Talk:2017 Westminster attack/Archive 2

Muslim Council of Britain
https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=2017_Westminster_attack&oldid=771668836 I am incredulous that there is a statement from the 'muslim council' on this wiki page when there has been nothing confirmed about the perpetrator(s) it reeks of soap boxing and, frankly, advertising. (or do they know something we do not?) I think it should be removed. I am certain that there are a lot of religious organizations that have issued statements, in the Uk and beyond. (the UK is an Anglican country is it not?)) I think this statement should be removed. What do others think?

Cheers - A Canadian Toker (talk) 21:30, 22 March 2017 (UTC)
 * - A Canadian Toker (talk) 21:33, 22 March 2017 (UTC)
 * It's WP:UNDUE for the time being. If the attacker is part of this group, then their response would not be UNDUE.  { MordeKyle }  &#9762; 22:01, 22 March 2017 (UTC)
 * It's not undue, given the spike in anti-muslim bile that happened on social media in the immediate aftermath, albeit that that's not yet mentioned in the article. Andy Mabbett ( Pigsonthewing ); Talk to Andy; Andy's edits 22:18, 22 March 2017 (UTC)
 * I agree with Andy. In the context of how attacks similar to this one are handled in the media and among some political circles, it is good to have the reaction of the "best known and most powerful" (per its Wikipedia page) Islamic organization in UK. --Osa osa 5 (talk) 22:32, 22 March 2017 (UTC)
 * I disagree. Then we need to add the reaction of every best known and powerful religious group in England, because I'm sure some of the victims were of those religions. This reaction is irrelevant.  { MordeKyle }  &#9762; 22:37, 22 March 2017 (UTC)
 * MordeKyle hit the nail on the head there^^ Totally unnecessary, purely speculative and, frankly, redundant. - A Canadian Toker (talk) 22:55, 22 March 2017 (UTC)
 * "In 2016 a survey done by Policy Exchange found that about 2% of British Muslims felt that MCB represented them.[10]"""" That is from the wiki page. So yeah, totally unnecessary to give them free advertising. - A Canadian Toker (talk) 23:00, 22 March 2017 (UTC)
 * I think we should add reactions from all major religions. I added a reaction from the World Jewish Congress, but it was removed as UNDUE. I wanted to add a reaction from the Pope but I haven't found one yet. My point is that all major religions will condemn this attack.Zigzig20s (talk) 23:08, 22 March 2017 (UTC)

That is a very good point...for not adding it. If it's a given that any major religion will condemn the attack, it thus is in no way exceptional and has little to no purpose on the page unless it's relevant for another reason. (E.g. if it is confirmed the attack was committed in the name of any particular religion, then yes, responses from major figures in that religion become relevant. If an attack is specifically committed against adherents to a particular religion, then yes, responses from that religion become relevant) AddWittyNameHere (talk) 23:20, 22 March 2017 (UTC)
 * All national (government) leaders will condemn this too. We include their reactions.Zigzig20s (talk) 23:23, 22 March 2017 (UTC)
 * Which I disagree with equally much unless their reactions are particularly relevant in some way, be it because the attack occurred in that country, because their citizens are among the victims, because the perp was from their country or in those cases where the reaction goes further than condemning and sending condolences (e.g. closing borders, sending help, sending troops, sending goods, etc.) AddWittyNameHere (talk) 23:28, 22 March 2017 (UTC)
 * Westminster attack, the target was a major political (and Democratic) institution, as such official organs (be it religious, governments) are relevant. Yaḥyā ‎ (talk) 02:15, 23 March 2017 (UTC)
 * As it is now, I think arbitrary Muslim Council of Britain statement is excluded, while under the current political situation, what some might qualify as less relevant reactions are included. There ought to be better justifications for such an exclusion. Yaḥyā ‎ (talk) 03:35, 23 March 2017 (UTC)
 * No reactions from any group, religious or otherwise, that is not directly involved should be added unless they are significantly more directly relevant than just condemning (or otherwise) the events. If you want to record what they said, then Wikiquote exists and can be linked in the appropriate section of this article. Thryduulf (talk) 23:32, 22 March 2017 (UTC)
 * ^This.  { MordeKyle }  &#9762; 00:07, 23 March 2017 (UTC)
 * If what is relevant is weighed by direct involvement and not just condemning, then you will need to delete the entire international reaction section. All reactions stated there are merely solidarity and sympathy comments. I tend to agree with how AddWittyNameHere and Andy phrased what is considered relevant in their above comments.--Osa osa 5 (talk) 02:49, 23 March 2017 (UTC)
 * Just to remind that this section was added to decide if the Muslim Council of Britain statement should be added. To put things in context this is what we have so far in the article: Scotland Yard police believe they know the identity of the attacker and believe he was inspired by "international terrorism"; however, the name of the suspect has not been released.[21] In such a context the statement of the Muslim Council of Britain would be one of the most relevant, key, important (or call it what you want) reaction. Both because it is an official organ within Britain and also because of the current international political situation that hardly anyone ignore. For me such an exclusion is simply arbitrary. Yaḥyā ‎ (talk) 03:55, 23 March 2017 (UTC)
 * It's not an official body. It's basically just an unrepresentative, squalid nuisance with a worrying history of extremist links.--Fahrenheit666 (talk) 04:28, 23 March 2017 (UTC)
 * It's the largest Muslim Organization in UK, your opinions on it's legitimacy are irrelevant here. My position that its exclusion is arbitrary and reveal a selection bias has yet to be addressed. Yaḥyā ‎ (talk) 04:49, 23 March 2017 (UTC)
 * I know it's the largest muslim organization in the UK. But that's not what you claimed before, is it? You said it's an official body, and it isn't. You seem desperate to have its views included, even though they're not particularly relevant. Maybe take a step back.--Fahrenheit666 (talk) 12:32, 23 March 2017 (UTC)
 * Discussion continued here.  — Preceding unsigned comment added by Yahya Talatin (talk • contribs) 00:22, 24 March 2017 (UTC)

How do you know the perpatrator is Muslim without a statement from the MET about who the suspect is? 90.194.115.50 (talk) 04:04, 23 March 2017 (UTC)
 * Irrelevant here given the current political situation! Yaḥyā ‎ (talk) 04:07, 23 March 2017 (UTC)
 * It's not exactly a hard one to guess, is it?--Fahrenheit666 (talk) 04:28, 23 March 2017 (UTC)
 * Just saying: Even if the guy was a Muslim, it's not "obvious" as you seem to imply. Just think of Anders Behring Breivik or the 2012 Aurora shooting. Heck, even the two Bostom bombers had more in common with a lone wolf like the Unabomber or school shooters than with Al Quaeda or ISIL. --2003:71:4E33:E510:FC1A:665C:E7A8:5408 (talk) 17:54, 23 March 2017 (UTC)

I've restored the reaction from MCB. We have a list of countries that have condemned the attack, why can't we do the same for domestic organizations? Muslim organizations are especially important since the suspect is accused of "Islamic extremism".VR talk  19:09, 23 March 2017 (UTC)
 * and others.. I have gone ahead and re-deleted the quote from that organization. As per their own wikipedia page they really only represent 2% of the Uks muslims. Definitely not an authoritative source. The only authoritative source for Muslims is the Prophet M. and he is dead now. Muslims do not have an equivalent to the Pope or Dalai Lama, etc. At any rate if we decide to include a 'muslim voice' I am positive we can find far more reliable and noteworthy a source than the MCB. As we all know anyone and their dog can make an NGO..... - A Canadian Toker (talk)
 * Please if you are going to justify such a deletion, come with something which isn't sitting on arbitrary parameters. The surveys from Policy Exchange‎ are not interpreted accordingly (not to mention that the think tank has overt aims (as per most of its publications) against Muslim institutions, and can't be considered as neutral. The council addresses partly the claimed poll here . The International Business Times covered the said survey . Your rational is similar to remove the Vatican statement under the pretext that a minority of Catholics feel that the institution represents them (contrast Catholic Joe or Bob lifestyle with what the Vatican endorse). And the claim that any authoritative source for Muslims is Prophet M. is absurd. No matter what one could come up, it's the largest organization inside UK, period. Yaḥyā ‎ (talk) 21:41, 23 March 2017 (UTC)
 * A Canadian Toker is right here. If the perp was part of a Mosque, a WP:DUE reaction would be from the Imam from that Mosque.  { MordeKyle }  &#9762; 19:42, 23 March 2017 (UTC)
 * There is more than one Imam, I have hard time understanding your rational. Official statements from the largest organization would suffice, because it aims to represent somehow an official position, an Imam can only speak on the behalf of his community (Mosque). Yaḥyā ‎ (talk) 21:44, 23 March 2017 (UTC)
 * The argument that only a statement from the "Prophet M" would suffice is, frankly, quite stupid. I don't mind adding a statement from another Muslim organization, if you really prefer. But given that "Islamic extremism" is listed as a motive, Wikipedia must present all views fairly. Removing it is an NPOV issue.VR talk  14:54, 24 March 2017 (UTC)


