Talk:2017 Berlin ePrix/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Courcelles (talk · contribs) 22:42, 21 April 2018 (UTC)


 * "before a crowd of 24,000 people." in the lede; for race 1 or 2?
 * "in the a city's downtown district"
 * "and later understeered" Link the whole word, not just "understee"
 * "were fast to enable them progression" Were fast enough to...
 * "Rosenqvist required additional battery life to gain any attempt in going one lap longer than di Grassi before his pit stop " To gain any attempt?  I don't quite get this sentence.


 * Really, really good work. I'd never heard of this series, but was able to understand almost everything perfectly.  Courcelles (talk) 22:53, 21 April 2018 (UTC)
 * Thank you for the review. All of the points raised above have been addressed. MWright96 (talk) 06:27, 22 April 2018 (UTC)


 * Looks good, passing. Courcelles (talk) 14:24, 22 April 2018 (UTC)