Talk:2017 Khatauli train derailment

Improvements required in the article
While the incident has taken place recently and editors are adding new information every day, the article needs structural improvement. Cheers. Vignyanatalk 11:05, 22 August 2017 (UTC)
 * The introduction to the article is too short. It would be better if the section 'Accident' is included here as parts of both sections overlap. This will also eliminate overlinking as per WP:OLINK.
 * Under 'Reaction', the quote by the Prime Minister can be paraphrased as per QUOTEFARM.
 * I'm not sure if the section 'History' is relevant here. It outlines about other similar incidents rather than anything about the train or route involved in this accident.
 * The article states in the second line, "In India, train crashes are common"; Are there any supporting documents/articles for the same? India has a 164 year old Railway system & the fourth largest on the planet. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 106.51.232.124 (talk) 19:51, 24 August 2017 (UTC)
 * The map captions in the InfoBox are both the same - I believe one should say 'Location within India' 72.45.35.93 (talk) 12:43, 25 August 2017 (UTC)