 * While this dispute is ongoing, I will add an NPOV template as well.VR talk  14:55, 24 March 2017 (UTC)
 * It is very clear that some of you do not actually know what the 'muslim council of Britain' is. To claim that my argument was that only a statement from the Prohpet would sufice is an oversimplification. I was stating that there is no 'one' spiritual leader of the muslim faith, and as a corollary there is no 'one' authoritative muslim/islamist organization. Recent polling in the UK suggests that only 2% of British muslims feel that the MCB represents their views. For us to put them on here and act like they are an authoritative 'muslim' voice is simply wrong. - A Canadian Toker (talk)
 * You should have written It is clear to me, because this is your opinion, you should not project your beliefs and make them truth. I have addressed the claimed poll by the Think Tank Policy Exchange‎ (and you have not even answered it) a lobbyist group which overtly mostly publish materials aimed at discrediting Islamic organizations (and it does not even hide it in its mandate). In the one hand the Council is requested to behave to represent the Muslims in UK, and when it does by for once (answering promptly and quickly to represent the Muslim population), this time around the statement is removed arbitrary by relying on some constructs which are build upon arbitrary parameters set fort by mostly one editor. Note that I have not edited name-space or reverted you, you have been the one who was bold enough to revert. Yaḥyā ‎ (talk) 21:16, 24 March 2017 (UTC)
 * Is English your native language? You're right it is clear to me, it is also clear what the MCB wiki page says: "In 2016 a survey done by Policy Exchange found that about 2% of British Muslims felt that MCB represented them.[10]" That means 98% of British muslims polled in this suvey disagree with the BCM (obv. it is a survey so they didn't ask every single muslim in the country). Yeah, okay, the poll might have an agenda, can you provide me with evidence supporting the notion that the MCB is anything more than a vapid lobbying group? I mean obviously I was super surprised to find out that the perpetrator was a 'muslim' but is the MCB really worth having on here? Is what they said really worth recording? meaningful? I appreciate that you didn't re add it but it is on the page again right now. I am going to delete it. I think it is abhorrent that we (wikipedians) are using this page to help give some fringe NGO free advertising - A Canadian Toker (talk) 11:09, 25 March 2017 (UTC)

Your reply (much like your comment about my English) is irrelevant and this irregardless of the group being a vapid lobbying group or not. You have discarded the comments left above and there is no point in bringing them back (because there is no evidence that you will even take them into consideration). Your repeated claim that this is a Fringe group by itself should suffice for anyone. In case that you would decide to make abstraction of the fact that I (and others) are disagreeing with you and read the above comments once more… but I wouldn't hold my breath on that since this has to do more with your approach to the subject (which I find problematic) than a content dispute. Consider this my last answer ! Yaḥyā ‎ (talk) 13:11, 25 March 2017 (UTC)

Redux
I readded this again yesterday, but it has again been removed. Why? Andy Mabbett ( Pigsonthewing ); Talk to Andy; Andy's edits 12:43, 25 March 2017 (UTC)
 * See discussion above^^^^ Basically the organization is not representative of british muslims despite their misnomer name. Really, see discussion above, if you don't get something about it tell me what it is and I can clarify it maybe?  Its like they are as noteworthy as the line a few futher down from where it was readded: "A group called "Muslims United for London" also raised over £16,000 to support victims and victims' families, releasing a statement saying, "The British Muslim community stands with the community during these difficult times..."    the British council of muslims is as nothing of a group as the group ' muslims united for london'. I don't think either need free advertising. Do you disagree? - A Canadian Toker (talk) 14:38, 25 March 2017 (UTC)
 * Added POV notice on the section redirecting here to talk the page - A Canadian Toker (talk) 14:46, 25 March 2017 (UTC)
 * What, in the current article, do you argue is PoV? Andy Mabbett ( Pigsonthewing ); Talk to Andy; Andy's edits 15:04, 25 March 2017 (UTC)
 * I read that section before restoring the quote. It does not answer my question. Andy Mabbett ( Pigsonthewing ); Talk to Andy; Andy's edits 15:04, 25 March 2017 (UTC)


 * I restored the brief line (not the long quote), before seeing this thread, the council is the nearest thing to an official, moderate Muslim voice and I don't think Policy Exchange's opinion counts for much if you look at their history of reporting on British Islam. I think the brief line is apt for reasons given by Andy Mabbett and others. Pincrete (talk) 15:14, 25 March 2017 (UTC)
 * So criticism of vapid ngo is invalid because it is by a vapid ngo? I would have imagined that Sadik Khan, as mayor of London and muslim (note I did not put this one in quotation marks) would be better to focus on. what do others think? - A Canadian Toker (talk) 15:24, 25 March 2017 (UTC)
 * Khan is the mayor of London who happens to be Muslim. He represents Londoners first, not Muslims. The MCB represents UK Muslims, that's its job. If you can come up with a different organization that you think is more representative of UK Muslims, I'm all ears.VR talk  15:30, 25 March 2017 (UTC)
 * "Shuja Shafi, head of the Muslim Council of Britain: ‘We’ve never claimed to speak for everyone’" - https://www.theguardian.com/world/2015/jan/30/shuja-shafi-head-muslim-council-britain-interview
 * "More than a dozen faith leaders – Muslims, Hindus, Christians, Sikhs and Jews – met officers at Scotland Yard..." https://www.theguardian.com/uk-news/2017/mar/23/uk-muslim-leaders-condemn-cowardly-london-attack
 * "nearest thing to an official, moderate Muslim voice" ^^^ To me, when I read that, I think it is words without meaning. Islam is not structured like that, to have one voice, the voice is at the community level (imam). To think that some random NGO speaks authoritatively for all british muslims is simply to be ignorant. To be ignorant of the NGO and the religion of islam. In my opinion, of course. I'm not from the UK, are any of you? - A Canadian Toker (talk) 15:41, 25 March 2017 (UTC)
 * I'm not from the UK, are any of you? Yes. But UK citizenship is not necessary. The WP pages confirm the description "best known and most powerful" voice of UK Muslims. Does it have any official status either within UK or Islam? No, but neither do many other 'religious' spokes-organisations within other religious communities. BTW, is the neutrality banner REALLY about this single line? Seems pretty POINTY to me, let's add Archbishop of Canterbury or Westminster if balance is required. Pincrete (talk) 16:03, 25 March 2017 (UTC)
 * Re: ‘We’ve never claimed to speak for everyone’, of course he doesn't, nor does the Archbishop of Canterbury speak for all Christians. So what! Pincrete (talk) 16:10, 25 March 2017 (UTC)
 * Readded the POV flag on that section of the article page. I would love for other editors to have an opportunity to give their views, if any. Cheers, - A Canadian Toker (talk) 18:06, 25 March 2017 (UTC)

Previous attacks
There seems to be some confusion about previous attacks. This one is the first one since Lee Rigby's murder in 2013 to have been deemed by the police to be an act of terrorism. The 2015 attack at Leytonstone wasn't a terrorist attack; the perpetrator was mentally ill, and he was tried for attempted murder, not terrorism. See. The 2016 Greenwich IED incident may also be related to mental illness, but in any case the accused perpetrator has also not been charged with an act of terrorism. Prioryman (talk) 11:58, 25 March 2017 (UTC)
 * As there is such confusion over the events, (and per BRD) we should retain the original and wording of "It was the most severe attack in London since the 7 July 2005 London bombings." That is an uncontested point of reference, while "the first terrorist attack in London since the murder of Lee Rigby in May 2013" is dubious. - The Bounder (talk) 12:01, 25 March 2017 (UTC)
 * No, there's no confusion. Neither Leytonstone or Greenwich have been treated as terrorist attacks; that's a fact. I think the onus is on you to demonstrate that they were. In the case of Leytonstone the police have said definitively that it was mental illness not terrorism. In the case of Greenwich, the accused perpetrator was arrested on suspicion of preparing terrorist acts but was not subsequently charged under the Terrorism Act . He'll be tried next month, incidentally. Prioryman (talk) 12:07, 25 March 2017 (UTC)
 * Just cos no terrorist charges were made in Greenwich, it doesn't mean it wasn't terrorism. I don't think we can draw a clean line between terrorism and mental illness.  Obviously, law enforcement will have to make judgements about the most appropriate charges, which is a different matter.  We could say "First attack in London identified by police as terrorism since 2005."  If we have a good source.  Why do we have to play Terrorism Top Trumps anyway?  Yaris678 (talk) 14:14, 25 March 2017 (UTC)
 * Re: Just cos no terrorist charges were made in Greenwich, it doesn't mean it wasn't terrorism. No but it certainly means that it's status as a 'terrorist attack', is at least both highly contested and not officially recognised by UK authorities, therefore it is WP:OR to imply that it WAS a 'terrorist attack'. I agree with Bounder that referring directly to 2005 attacks avoids any confusion or questionable assertions. Pincrete (talk) 14:50, 25 March 2017 (UTC)
 * Two points: first, it makes a significant difference whether it is the first attack in four years versus the first in one year, as that says something important about the frequency of such attacks and the success of the authorities in preventing them. That's why I included the point in the first place. Second, terrorism is a motive, not an action. The motive for an attack may not be terrorism (e.g. criminal activity or mental illness). Leytonstone was certainly mental illness, as the police confirmed, and as far as I know there's no suggestion in the media that Greenwich had any political motive. So we come back to my original point that the last confirmed attack in London was Woolwich in 2013. Prioryman (talk) 15:19, 25 March 2017 (UTC)
 * One other point, you'll note that this story by the Associated Press says that 13 plots have been foiled "in the past four years". Why four years? It's calculated, obviously, from the May 2013 attack. Prioryman (talk) 18:19, 25 March 2017 (UTC)
 * I was already wondering where AP got their figures, since British police only announce such matters when they have a 'prosecutable case', or when they wish to convince the public they are doing a good job, when of course no details are given. So how does AP know? Pincrete (talk) 18:44, 25 March 2017 (UTC)
 * Because the Met disclosed them in a press conference three weeks ago. Prioryman (talk) 18:49, 25 March 2017 (UTC)
 * Then it should be attributed to Rowley, it is, by its nature not a verifiable fact, since how do even police know whether a plot was viable, unless they prove it in court. Have you ever heard of a policeman who said "we stopped NO crimes yesterday, because we're useless"? Pincrete (talk) 19:31, 25 March 2017 (UTC)
 * I have attributed to Rowley.Pincrete (talk) 19:40, 25 March 2017 (UTC)

