize road-closure disruptions to local residents." - change to Minimise


 * Remove the Sebastian Vettel and Lewis Hamilton wikilinks
 * ✅ Removed all duplinks in the article

Qualifying

 * "all drivers except for the Force Indias went out on the ultrasoft tyres to set their first lap times." - can be either Force India cars or drivers


 * " it were the two Manors of Rio Haryanto and Pascal Wehrlein," - ditto


 * Delink Max Verstappen, Joylon Palmer, Jenson Button and Rio Haryanto as all four men are linked in the earlier Free Practice sub-section
 * Same for Felipe Massa, Valtteri Bottas, Kimi Räikkönen, Fernando Alonso, Romain Grosjean, and Williams

Race

 * All mentions of the word "pitted" should be "made a pit stop" to reduce motorsport slang


 * "for intermediates over the following laps." - intermediate tyres


 * "Another VSC period was called while both Saubers pitted to repair damages," - change to either Sauber cars or drivers


 * Remove the link to the 2008 race since its linked in the background sub-section

Post-race

 * Delink Toto Wolff as he is linked in the background sub-section
 * "since his slower pace was due to low temperatures in his tyres." - I believe rewording it low tyre temperatures would be better

That's what I found. On hold MWright96 (talk) 14:38, 4 August 2016 (UTC)
 * Thank you for your review! I believe it is all taken care of. Zwerg Nase (talk) 13:24, 5 August 2016 (UTC)
 * Yes it has. Promoted to GA class. MWright96 (talk) 13:45, 5 August 2016 (UTC)