Talk:2016 World Snooker Championship/GA2

GA Review
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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 21:31, 9 March 2020 (UTC)

Comments That's it on a first run. Cheers. The Rambling Man (Staying alive since 2005!) 13:31, 23 March 2020 (UTC)
 * "The event was the 40th year that the ..." -> "It was the 40th year that the..."
 * ✅ Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 17:17, 23 March 2020 (UTC)
 * "2015/2016 season" our article uses an en-dash not a slash.
 * ✅ Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 17:17, 23 March 2020 (UTC)
 * " falling to the Crucible curse, becoming" probably should be "and" rather than comma.
 * ✅ Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 17:17, 23 March 2020 (UTC)
 * Be consistent in the lead with the capitalisation of world championship.
 * ✅ Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 17:17, 23 March 2020 (UTC)
 * " below:[4][1][5]" numerical order.
 * ✅ Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 17:17, 23 March 2020 (UTC)
 * Link £ first time, don't wait until summary section.
 * It is linked the first time, it's a duplink. ✅ Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 17:17, 23 March 2020 (UTC)
 * " of the 2015/2016 season" see earlier comment.
 * ✅ Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 20:02, 23 March 2020 (UTC)
 * McGill and Robertson are unnecessarily disambiguated.
 * ✅ Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 20:02, 23 March 2020 (UTC)
 * "between 16–21 April, and played as best-of-19-frame matches" -> "between 16–21 April as best-of-19-frame matches"
 * ✅ Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 20:02, 23 March 2020 (UTC)
 * "to receive the Crucible curse" not sure about "receive", perhaps "be struck by" or "succumb to"
 * ✅ Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 20:02, 23 March 2020 (UTC)
 * " since 1980 that" -> "since the 1980 championship that"
 * ✅ Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 20:02, 23 March 2020 (UTC)
 * "between 21–25 April, played as best-of-25-frames" no need for "played" here.
 * ✅ Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 20:02, 23 March 2020 (UTC)
 * " between 26–27 April, played as best-of-25-frames" same.
 * ✅ Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 20:02, 23 March 2020 (UTC)
 * Higgins is unnecessarily disambiguated.
 * ✅ Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 20:02, 23 March 2020 (UTC)
 * "The semi-finals were played 28–30 April, as best-of-33-frame matches, played over four sessions" maybe some variety, e.g. "The semi-finals were played 28–30 April over four sessions as best-of-33-frame matches."?
 * ✅ Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 20:02, 23 March 2020 (UTC)
 * "The record was higher than the previous..." -> "It surpassed the previous..."
 * ✅ Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 20:02, 23 March 2020 (UTC)
 * 1994 UK Championship is unnecessarily disambiguated.
 * ✅ Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 20:02, 23 March 2020 (UTC)
 * You mention it being broadcast on CCTV-5, what about other global broadcasters such as the BBC, Eurosport or whoever?
 * That's supposed to be for the amount of viewers later. Moved Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 20:02, 23 March 2020 (UTC)
 * Shaun Murphy is unnecessarily disambiguated.
 * ✅ Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 20:02, 23 March 2020 (UTC)
 * "were 3 qualifying rounds" three.
 * ✅ Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 20:02, 23 March 2020 (UTC)
 * "The 7 winners/runners-up" seven.
 * ✅ Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 20:02, 23 March 2020 (UTC)
 * "The remaining 9 invitees" nine.
 * ✅ Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 20:02, 23 March 2020 (UTC)
 * "Players in bold denote match winners" you have this in the qualifying section but not the main results section.
 * ✅ Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 20:02, 23 March 2020 (UTC)
 * "Lü Chenwei " missing diacritic.
 * ✅ Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 20:02, 23 March 2020 (UTC)
 * " before.[87][62]" order.
 * ✅ Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 20:09, 23 March 2020 (UTC)
 * You have two different ways of referring to Akani, neither match our article title.
 * Looks like a page move. Done Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 20:02, 23 March 2020 (UTC)
 * Lee Walker is unnecessarily disambiguated.
 * ✅ Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 20:02, 23 March 2020 (UTC)
 * " tournament in 1969.[9] [10]" no spaces between refs.
 * ✅ Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 20:02, 23 March 2020 (UTC)
 * Check all refs are fully formatted, e.g. BBC refs should have publication dates, such as ref 49.
 * . Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 20:09, 23 March 2020 (UTC)
 * Right - I've done the above (still doing a little ref organising). Thanks for the review. Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski  (talk • contribs) 20:30, 23 March 2020 (UTC)
 * let me know when you're done. The Rambling Man (Staying alive since 2005!) 09:39, 25 March 2020 (UTC)
 * I have looked over the references, and filled out a few dates and authors. I also found one duplicate ref. epicgenius (talk) 21:35, 26 March 2020 (UTC)
 * Thanks for checking that one for me. It would have been a good couple days before I could have access to a PC to check it. Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 10:16, 27 March 2020 (UTC)
 * do you think you're done now? The Rambling Man (Staying alive since 2005!) 21:15, 27 March 2020 (UTC)


 * yes! Sorry, I think I covered all of the above points Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 17:53, 29 March 2020 (UTC)
 * All good. Cheers Lee, promoting. The Rambling Man (Staying alive since 2005!) 20:26, 1 April 2020 (UTC)