ISIS or ISIL? (or IS or Da'esh)
There has been some back and forth on the question of whether Islamic State of Iraq and the Levant is shortened to ISIS or ISIL. Are there any guidelines on which version is preferred? - The Bounder (talk) 17:25, 24 March 2017 (UTC)
 * I myself have been preferring "ISIL" on pages (even though I personally use "ISIS" or "Islamic State" because it's easier to say and slightly more common) -- because the people on the ISIL article's talk page couldn't agree to get it moved, and it makes sense to use their convention on all Wikipedia pages until that changes. No argument can be made for preference in British English (AFAIK all British media uses "ISIS" or "ISIL", except for the BBC which uses "so-called Islamic State" or "the Islamic State group"). --BurritoBazooka Talk Contribs  17:33, 24 March 2017 (UTC)
 * you may be interested in contributing to this discussion, judging by your contribution to the article. --BurritoBazooka Talk Contribs  17:52, 24 March 2017 (UTC)
 * I believe Wikipedia's standard is ISIL, considering the title of our article on it. ansh 666 18:13, 24 March 2017 (UTC)
 * Since ISIL is the shortform of the article's title it would make sense to use that. This is Paul (talk) 18:16, 24 March 2017 (UTC)
 * I believe the closest thing to applicable guidance would be MOS:IDENTITY, although it doesn't really conclusively decide the issue. I would say WP:COMMONSENSE probably dictates that we follow the convention set by the main article where feasible, since if ISIL meets the standard of WP:COMMONNAME for the purposes of an article title, then it also probably meets the standard of MOS:IDENTITY. Timothy Joseph Wood  18:27, 24 March 2017 (UTC)
 * I think that, per WP:ENGVAR, we should use the term most commonly used in UK sources, regardless of usage in other Wikipedia articles. -- de Facto (talk). 18:30, 24 March 2017 (UTC)
 * None of these terms are in overwhelming use in the UK, over the others. The government uses Daesh ( https://www.gov.uk/government/news/beginning-of-the-end-for-daesh-as-coalition-opens-second-front ), BBC uses "so-called IS" ( https://www.quora.com/What-logic-is-behind-some-news-outlets-referring-to-ISIS-as-the-so-called-Islamic-State ), Independent and Telegraph uses "Isil" and "Isis" respectively ( http://www.telegraph.co.uk/news/2016/11/28/islamic-state-retreat-reveals-terror-plots-against-europe/ http://www.independent.co.uk/news/uk/home-news/khalid-masood-new-picture-met-police-london-terror-attack-adrian-russell-ajao-elms-westminster-a7648351.html ), The Sun and Daily Mail use "ISIS" ( https://www.thesun.co.uk/news/3172478/isis-london-attack-westminster-khalid-masood-terrorist/ http://www.dailymail.co.uk/news/article-4345016/London-terror-Kent-boy-Adrian-terorrist-Khalid.html ), Guardian uses "Isis" ( https://www.theguardian.com/uk-news/2017/mar/23/no-surprise-that-london-attacker-was-born-in-uk ). --BurritoBazooka Talk Contribs  18:53, 24 March 2017 (UTC)
 * Since, per the template at the top of Talk:Islamic State of Iraq and the Levant, there have been about forty discussion about this, and they settled on ISIL, I think we're probably pretty good doing the same. Timothy Joseph Wood  18:58, 24 March 2017 (UTC)
 * As there is no ENGVAR twist to this, should we keep consistent with the main article and go with ISIL? – The Bounder (talk) 19:09, 24 March 2017 (UTC)
 * I've done that. InedibleHulk (talk) 19:35, 24 March 2017 (UTC)


 * an unscientific Google search of *.co.uk websites, comparing the combination of "ISIS" and "terrorism" with "ISIL" and "terrorism" reveals 277,000 hits with ISIS and 36,800 hits with ISIL, they're not even close. Let's see if anyone has any thoughts on how best to compare the British usage of the two terms before we try to decide which is the more prevalent and perhaps more appropriate to use here. -- de Facto (talk). 21:16, 24 March 2017 (UTC)
 * if I were to try and compare, I would limit the results' dates to after 2013 or 2014 (when ISIS last changed its name), but then Google doesn't display the number of results :(. I'd do this because ISIS has some homonyms and Google searches are not case sensitive. [edit: also I'd pick the "Verbatim" option, otherwise Google tries to be intuitive and searches for synonyms, even when "using quotes"] So something like: "ISIS" terrorism site:*.uk. The same arguments have been used to try and get the ISIL article moved. So ENGVAR doesn't strongly apply if this method is used as evidence, IMO. --BurritoBazooka Talk Contribs  21:22, 24 March 2017 (UTC)
 * Also, Wikipedia policy like WP:ENGVAR and WP:MOS are actually informed by the manuals of style of major publications, rather than public usage directly. --BurritoBazooka Talk Contribs  21:26, 24 March 2017 (UTC)


 * Google's estimates aren't just unscientific, but shady enough to pass as magic. Of those alleged 36,800 results, it only shows 290, despite claiming the ability to show 1,000 (or 380 of the 277,000). Of those, many are verbatim copies of each other. For all we know, the hidden 36,510 (99%) could be exclusively Wikipedia mirrors. Or simply not exist. InedibleHulk (talk) 21:51, 24 March 2017 (UTC)


 * How about cutting it halfway then, and going with "Islamic State" and "IS"? That way we would comply with the advice given in MOS:COMMONALITY too. -- de Facto (talk). 22:02, 24 March 2017 (UTC)
 * That might work. We could also cut it all the way. By any name, the group appears to have had nothing to do with this. InedibleHulk (talk) 22:09, 24 March 2017 (UTC)

If you believe ISIS or IS is better, feel free to propose a rename on Talk:Islamic State of Iraq and the Levant, but until then, we should use "ISIL" for internal consistency. ansh 666 02:11, 25 March 2017 (UTC)
 * the name of any other article is not the issue here, the issue here is what is the best term for this article. I have no personal preference, other than that WP policies should be complied with; and they suggest to me that the most prevalent term in the British context should be used, or, as I mentioned above, going with "Islamic State" and "IS" following the advice given in MOS:COMMONALITY. -- de Facto (talk). 10:24, 25 March 2017 (UTC)
 * You're ignoring my point: the precedent for these is that we should have internal consistency within Wikipedia - hence the use of "ISIL" in the vast majority of articles which involve the group (see every single conflict in the ISIL infobox, for example, or the contents of Category:ISIL terrorist incidents in France, among others). And the standard for that consistency is the title of the article on that group, which is by consensus Islamic State of Iraq and the Levant. Hence, if the title of that article changes, all other articles which use it will need to change as well. ansh 666 18:59, 25 March 2017 (UTC)
 * I didn't ignore your point, I answered it - the name of any other article is not the issue here. There is no general requirement for terminology consistency across articles in Wikipedia (although MOS may prefer certain terms for certain things), as far as I know, only within articles. Consensus here can choose whatever term they want, without having to change the content of any other article. Similarly, consensus in another article does not necessarily have any influence in this article, or any other. Even if the consensus you mention was changed, and the name of that article changed, it would have no bearing on any other article - unless consensus in each of those articles changed too. Or can you quote a Wikipedia policy saying otherwise? -- de Facto (talk). 20:46, 25 March 2017 (UTC)
 * Then why does literally every article about the group use "ISIL"? ansh 666 20:49, 25 March 2017 (UTC)
 * I haven't looked at every article, so I don't know whether they all do, or not. If they do, I do not know why - do you? -- de Facto (talk). 21:20, 25 March 2017 (UTC)
 * I already laid out why they do! Consistency may not be a policy or guideline, but WP:IAR (WP:COMMONSENSE) is, and maintaining internal consistency for naming a group that is known by too many names to have a common usage is certainly common sense. ansh 666 23:51, 25 March 2017 (UTC)

The easiest solution is to use Da'esh since it can't be confused with a goddess, is fairly well used, and doesn't sound weird like ISIL does; it also matches the untranslated way we treat al-Qaeda / etc. -- 70.51.200.162 (talk) 05:41, 25 March 2017 (UTC)

Is the event a "massacre"?
Could I have further opinions on whether this event should be included in List of massacres in Great Britain? I don't see how it fits. Valenciano (talk) 06:01, 26 March 2017 (UTC)
 * The inclusion criteria for that list seems to be, events "commonly called massacres". So if enough sources label this as a massacre, that is one way to know. I would personally call it a massacre, because it is indiscriminate, it targets a community rather than individuals. But since the definition is so vague, and the inclusion criteria needs to rely on something solid, I think it's better to rely on what sources call it. --BurritoBazooka Talk Contribs  11:34, 26 March 2017 (UTC)
 * Thanks for the reply. The concept of massacre is so vague and the majority of sources don't describe it as such that I don't see the point in including it, but that list lacks clear criteria anyway and would be best recast under a different title. Valenciano (talk) 11:38, 26 March 2017 (UTC)

Main photo caption
which "post-car action" do you think the main image shows? -- de Facto (talk). 08:52, 26 March 2017 (UTC)
 * The car crashed in a point visible in the picture, and the attack continued from that point. The caption you put was misleading, and the more general one that was there before covered the situation without introducing confusion. All the best, - The Bounder (talk) 08:56, 26 March 2017 (UTC)
 * The point where the car crashed is actually out of sight in that photo, and the second part of the attack took part by the gate on Parliament Square. -- de Facto (talk). 09:17, 26 March 2017 (UTC)
 * No, the point of the crash is in the shot. - The Bounder (talk) 15:39, 26 March 2017 (UTC)
 * no, it's well hidden behind the red bus or white van/truck in front and to the left of the cyclist, so out of sight, as I said. That's why I removed "main locations" from the caption, it doesn't show all of the pavement involved, the crash site or the Old Palace yard, so not the main locations at all, just part of one of them. Let's try to agree on a suitable wording to reflect that. How about: "Westminster Bridge, Bridge Street and the Palace of Westminster, showing part of the pavement where pedestrians were run over"? -- de Facto (talk). 17:18, 26 March 2017 (UTC)

