Talk:2017 FA Community Shield/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 19:02, 24 December 2017 (UTC)

Shall review. MWright96 (talk) 19:02, 24 December 2017 (UTC)
 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * Pass/Fail:

Lead

 * Delink McDonald's per MOS:BOLDAVOID

Background

 * "The FA brought the kick-off time an hour earlier" - brought forward
 * Put The Football Association's acryonyms in brackets after the first time it is mentioned

Pre-match

 * "he noted they had kept the spine of their team" - could you clarify what is meant by this phrase by rewording it to encyclopedic language?
 * "Conte confirmed Eden Hazard and Tiémoué Bakayoko were ruled out of the match with injuries and confirmed Victor Moses would play;" - repetition of confirmed

Team selection

 * "he officially took over responsibilities from John Terry in July." -the responsibility

Summary

 * The article would be better off if you wrote that the stadium observed a minute's silence for the Grenfell fire victims.
 * Not sure what you mean exactly by this. Lemonade51 (talk) 18:11, 26 December 2017 (UTC)
 * On second thought, disregard as I have just found out the meaning of moment of silence and it is the same as you have written in the article.


 * "The defender was taken off and replaced by Kolašinac," - mention the head injuries as you have done in the first image in the sub-section.
 * " when he went to ground in the penalty box after a challenge from Héctor Bellerín." - fell to the ground
 * "a late challenge by Pedro on resulted in the Chelsea attacker being shown a red card." - this sentence doesn't say who Pedro callenged on the Chelsea side that led to his red card.

Post-match

 * "describing victory as" - the victory