Talk:2017 Catalan general strike/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Kingsif (talk · contribs) 03:43, 29 September 2019 (UTC)

I'll review this, comments will be here soon Kingsif (talk) 03:43, 29 September 2019 (UTC)

Style

 * Lead a bit too long for article length
 * The note on national unions doesn't need to be in brackets
 * 'Planning' would be better titled 'Background'
 * The sentence "Firefighters and the Catalan police served as supportive, improvised order at some protests" doesn't really make sense - improvising order?
 * "Seven Nation Army" should be styled like that ("Seven Nation Army"), not in italics - could also add that it's a song by the White Stripes
 * Some odd word usage (possibly from a direct translation of flowery language) that I've replaced with more common terms
 * Generally good - just the fixes mentioned above

Coverage

 * Lead also a bit too detailed - a lot of it could be moved to 'Planning'
 * Coverage suitable and well-managed
 * Pass

Illustration

 * Unusual top image (media), but it works
 * Good use of media
 * Pass

Neutrality

 * Fine
 * Pass

Verifiability

 * Sources look good, and are predominantly English
 * Pass

Stability

 * Been stable for over a year
 * Pass

Copyright

 * Media appropriately licensed
 * Check looks good
 * Pass

Overall

 * on hold A few style things and a sentence that doesn't make sense. Kingsif (talk) 18:47, 29 September 2019 (UTC)
 * Kingsif (talk) 22:23, 5 October 2019 (UTC)
 * Hi, appreciate the review! Believe I've addressed your above points in prose except for the national union parenthetical, which I kept as an aside. Let me know what you think and thanks for your time. czar  15:15, 6 October 2019 (UTC)
 * I find the lead still a bit too long, even with the wide montage - is there any way to remove one of the paragraphs? Kingsif (talk) 16:27, 6 October 2019 (UTC)
 * , done, though I think the lede is weaker for the loss of detail. czar  17:33, 6 October 2019 (UTC)
 * The lead is just an overview, and it still hits the main points - the article body is for all the detail, and I think it's now got a good balance! Kingsif (talk) 17:39, 6 October 2019 (UTC)
 * Symbol support vote.svg Well done