Andrew Neil
Not sure if this has already been discussed, so apologies if it has. I'm just wondering if we should make brief mention of broadcaster Andrew Neil's opening address on BBC One's This Week. Most coveage of it seems to be in the tabloids, but I did find this coverage from The Telegraph. I was thinking of something like: "Opening the first edition of BBC One's current affairs programme This Week to air in the wake of the 2017 Westminster attack, presenter Andrew Neil launches a scathing attack against those who commit acts of terrorism, describing them as "jumped up jihadis", and saying that Britain will never be "cowed" or "defeated" by them." Any thoughts? This is Paul (talk) 16:31, 26 March 2017 (UTC)
 * I'd say not, personally. He is one journalist and was not representing any official body in what's was a personal statement by him. Others may disagree, but the question has to be asked, what makes an opinion by him so worth repeating in an encyclopaedia? – The Bounder (talk) 16:46, 26 March 2017 (UTC)
 * Agree whole-heartedly. Unless his comments are themselves the subject of controversy. The intros to that programme are often rhetorically provocative, devil's-advocate-ish. Pincrete (talk) 18:15, 26 March 2017 (UTC)

Car model (again)
I thought the initial confusion over the early mistaken reports of the car model was resolved now as there was no further discussion or challenge of my explanation of it in the original discussion (which has now been archived) and a later reference confirming it was supplied. Yet its inclusion is still being reverted (here and here). -- de Facto (talk). 09:04, 26 March 2017 (UTC)
 * I find this one of the least interesting points of the whole series of events (it really doesn't matter what the model was, and in a few months no-one will even care if it is a Hyundai, let alone the model), but your "explanation" was little more than WP:OR. Starting something with "it appears", is always a bit of a red flag: is there any reliable source that says what you wrote then? The consensus of the now-archived thread still stands (as I said in my edit summary) until replaced, and most of the major news sources haven't bothered clarifying this insignificant detail since the first reports. – The Bounder (talk)
 * I explained why some sources contradicted others and why the plain appearance of a Tucson in the reliably sourced photos could not be trumped by the clearly mistaken text. And yes, the sources are now reporting correctly . -- de Facto (talk). 09:23, 26 March 2017 (UTC)
 * I'll point out that the last of those refs states "either a Hyundai i40, ... or a Hyundai Tucson". I'm happier not coming down on one or other side when the sources still don't agree. At the end of the day it is such a trivial detail it's not something we need to overly stress ourselves on. – The Bounder (talk) 10:00, 26 March 2017 (UTC)
 * when the photos are so clear, and they all show a Tucson, none of them showing an i40, why are you still assuming the mistaken text overrides the content of the images, even in the same sources? If we were talking about an animal instead, and they all showed photos of a zebra, yet some labelled it as a giraffe, would you argue it might be a giraffe? -- de Facto (talk). 10:52, 26 March 2017 (UTC)

I see Prioryman has decided that, against the consensus agreed in this talk page, and the ongoing confusion in the media, he is going to edit war back in something that was not agreed. Great. – The Bounder (talk) 10:10, 26 March 2017 (UTC)
 * Sorry, I hadn't seen this latest discussion. I've been looking at today's newspapers to see what the latest reports says. The initial sources didn't agree, but they do now; this morning's newspapers are (as DeFacto says) reporting correctly that it was a Hyundai Tucson. There's no need to perpetuate an initial inaccuracy when more up-to-date reporting is available. Prioryman (talk) 10:12, 26 March 2017 (UTC)
 * I agree that it is clearly and verifiably a Tucson. -- de Facto (talk). 10:57, 26 March 2017 (UTC)
 * Of course you do, but if you wish to ignore many of the sources to run with SYNTHESIS and OR, even on such a trivial point, that is up to you. - The Bounder (talk) 15:45, 26 March 2017 (UTC)
 * if we know that the information is incorrect, and verifiably so, then we should ignore it and use the correct information. I'll repeat the example I gave above: if we were talking about an animal instead, and the reliable sources showed photos of a zebra, yet some erroneously labelled it as a giraffe, would you argue it might be a giraffe, and accuse those who correctly wrote "zebra" in the article as running with "SYNTHESIS and OR"? The standard is that what we add must be verifiable, not that it necessarily agrees with all the sources out there. That the car was a Tucson was verifiable from day 1. Can you see that now? -- de Facto (talk). 17:27, 26 March 2017 (UTC)
 * This is nothing to do with zebras and giraffes. It's to do with two very similar models of car which the sources are still mixing up. Regardless, it is still one of the most insignificant details in the whole article. – The Bounder (talk) 17:59, 26 March 2017 (UTC)
 * The cars are different enough for more than one editor to have spotted the error from the start. We should not knowingly include erroneous information, or exclude verifiable correct information. I think we're done on this now though, so I'll leave it at that. -- de Facto (talk). 18:42, 26 March 2017 (UTC)


 * WP:ORIGINALRESEARCH and WP:SYNTHESIS. – The Bounder (talk) 18:47, 26 March 2017 (UTC)

The name of the article
Hello everyone, would not it be better to change the name of the article to «2017 London attack»? Since although there were few dead, 50 people were injured (a large number of people).

Only Londoners know what Wetsminster is, whereas foreigners (who are the majority) do not know what Wetsminster is, but they (the foreigners) know that it is London. After all, Westminster is located in London.

If there is any error in my message it is because I do not speak English.--Gustavo Parker (talk) 09:52, 27 March 2017 (UTC)


 * Please see Talk:2017 Westminster attack/Archive 1 where a few different options were examined and the current version was retained. All the best, The Bounder (talk) 10:07, 27 March 2017 (UTC)


 * Westminster is the place where this occurred. The assumption that other people in other countries may nor know of it does not mean the article should be renamed. London was not the target of the attack specifically, the Houses of Parliament and local people were, be this collateral damage or for terror the target was clearly Parliament. Thanks ツ Jenova 20  (email) 10:11, 27 March 2017 (UTC)

Whatsapp
https://betanews.com/2017/03/27/whatsapp-encryption-terrorists/

All the best: Rich Farmbrough, 12:50, 27 March 2017 (UTC).


 * Done. InedibleHulk (talk) 23:02, 27 March 2017 (UTC)

lede & type of armed police officer
There seems to be no need to give a detailed description in the lede of the type of armed police officer that shot the perpetrator, "proving" the point with a citation. That level of detail is given in the main text (a plain clothes officer responsible for the security of the Minister of Defence). That the attack lasted 82 seconds does seem relevant; it also gives the reader some idea of the speed of the response. After the attack, various statements have been made about changing the level of security on the "soft perimeter" of the Houses of Parliament, notably by Lord Blair. Mathsci (talk) 18:55, 27 March 2017 (UTC)


 * They type of officer is a necessity, as the were an armed officer. They were not a regular police officer, they were assigned to a special and specific unit, which is allowed to be routinely armed. Police in the UK are not routinely armed, and stating "an armed police officer" gives off an impression that police in the UK are armed. For clarity it need to be distinguished that this special type of police officer was armed. Sport and politics (talk) 19:13, 27 March 2017 (UTC)
 * On the contrary: saying "an armed police officer" makes the distinction between the officer involved and the run of the mill "bobby-on-the-beat". If police were routinely armed then stating that this particular officer was armed would make no sense. IdreamofJeanie (talk) 19:25, 27 March 2017 (UTC)
 * I agree with Mathsci and IdreamofJeanie on this: "armed police officer" clarifies that it's not a bobby on the beat. (And alas 'Police in the UK are not routinely armed' is becoming less routine, particularly for those of us living in London: an increasing number are routinely armed in the course of their duty). – The Bounder (talk) 22:17, 27 March 2017 (UTC)


 * I'm the one who is guilty of leaving the linked 'type of policeman' and refs, largely because it originally gave all the detail about him being Fallon's close protection officer, which I thought was definitely unnec. And, even more grotesqely (to a UK person), it had linked 'close protection officer' to bodyguard, where there is all sorts of info about how stars are protected. I thought that at least we should link to the right kind of 'UK close protection officer'. I think it is necessary to state 'armed' but have no strong feelings about the necessity of stating his specific 'unit'. I looked for, but couldn't find, a general 'when are police armed in the UK' article. Pincrete (talk) 22:32, 27 March 2017 (UTC)

Strangely worded edit
Since I've undone your change, I wanted to discuss it further here. I don't quite understand how someone's personal motivations could be proven to be "linked to" a terrorist organization unless a manifesto of some sort was found (or of course unless there was some sort of obvious communications link... but that's what the sentence already said). <small style="color:#999;white-space:nowrap;text-shadow:lightgrey 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">&mdash; <big style="color:#ffa439">Coffee //  have a ☕️ //  beans  // 07:15, 28 March 2017 (UTC)
 * I didn't mean (and don't think I said) anything about motives being linked to terrorist groups. Just that no motives or links to terrorist groups were discovered. No non-terrorist accomplices, either. Simpler to just say he acted alone for reasons unknown. InedibleHulk (talk) 01:08, 29 March 2017 (UTC)


 * Looking again, I see I may have appeared to say no motives or accomplices were found "between" Masood and the terrorist groups. The way I'd read it, though, the "between" bit only applies to the last thing (links). Lists are troublesome like that. InedibleHulk (talk) 02:28, 29 March 2017 (UTC)

Looks bad
Yes, looks bad, doesn't it? No fewer than eight references lined up against the second word in the article. Obviously a person, or persons, trying to make a point here, and doing it stupidly. 141.6.11.22 (talk) 09:18, 28 March 2017 (UTC)
 * I agree. It's down to seven, but it should still be only one or two (at most) and moved elsewhere. It was, as you say, POINTily done. - The Bounder (talk) 09:48, 28 March 2017 (UTC)
 * This has presumably only happened due to the aversion of some to the T-word. Nick Cooper (talk) 09:52, 28 March 2017 (UTC)
 * See, where a consensus has been disrupted by one individual edit warring to force their point in. I don't want to get sucked back into the discussion, but there are ways and means of doing things, and his was not the best way at all. Regardless of the rights and wrongs of the use of the word "terrorist", the seven refs after the opening two words are utterly ridiculous. - The Bounder (talk) 09:58, 28 March 2017 (UTC)
 * I've trimmed the silliness back to two and moved them to a more suitable place, but whether citations should be in the lede is another matter (let alone have been in there because one editor has edit warred to get his own way). - The Bounder (talk) 11:23, 28 March 2017 (UTC)

