Talk:2017 Hong Kong ePrix/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Courcelles (talk · contribs) 21:19, 4 August 2018 (UTC)


 * Giving this one a read. Courcelles (talk) 21:19, 4 August 2018 (UTC)


 * "He held through the mandatory pit stop" Held what through?
 * "Mortara then battled Heidfeld in what he thought was for position but was told over the radio that this was not the case" Was Heidfeld already a lap down or something?
 * Both infoboxes say attendance 27,000. Are figures available for each race?  If not, those figures should be removed.
 * "Off the podium, Engel originally finished fourth but was penalised with a time penalty for overusing energy and dropped to 14th.[36] Thus Piquet finished fourth, Abt came fifth, Félix da Costa took sixth and Mortara was the highest-placed rookie in seventh.[31] Rosenqvist lost his eighth-place result after being adjudged to have overused power and dropped to 14th." How can they both be dropped into 14th?


 * Through race 1. Courcelles (talk) 00:11, 5 August 2018 (UTC)


 * "14th to ninth by the start of the fifth lap." Don't mix number formats in a sentence like this.
 * "Jani said that had been quite" it had?
 * Quality work, nothing but nitpicks here. Courcelles (talk) 05:11, 5 August 2018 (UTC)
 * My thanks for another review. Everything that has been raised has been actioned. MWright96 (talk) 07:41, 5 August 2018 (UTC)
 * Promoted to GA. Courcelles (talk) 07:58, 5 August 2018 (UTC)