Talk:2017 FA Cup final/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Casliber (talk · contribs) 08:12, 21 March 2021 (UTC)

Taking a look now.....will make straightforward copyedits as I go and drop queries below...(keeps my mind off some really stupid matches....sigh) Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 08:12, 21 March 2021 (UTC)

Otherwise reads well and is comprehensive. On target....Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 08:42, 21 March 2021 (UTC)
 * Beginning of Arsenal ...ummm....."Arsenal" is mentioned 6 times in 6 successive sentences....try to reword at least a couple...?
 * Reduced. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!&#33;!&#33;) 09:22, 21 March 2021 (UTC)
 *  The match was also noted for Sutton United's reserve goalkeeper Wayne Shaw being investigated by the Football Association and Gambling Commission for eating a pie pitchside despite there being betting odds on him doing so - I don't follow this..am intrigued, maybe emphasis wrong or missing?
 * It was bonkers really, such an obvious flouting of the betting rules. I've tried a re-word, let me know what you think. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!&#33;!&#33;) 09:22, 21 March 2021 (UTC)
 * That makes sense now Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 11:19, 21 March 2021 (UTC)
 * Also have 3 "Arsenal" s in 3 final sentences...maybe reword one?
 * Hopefully reduced a bit. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!&#33;!&#33;) 09:22, 21 March 2021 (UTC)
 *  In the fourth round, they were drawn with Championship team Brentford at home. Chelsea won 4–0 with goals from Pedro, Willian, Branislav Ivanović and Batshuayi. - could tighten into one sentence I'd have thought...
 * Tweaked. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!&#33;!&#33;) 09:22, 21 March 2021 (UTC)
 * Alotta "Chelsea"s in the Chelsea section too....
 * Reduced, rejigged, hopefully to your satisfaction. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!&#33;!&#33;) 09:22, 21 March 2021 (UTC)
 * .... was then held to honour the victims of the Manchester attack - link "Manchester attack"
 * Manchester Arena bombing is linked two paras above, is it not clear that it's the same thing? The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!&#33;!&#33;) 09:22, 21 March 2021 (UTC)
 * .... Midway through the half, Chelsea's Hazard... - do we need to specify "Chelsea" here?
 * Not if you believe it to be clear enough. Removed. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!&#33;!&#33;) 09:22, 21 March 2021 (UTC)
 * cheers, all addressed I think. Spurs not having a good couple of months really, but probably still better supporting them than being a Tractor Boy.... The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!&#33;!&#33;) 09:22, 21 March 2021 (UTC)

Earwigs copyvio clear

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4. Reflects a neutral point of view?:
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5. Reasonably stable?
 * No edit wars, etc. (Vandalism does not count against GA):

6. Illustrated by images, when possible and appropriate?:
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