Victims table
Is there a way to make text wrap around the table to reduce white space, or is wrapped text not preferred? --- Another Believer ( Talk ) 22:05, 22 March 2017 (UTC)
 * Do we need it? It looks poor and it could easily be replaced by simple text. – The Bounder (talk) 22:07, 22 March 2017 (UTC)
 * I don't mind the table, but the white space is obnoxious. --- Another Believer ( Talk ) 22:08, 22 March 2017 (UTC)
 * I don't think the table is necessary really. It can be explained in the prose quite easily. <b style="border:2px solid; color: #17B6F9; background: #305577"> { MordeKyle } </b> <b style="border:2px solid; color: #B8A553; background: #727579">&#9762;</b> 22:09, 22 March 2017 (UTC)
 * Other than this huge table or plain text, an alternative option would be to use a justified table to the side of the running prose, along the lines of what is done in Malaysia Airlines Flight 17. AddWittyNameHere (talk) 22:13, 22 March 2017 (UTC)
 * That looks way better. <b style="border:2px solid; color: #17B6F9; background: #305577"> { MordeKyle } </b> <b style="border:2px solid; color: #B8A553; background: #727579">&#9762;</b> 22:14, 22 March 2017 (UTC)
 * Agreed. I find the text in this example a bit small, but this is what I had in mind in terms of being right justified with wrapped text. --- Another Believer ( Talk ) 22:16, 22 March 2017 (UTC)
 * It does look odd, I tried to look at it earlier but I honestly have no idea about these tables. It would be great if it was at least wrapped with the text but I agree it can probably just be said in a few sentences anyway. - A Canadian Toker (talk) 22:18, 22 March 2017 (UTC)
 * I made a change, what do you guys think? <b style="border:2px solid; color: #17B6F9; background: #305577"> { MordeKyle } </b> <b style="border:2px solid; color: #B8A553; background: #727579">&#9762;</b> 22:22, 22 March 2017 (UTC)

Mostly looks good. Maybe increase the font-size slightly, but otherwise definitely an improvement. AddWittyNameHere (talk) 22:23, 22 March 2017 (UTC)
 * I'll let others debate whether or not the table should be included, but yes, this table looks much better than before and reflects what I had in mind. Thanks for making the change. --- Another Believer ( Talk ) 22:23, 22 March 2017 (UTC)
 * I made the font size 90%. --- Another Believer ( Talk ) 22:24, 22 March 2017 (UTC)
 * I'm not sure exactly what is included in the numbers so far, but we may need to clarify those in hidden comments in the table. Also, since it is a table of victims, do not include the shooter as a victim. <b style="border:2px solid; color: #17B6F9; background: #305577"> { MordeKyle } </b> <b style="border:2px solid; color: #B8A553; background: #727579">&#9762;</b> 22:25, 22 March 2017 (UTC)
 * Or if the shooter is to be included, then it should at least have a footnote added stating the perp is included. Further clarification of what is included probably is a good idea, especially as different sources may conflict or at least not all be equally up-to-date. AddWittyNameHere (talk) 22:28, 22 March 2017 (UTC)
 * ^^ Looks great now, thank you for cleaning it up. If we need the inforbox it should be as unobtrusive as possible, which it now is. - A Canadian Toker (talk) 22:56, 22 March 2017 (UTC)

The article prose consistently reports 4 deaths but the victims table lists only three deaths. I'm presuming that the nationality of one of the deceased is not known? Thryduulf (talk) 12:01, 23 March 2017 (UTC)
 * , there are four deaths, one of which was the assailant; the table contains only details of victims, so it'll always be one short by that rationale. All the best, The Bounder (talk) 12:04, 23 March 2017 (UTC)
 * No. The perp is number four. I cannot see how the perp could be considered a victim. Someone added him to the table, but I removed it as being incoherent, and It's not something we deal with within victims' tables in any other article. --  Ohc  ¡digame! 12:06, 23 March 2017 (UTC)
 * In which case there should be a note saying that the perpetrator is not included, although preferably I don't think we should make that distinction and it should list all the deaths. I'd be OK with a footnote saying it includes the perpetrator though. Thryduulf (talk) 12:09, 23 March 2017 (UTC)
 * Looks like we were thinking the same thing; I added such a note. I'd also be fine with including and adding a note that is the case, but in either case we should prevent confusion. AddWittyNameHere (talk) 12:10, 23 March 2017 (UTC)
 * And reverted by within minutes. WWGB, there clearly is confusion over this&mdash;if one editor comes to the talkpage to ask, there usually are several more readers who don't say a thing but are equally confused. Any chance you'd be willing to self-revert or maybe propose a different idea to reduce confusion? AddWittyNameHere (talk) 12:13, 23 March 2017 (UTC)
 * A perp can never be a victim and does not need explanation of absence. WWGB (talk) 12:19, 23 March 2017 (UTC)
 * It looks like there may be a consensus that the table as it currently stands is confusing. Do you have any suggestions to help clarify that problem? - The Bounder (talk) 12:23, 23 March 2017 (UTC)
 * Ah well, I tried to change the section to "Deaths" to cover all, but this was also reverted with the staggeringly unhelpful and unenlightening summary of "nope"... Welcome back to the confusion zone. - The Bounder (talk) 12:29, 23 March 2017 (UTC)
 * That edit summary was wildly inappropriate. A perpetrator who gets killed in their own attack is a victim whether you like it or not. I can understand why some people may want to exclude them from the table, I disagree, but if the total number of dead in the table does not match the total number of dead in the prose it must be explained. There are five options that are appropriate here:
 * The table is titled "Deaths" and includes all deaths, with no note about the perpetrator
 * The table is titled "Deaths" and includes all deaths, with a note
 * The table is titled "Victims" and includes all deaths, with no note
 * The table is titled "Victims" and includes all deaths, with a note.
 * The table is titled "Victims" and excludes the perpetrator, with no note.
 * These are presented in my preferred order. Anything not listed is not acceptable to me. Thryduulf (talk) 12:56, 23 March 2017 (UTC)
 * Sadly, the problem is not limited to the table, see also the 'victims' section below. Similar back-and-forths have been occurring in the accompanying prose section and have previously occasionally strayed into lead as well. Table should not be titled "Deaths", because it also includes injuries. I know you said anything not listed is not acceptable to you, but could you make an exception for titling the table "Deaths and injuries"?AddWittyNameHere (talk) 12:59, 23 March 2017 (UTC)
 * Possibly change "deaths" to "casualties" to encompass the fact that the table (and the section) covers dead and injured? - The Bounder (talk) 13:01, 23 March 2017 (UTC)
 * Or that, yes, or whichever other form that covers both dead and injured. AddWittyNameHere (talk) 13:02, 23 March 2017 (UTC)
 * Sorry, I had failed to consider that the table also covers injured. Either "Casualties" or "Deaths and injuries" are OK, I prefer the latter but only because of personal biases. Thryduulf (talk) 13:14, 23 March 2017 (UTC)
 * Happens. Figured I'd better point it out now, though. My preference is for in- or exclusion, so long as there's a note or other form of preventing confusion. (Of the given options, that would be 2 & 4, I suppose, so long as 2 is adjusted per the above discussion. I'd also support titling the table victims, excluding the perp and a note, but that appears to not currently be on the table, no pun intended) Because reader confusion isn't something we want, but especially because editor confusion will probably just lead to a lot of (not-actually-)"corrections" and/or the same edit war being repeated again and again. Article is hard enough to keep in shape to start with. AddWittyNameHere (talk) 13:24, 23 March 2017 (UTC)
 * Option 1 with "Casualties", followed by option 1 with "Deaths and injuries". - The Bounder (talk) 13:48, 23 March 2017 (UTC)
 * According to the BBC there was a German victim also: http://www.bbc.co.uk/news/uk-39363933 The Victim/Perp front is a subjective one, the terror organisation behind the event could legitimately claim their perp was a victim of the police marksman, which wouldn't be unreasonable. I'd favour a generic Deaths or Fatalities to represent these stats, but as long as the perp status is clear I would go with the majority vote. Mongoosander (talk) 21:53, 23 March 2017 (UTC)

Number of injured
Now that one additional death has been announced, that PROBABLY means one less injured. I know from previous incidents how hard it is to keep an accurate table of nationality of injured and dead, since updated deaths are reported, updated injuries are not. Pincrete (talk) 00:22, 23 March 2017 (UTC)
 * How about just hedging and putting "about" or "~" in front of all instances of the number? ansh 666  07:51, 23 March 2017 (UTC)

Australia
It's included twice... Can someone with the the time to fix this do it? Thanks ツ Jenova 20  (email) 15:50, 23 March 2017 (UTC)
 * Done. Kablammo (talk) 15:55, 23 March 2017 (UTC)

Islamic extremism
In reference to this addition by me and this subsequent reversion (by )... followed by these messages left at the user's talk page (wherein proper sourcing seems to be provided): Do you all think this "suspected" motivation should be included or not? <small style="color:#999;white-space:nowrap;text-shadow:lightgrey 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">&mdash; <big style="color:#ffa439">Coffee //  have a cup  //  beans  // 02:43, 23 March 2017 (UTC)
 * Wait for confirmation – Potentially inflammatory addition without confirmation by proper officials and proper sourcing to indicate confirmation. Not including this information removes no encyclopedic value from the article, and we have no WP:DEADLINE to include this information. Wait for confirmation. <b style="border:2px solid; color: #17B6F9; background: #305577"> { MordeKyle } </b> <b style="border:2px solid; color: #B8A553; background: #727579">&#9762;</b> 02:46, 23 March 2017 (UTC)
 * Definitely wait, per WP:BLP. ansh 666 03:34, 23 March 2017 (UTC)
 * Now, I'm just curious, how would it be a BLP violation to quote or paraphrase a statement from the UK's counter-terrorism chief as presented in multiple reliable sources? We haven't had such a stipulation for any of the rest of the information in this article, so it doesn't seem blatantly obvious why our treatment of anything close to religion must be so delicate. We're not performing WP:OR, or violating WP:V, nor WP:NPOV if we include the information, as far as I can tell. So I'm open to hearing a more expounded explanation from you. <small style="color:#999;white-space:nowrap;text-shadow:lightgrey 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">&mdash; <big style="color:#ffa439">Coffee //  have a cup  //  beans  // 04:01, 23 March 2017 (UTC)
 * the answer to your question is "Challenged or likely to be challenged" and "Remove contentious material that is unsourced or poorly sourced". In this case, it's inadequately sourced and your paraphrase is incorrect because you assume something that is not explicitly said. "[A]uthorities said their “working assumption” was that the inspiration for the attack was international terrorism" not "islamic terrorism". Your other two sources, just say terrorism. For that matter, for that claim specifically, you'll want multiple very high quality sources - better than Washington Times, NZHerald, and Yahoo7. I speak from a half policy, half experience position. Others may disagree, indeed I invite them to do so with sources. Mr rnddude (talk) 05:41, 23 March 2017 (UTC)
 * "Islamic extremism was suspected in the attack, Rowley said, adding that authorities believe they know the assailant's identity but would not reveal it while the investigation was ongoing." - ABC News; "Islamic extremism was suspected in the attack, Metropolitan Police counterterrorism chief Mark Rowley said." - Times of India; "Surprisingly, Trump himself didn't tweet once about the incident, bucking his usual habit of reacting sensationally to suspected Islamist attacks in Europe." - Washington Post. <small style="color:#999;white-space:nowrap;text-shadow:lightgrey 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">&mdash; <big style="color:#ffa439">Coffee //  have a cup  //  beans  // 06:50, 23 March 2017 (UTC)
 * Times of India is not a reliable source for such instant reporting. Inlinetext (talk) 07:12, 23 March 2017 (UTC)
 * OK, you still have at least two WP:RS. Reinstating. XavierItzm (talk) 14:43, 23 March 2017 (UTC)
 * , I would have responded sooner but your ping did not go through and I didn't have this page "watchlisted". ABC News and Wash Po are much better sources and, as far as I am concerned, I am happy to go with "Islamic terrorism (suspected)" or some similar for the time being. I think we agree that it is not yet confirmed, but, that doesn't prevent us from updating the article to keep up with the current news reports. Mr rnddude (talk) 17:54, 23 March 2017 (UTC)
 * Speculation on a motive to a crime is perhaps the most obvious violation to BLP possible when considering a crime with a known suspect, no matter what the source of the speculation is. It's the same as "treated as a terrorist attack" vs straight up saying "terrorist attack"; just because the police are dealing with it under the assumption that it is does not make it so. In this case, it probably is, and "Islamic extremist terrorism" is probably the motive, but that doesn't mean we should say so until it's confirmed. Perhaps I'm thinking a little more strictly because of the alleged perpetrator snafu above, but we should let the investigation run its course and confirm whether or not the speculation is true before we put it in the article, just as we don't have every bit of speculation on who the actual perpetrator was from "reliable sources" during the event. There is no deadline, and we're not gaining anything by keeping all of that in. ansh 666 07:37, 23 March 2017 (UTC)
 * I guess I need to rephrase my question again: How is a quote from the counter-terrorism officer for Scotland Yard speculation? It sounds like to me there's some failure here regarding your understanding of original research. It is not OR for us to cite reliable sources and use the terms those reliable sources use... that is literally what we're supposed to be doing here. OR is when we start applying our own personal standards for what should or should not be mentioned/cited... especially when those standards do not reflect community consensus. At any rate, the perp snafu was terrible and I'm disappointed in us furthering it... but if we started choking every time this site made a mistake we'd already have the full site protected by now. -  Thank you. <small style="color:#999;white-space:nowrap;text-shadow:lightgrey 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">&mdash; <big style="color:#ffa439">Coffee  //  have a cup  //  beans  // 16:19, 23 March 2017 (UTC)
 * I never said anything about OR. Just because there are WP:RS for it does not mean we should include it. Speculation is speculation, no matter who says it or reports it. My concern was more about WP:UNDUE - as I said, the same reason we kept using the phrase "suspected terrorist attack" and removing reactions from Muslim groups. Now that ISIL has finally come out and talked about it, it's okay to include as a theory, but we should not be confirming it in Wikipedia voice (as of this moment, this is the text: The motivation was Islamic extremism.). In that vein, I've reworded the statement and removed the Post ref, as the latter actually argues against labeling it as an "Islamic extremist" attack. Leaving the ref below in case someone can use it for something else. ansh 666 18:39, 23 March 2017 (UTC)


 * Several sources including the BBC and the Independent have now confirmed that ISIL are claiming responsibility for the attack. Can this be added as an update by someone with the correct permissions? Source is here: http://www.independent.co.uk/news/uk/home-news/isis-london-attack-westminster-terror-responsibility-latest-islamic-state-daesh-a7645696.html and also here: http://www.bbc.co.uk/news/live/uk-39355505 109.176.69.218 (talk) 12:31, 23 March 2017 (UTC)

Semi-protected edit request on 23 March 2017
Change from "Expressions of shock, support, solidarity and sympathy were offered by the governments of Argentina,Australia, Canada, Colombia, France, Germany, Ireland, Israel, the Netherlands and the United States."

Change to "Expressions of shock, support, solidarity and sympathy were offered by the governments of Argentina,Australia, Canada, Colombia, France, Germany, India, Ireland, Israel, the Netherlands and the United States."

News stub about India's support to UK : http://www.ndtv.com/india-news/uk-parliament-attack-president-pranab-mukherjee-pm-narendra-modi-express-sadness-1672481 203.99.197.179 (talk) 04:40, 23 March 2017 (UTC)
 * Looks like this has been done. – The Bounder (talk) 17:58, 23 March 2017 (UTC)

Semi-protected edit request on 23 March 2017
Pafke (talk) 06:28, 23 March 2017 (UTC)
 * Red question icon with gradient background.svg Not done: it's not clear what changes you want to be made. Please mention the specific changes in a "change X to Y" format.  Eve rgr een Fir  (talk) 06:30, 23 March 2017 (UTC)

User syntheised maps
The user generated attack map from Commons is unacceptable. This article is increasingly contravening WP:NOTNEWS. Inlinetext (talk) 07:09, 23 March 2017 (UTC)
 * As near-identical maps appear in most media outlets at the moment (see the BBC for an example), there is no SYNTHESIS at all. The map does not breach NOTNEWS in the slightest: it provides a visual aid to show the path of car and man: that is of benefit to the article, and would be there if we were discussing an event from the past. - The Bounder (talk) 07:12, 23 March 2017 (UTC)
 * The BBC map is an entirely different map ultimately apparently sourced to The Guardian. There is no authentication of the Commons version. Inlinetext (talk) 07:19, 23 March 2017 (UTC)
 * The information shown is the same as many, many other news sources. The BBC link is one example, and this really is a non-issue. - The Bounder (talk) 07:23, 23 March 2017 (UTC)
 * It's a serious sourcing issue for an encyclopedia (which is NOT an instant news website like the BBC). Inlinetext (talk) 07:27, 23 March 2017 (UTC)
 * Feel free to add the link to the BBC page onto the file, or drop a note to the map's creator. - The Bounder (talk) 07:37, 23 March 2017 (UTC)

This map is of a similar type to those produced for other recent terrorist incidents in Europe. It is similar to maps that can be viewed on the BBC News website and other reliable UK news sources. The timeline or details on the map are unlikely to alter any time in the near future. Personally, I would have preferred a map showing the whole of Westminster Bridge, so that St Thomas Hospital could be marked. I believe maps like this help readers not so familiar with London to understand the article. Mathsci (talk) 07:20, 23 March 2017 (UTC)
 * Unfortunately, this is Wikipedia, and Wikipedia is NOTNEWS. Inlinetext (talk) 07:21, 23 March 2017 (UTC)
 * There is no bread breach of NOTNEWS in including a map. - The Bounder (talk) 07:24, 23 March 2017 (UTC)
 * "bread" ?? Inlinetext (talk) 07:25, 23 March 2017 (UTC)


 * This is not original reporting - many news sources have very similar maps. A map of an incident is encyclopedic and is common for such attacks. The NOTNEWS assertion is a VAGUEWAVE and has not been explained. I propose closing this section. Fences  &amp;  Windows  08:35, 23 March 2017 (UTC)
 * I concur, discussion closed. Mjroots (talk) 09:27, 23 March 2017 (UTC)

The user-generated map is not a very good one. I agree with Mathsci above that the map should show the whole of Westminster Bridge. The maps by the BBC and others show that the car ramming attack started much further back along the bridge, not halfway along as shown in the user-generated map. The arrow showing the crash into the railing is misleading, as it seems to imply that the car went through the railings (it didn't). And the subsequent route of the attacker was along the pavement from the crash site to the entrance round the corner. The red circles are also too large, obscuring details on the map. An example of a better map is the one used here. in case they can maybe help with changes to the map (as they uploaded it). Carcharoth (talk) 13:33, 23 March 2017 (UTC)
 * I agree, the user created map is misleading. Gamebuster19901 (Talk║Contributions) 16:16, 23 March 2017 (UTC)
 * It was just one I threw together in 15 minutes so that the article wouldn't be without. I can recreate it more accurately over the next day or so.  Rcsprinter123    (talk)  18:12, 23 March 2017 (UTC)
 * This is exactly why such user generated maps should not be used in a hurry. Text content is subject to extensive discusssion, but any user at Commons can whip together (synthesise) false information which is prominently displayed, copied everywhere and makes this project a laughing stock. Inlinetext (talk) 19:39, 23 March 2017 (UTC)
 * It's not false, it's based directly off one from the Guardian.  Rcsprinter123    (drone)  20:00, 23 March 2017 (UTC)
 * Inlinetext, several people told you the same thing yesterday: there was no synthesis and this map has not made "this project a laughing stock", despite your hyperbole. if you didn't like it yesterday, you could have put together one yourself, or put in a request at the graphic workshop, rather than trying to berate other people simply because of your personal opinion. - The Bounder (talk) 20:14, 23 March 2017 (UTC)

Map now updated.  Rcsprinter123    (confer)  23:44, 24 March 2017 (UTC)

Number of deaths
The article is inconsistent about this, saying 5 in the text (#Victims) and 4 in the infobox. All the best: Rich Farmbrough, 11:10, 23 March 2017 (UTC).


 * I may have missed the edit that changed it, but it says four in the Victims section (unless I've missed something). - The Bounder (talk) 11:12, 23 March 2017 (UTC)
 * Should be four. Police stated five for a while, but revised back to four. I took a look but didn't see the inconsistency. Probably someone else fixed it already, as I think everything is now consistent again? (If I'm overlooking something and it's still inconsistent, let me know) AddWittyNameHere (talk) 11:17, 23 March 2017 (UTC)
 * Looks like this is resolved. Confusion was widespread, including in the Guardian and the Times. All the best: Rich Farmbrough, 13:39, 23 March 2017 (UTC).


 * yes, the overall death toll went back and forth from 4 to 5 to 4 now, but most likely will rise since many of the people injured were very seriously injured, and "catastrophically", so we'll see. Namarly (talk) 15:25, 23 March 2017 (UTC)
 * As we know (now), death toll is currently 5...in total. Namarly (talk) 05:09, 24 March 2017 (UTC)

Flags

 * Speaking of confusion though, should we really not include flags? There are Portugese nationals for instance living in the UK, the flags would be a way to say "no they were tourists". - Knowledgekid87 (talk) 13:41, 23 March 2017 (UTC)
 * No. Words are better, and "a flag" v "Portuguese" makes no differentiation between tourist and (possibly temporary) resident: the flag does not clarify it in any way. - The Bounder (talk) 13:47, 23 March 2017 (UTC)
 * It clarifies things as it indicates that they don't live in the UK. This is more of a problem with "Irish" as parts of the UK cover Ireland. - Knowledgekid87 (talk) 13:48, 23 March 2017 (UTC)
 * A flag to clarify someone's nationality doesn't do anything that words cannot do. See also MOS:FLAG: no-one here was 'representing' their country. - The Bounder (talk) 13:53, 23 March 2017 (UTC)
 * I read that and my point still stands on confusion, the way it reads does not indicate if the people are residents of the UK or not. MOS:FLAG says nothing about non-inclusion here, and there is no reason why there cant be both words and flags. - Knowledgekid87 (talk) 13:57, 23 March 2017 (UTC)
 * The use of a flag says absolutely nothing about residence. The table is nationalities of casuaties, not residence. - The Bounder (talk) 14:01, 23 March 2017 (UTC)
 * I most cases I don't know that it has been stated in reliable sources whether the people were residents, tourists, business visitors, or had some other reason for being in the country. We know that the French students injured were not British residents, and it can be inferred that the woman walking to pick up her children from school probably was, but other than that I think it would just be supposition. Thryduulf (talk) 15:17, 23 March 2017 (UTC)

, as there is a discussion in progress, can you not edit war over the improper use of flags until there is a consensus please. - The Bounder (talk) 15:29, 23 March 2017 (UTC)


 * I am not edit warring over anything, there is no difference between this article and the 2017 Istanbul nightclub shooting. I have seen this discussion again and again on talk pages. - Knowledgekid87 (talk) 15:31, 23 March 2017 (UTC)
 * Your reverting says otherwise. The pretty picture of a flag is pointless, particularly when next to the name of the country. It's not like there is an official 'representation' aspect to the people concerned in the table. (And yes, WP:OSE for the nightclub shooting.) - The Bounder (talk) 15:34, 23 March 2017 (UTC)
 * A revert is not edit warring, and there are always going to be editors in the pro/anti flags camp. More important matters should be discussed rather than fighting over pictures of flags. - Knowledgekid87 (talk) 15:36, 23 March 2017 (UTC)
 * You reverted a revert: give you one guess what that is... - The Bounder (talk) 15:40, 23 March 2017 (UTC)
 * Can you stay on topic please? An editor re-added the flags, rather than just leave the issue alone you continued. - Knowledgekid87 (talk) 15:42, 23 March 2017 (UTC)
 * I returned it to the WP:STATUS QUO as an existing discussion continued. You reverted me, despite being part of that discussion. But yes, sure, I'll let you stay on topic if you wish. - The Bounder (talk)
 * I would rather focus on more important things in the article, this issue is likely going to pop up again though once the dust settles. - Knowledgekid87 (talk) 15:48, 23 March 2017 (UTC)
 * Flags add nothing to our understanding of this event, and should not be included. Kablammo (talk) 15:34, 23 March 2017 (UTC)

International
If this list keeps growing should we just use a table with a statement from each leader of each country or go with the "condolences from countries such as:" route? Anyone want to add input? Thanks ツ Jenova 20  (email) 11:18, 23 March 2017 (UTC)
 * I think the better solution is to limit the statements to those from the relevant countries: that is, countries with known ties to victims or perp. At least as far as the usual 'condemnation and condolence' statements go; should any reactions or statements be otherwise unusual or exceptional, they can be separately discussed. AddWittyNameHere (talk) 11:23, 23 March 2017 (UTC)
 * There is absolutely no need to doggishly follow all the countries and all leaders' rhetorical and sympathetic statements. I believe a simple "from countries around the world" listing a small handful of countries from different continents as examples would suffice. --  Ohc  ¡digame! 11:24, 23 March 2017 (UTC)


 * Ok...So who decides what a relevant country is and which ones they are? It seems like that is just asking for edit wars (There's already disputes going on) unless it's defined in the open and agreed upon. Thanks ツ Jenova 20  (email) 11:26, 23 March 2017 (UTC)
 * Agree with Jenova20. It's all or nothing. WWGB (talk) 11:29, 23 March 2017 (UTC)
 * Well, I gave a suggested clear-cut definition above: countries with known ties to the victims or perp. As current knowledge stands, that would Australia, China, France, Italy, Portugal, Romania, South Korea and Spain. The perp is known to be "British-born", but should he nonetheless have a second nationality (which is possible), that country as well. But yes, the exact definition would have to be agreed on, mine is simply a proposal for one that's not likely to be particularly prone to grey areas as some other definitions would be. AddWittyNameHere (talk) 11:34, 23 March 2017 (UTC)
 * (ec) I agree that we cannot discriminate between countries: "all or none" is the right way forward. Every case for inclusion or exclusion will be arbitrary to some extent. Mathsci (talk) 11:43, 23 March 2017 (UTC)


 * I'm sure many people are like me and are quite tired of seeing meandering lists of countries and meaningless rhetoric sound bites from the pompous. Best to remove them all and replace with a general statement that coondolences flowed from around the world. I would support including "relevant comments" – one that deals with any individual affected in the incident, and could be presented in different ways that are encyclopaedic. Maybe we could take a leaf out of 21 July 2005 London bombings. --  Ohc  ¡digame! 11:53, 23 March 2017 (UTC)
 * I support this suggestion. Thanks ツ Jenova 20  (email) 12:32, 23 March 2017 (UTC)
 * Support. Perhaps not my preferred option, but one I can certainly agree with as preferable over the long meandering list of countries giving the usual reactions (and it's incredibly sad that there is such a thing as "usual reactions" to attacks like these) to the attack. AddWittyNameHere (talk) 12:34, 23 March 2017 (UTC)
 * Yes, should probably be done case by case. It is impossible to generalise. For example, the French foreign minister Jean-Marc Ayrault attended this morning's session of the Commons in the public gallery and also met the French school group near the hospital where three of them are being treated (none of them in a critical condition). Mathsci (talk) 14:00, 23 March 2017 (UTC)

Suggestion: some articles simply have maps, where countries that condemned it are shaded a particular color. That represents a lot of information but doesn't make the article hard to read.VR talk  19:11, 23 March 2017 (UTC)

I've dropped the list of countries into a footnote, so the record is preserved, but the body of text can be read with some ease. We'll see how long it takes someone to revert it! - The Bounder (talk) 19:57, 23 March 2017 (UTC)
 * I'm thinking of reverting it. Let's at least be consistent. We talk about Eiffel tower changing its colors. How is that relevant? That's just as relevant as having a list of countries. If you're going to remove the list of countries, then you'll have to aggressively police the article for all irrelevant information. I don't understand why the countries elicits such negative emotions when the rest of the article isn't that greatly written either.VR talk  15:00, 24 March 2017 (UTC)


 * Can I strongly advise that you don't? The list of countries was not "removed from the article", but placed instead into a footnote. It is a list of those states (with citations) that hs made some formal statement. We have a sentence in place that says something along the lines of 'numerous stated expressed shock and sympathy', and that is all that is needed in the article body. There is - in this thread - a consensus that the list that was there before was poor (indeed it was the reason the section was tagged). I make no comments on the advisibility of the Eiffel Tower (which turned off its lights, not changed them), but that is an entirely different point that is worthy of a separate discussion. - The Bounder (talk) 15:33, 24 March 2017 (UTC)
 * I don't see the consensus. Several people said "its all or nothing", without actually taking a side on all or nothing. Why do you find the list poor but simultaneously have no comment on the Eiffel Tower?VR talk  04:24, 25 March 2017 (UTC)
 * I do see a consensus against, not just here, but in the tagging of the section simply because of the list of names in open text that say absolutely nothing at all. I don't know why you make the false connection between the comments and the Eiffel Tower. I said it "is an entirely different point that is worthy of a separate discussion". – The Bounder (talk) 07:53, 25 March 2017 (UTC)

Roseanna Cunningham
I've reinstated the reaction of Roseanna Cunningham MSP to the suspension of the Scottish Parliament. I feel that it is important to recognise and show that not everyone spoke with one voice. There were other dissenting voices in the Scottish Parliament, some using far stronger language. To those that say it represents Cunningham in a bad light, I say that is not our concern. The addition is compliant with WP:BLP, which is all that we need to be concerned with here. Mjroots (talk) 11:31, 23 March 2017 (UTC)


 * I tend to agree. If she wants to court controversy like this then bad taste or not i think it's relevant. Thanks ツ Jenova 20  (email) 11:33, 23 March 2017 (UTC)


 * It has been removed by . Please reinstate and discuss. Mjroots (talk) 11:35, 23 March 2017 (UTC)
 * It's tabloid trash and a couple of people have removed it so far (including me as one of them). Perhaps we should see if a consensus develops for its inclusion before before putting it back in? - The Bounder (talk) 11:36, 23 March 2017 (UTC)
 * Let's neither add nor remove it for now (am not going to bother checking whether it's currently in or out this very second); there's no harm if it stays out until consensus to include can be established. As the text is compliant with BLP and verifiability&mdash;concerns are more about DUE/UNDUE&mdash;there's no harm in it staying in until we can establish a consensus to exclude, either. There is harm in edit-warring over it. Even if we all carefully stay below 3rr, there are more than enough separate parts of the article constantly threatening to break out into an edit war, let's please please not start another. AddWittyNameHere (talk) 11:49, 23 March 2017 (UTC)


 * This is recentism, and exactly the nonsense sound bites that clog up WP current affairs articles, preventing them from becoming more than the tabloid from which is quoted. Remember that Wikipedia is not news--  Ohc  ¡digame! 12:00, 23 March 2017 (UTC)
 * I agree re edit warring, which is why I've not reinstated it, although it would be easier for people to fully understand the issue if it were there. If there are objections to the use of the Daily Express as a source, I'm sure that a better one can be found. Mjroots (talk) 12:06, 23 March 2017 (UTC)
 * Thank you for that. :) My main issue isn't so much regarding the use of any one specific source (though yeah, Daily Express isn't the best source around to be honest, though there's far worse out there all the same) but regarding weight. I don't doubt that it's factual and verifiable, nor that there are sources mentioning it. However, what is the rough ratio between sources on this subject on mentioning it/not mentioning it, and how much attention do they pay to it? If it can be demonstrated a fair number of strong sources thought it noteworthy enough to pay significant attention to it, then by all means include it. If it's been mentioned in a fair number of strong sources, but not in detail, then we probably shouldn't be paying more attention than a single sentence to it. If it's mostly confined to the gutter press, tabloids and news aggregates and maybe one or two good sources, then it is probably undue weight to put it in our article at all. A secondary weight issue is in which context the information is in those sources: even if there's not enough weight there to specifically mention Roseanna Cunningham, there may still be enough weight to make a more general mention of the dissenting voices. AddWittyNameHere (talk) 12:24, 23 March 2017 (UTC)
 * The BBC reports that she was visibly angry, but later agreed with the decision. Other MSPs did not agree with the suspension of the Scottish Parliament. Looking at the slightly wider picture, maybe a mention that not all MSPs were happy with the suspension will suffice. Mjroots (talk) 12:33, 23 March 2017 (UTC)
 * Sounds like a good solution to me., opinions? AddWittyNameHere (talk) 12:38, 23 March 2017 (UTC)
 * I don't object at this stage, but I don't see it as necessary either – There will always be dissenters. Chances are deleting it a month down the line will not be at all contentious. --  Ohc  ¡digame! 12:47, 23 March 2017 (UTC)
 * Yeah, i'm happy with that suggestion. Thanks ツ Jenova 20  (email) 13:13, 23 March 2017 (UTC)
 * I agree a mention that not all MSPs were happy with the decision is worth including - it wouldn't be tabloid recentism to say that. This article from The Courier gives a wider picture of events. This is Paul (talk) 18:03, 24 March 2017 (UTC)

Victims
To write "there were three victims..." is highly misleading. "Victim" is not synonymous with "person killed". Andy Mabbett ( Pigsonthewing ); Talk to Andy; Andy's edits 12:40, 23 March 2017 (UTC)
 * -sigh- Agreed. (Though in this case, it would be 'person killed that isn't the perp', and that's where this misleading wording comes from: the still ongoing back-and-forth between "a perp is never a victim" and "let's clarify whether or not the perp is included in particular figures".) AddWittyNameHere (talk) 12:43, 23 March 2017 (UTC)
 * So write "there were three victims killed" or "three victims died". Easy peasy. WWGB (talk) 12:47, 23 March 2017 (UTC)
 * I don't understand the problem. I explained it to my ten-y-o kid. He understood. --  Ohc  ¡digame! 12:49, 23 March 2017 (UTC)
 * Except it is not easy peasy when it is clearly and demonstrably (see e.g. the section higher up on this talkpage that I pinged you to before) leading to confusion.
 * Frankly speaking, I probably* understand why you disagree with listing the perpetrator as a victim. I have more difficulty understanding your problem with clarifying notes on the table that the perp is not included in the light of demonstrable confusion, and even regarding listing the perp as victim I have to presume I understand you. Why? Because you consist in simply reverting folks, rewriting text and limiting your participation on the talkpage to statements like "So write [this]. Easy peasy" without ever addressing the reasons we're giving for why it isn't so simple. That is no way to find a solution, it is no way to find a compromise and it is no way to convince us you're right.
 * Because you may well be, but so long as you don't actually give your reasoning beyond one-line statements that could have fit into an edit summary, it is impossible for me to consider your reasoning and consider whether you're right or not. AddWittyNameHere (talk) 13:00, 23 March 2017 (UTC)

Perpetrator/victim
Looking back I disagree with calling the attacker a victim in the table and was Bold. Just posting up here in case of a dispute. Thanks ツ Jenova 20  (email) 13:51, 23 March 2017 (UTC)
 * Might be better to participate in the ongoing attempt at finding a form of consensus regarding the table. The discussion is in the talkpage section Talk:2017 Westminster attack. (Talkpage is getting more than a little confusing and messy, I know) AddWittyNameHere (talk) 13:56, 23 March 2017 (UTC)


 * Isn't the point being the "victims" OF the perpetrator and hence outside the perpetrator, given that they are HIS victims?  Hence the perp would logically factually be excluded from that specific list and context.  Meaning four were killed "by him", but the perp is included not in the "victim" list, but in the death toll list overall.   (Some might argue that the perp is a victim of his own self too, in a sense.)  But it needs to be made clear that the people who were murdered BY HIM...are in a different category (obviously) from him, in that context.  Namarly (talk) 05:13, 24 March 2017 (UTC)

ISIS link
I just want editors to keep in mind that ISIS claims responsibility for just about every terrorist attack that occurs in the world as a way to gain their influence. These claims include ISIS inspired attacks, lone wolf killings, and attacks carried out by other groups. We shouldn't rush to label the suspect a "soldier of the Islamic State" without some evidence of a direct order. - Knowledgekid87 (talk) 13:28, 23 March 2017 (UTC)
 * That's half-true. Amaq News Agency always says the killers were inspired by the call, and the headline writers morph that into "ISIS claims responsibility". And then some Wikipedia editor always relays the headline instead of the lead. InedibleHulk (talk) 18:12, 23 March 2017 (UTC)
 * These late claims by ISIS appear to be after-the-act claims after they discover (as and when we did) that the actor had some vague motive related to their cause. We should not fall into the reflex of inflating their influence. -- Naaman Brown (talk) 19:53, 23 March 2017 (UTC)

Syntax
On 22 March 2017 a terrorist attack occurred on Westminster Bridge, in Parliament Square and within the grounds of the Palace of Westminster, in central London, United Kingdom.
 * – Clunky prose. Suggest change to: "A terrorist attack at Westminster Bridge, Parliament Square and inside the grounds of the British Parliament on 22 May 2017 resulted in four deaths and more than 40 injuries."
 * Due to semi-proection, I'm unable to edit it myself. Sca (talk) 15:01, 23 March 2017 (UTC)


 * Palace of Westminster is the formal name for the building complex where Parliament meets. Pincrete (talk) 17:54, 23 March 2017 (UTC)
 * I think it is succinct as it now is, but I am not UK. - A Canadian Toker (talk)

Casulties
When I am looking at this article, when it is at the where the attacker starts hitting people at the bridge; this article could be more specific with whether or not they were injured or died. Along with names it would be great too. (Cass) — Preceding unsigned comment added by Cassini127 (talk • contribs) 14:56, 23 March 2017 (UTC)

The Casulties table. Country not demonym.
For the Casulties table it does not look very well. I believe that this page should use the 2017 Istanbul nightclub shooting as an example. It might look nicer to say the country and not the Demonym.


 * Agreed, this would solve an issue I raised above. - Knowledgekid87 (talk) 15:10, 23 March 2017 (UTC)

Eiffel Tower blackout mention?
In the international response section? — <b style="color:#595454">Calvin999</b> 15:19, 23 March 2017 (UTC)
 * I'd say this is worth mentioning. --- Another Believer ( Talk ) 15:40, 23 March 2017 (UTC)

Sources: --- Another Believer ( Talk ) 15:42, 23 March 2017 (UTC)
 * http://www.independent.co.uk/news/world/europe/london-westminster-attack-eiffel-tower-paris-falls-fark-solidarity-tribute-terror-victims-a7644926.html
 * http://www.mirror.co.uk/news/uk-news/eiffel-tower-goes-dark-solidarity-10080931
 * https://www.thesun.co.uk/news/3157314/eiffel-tower-lights-go-dark-solidarity-london-tributes/
 * https://www.theguardian.com/uk-news/video/2017/mar/23/eiffel-tower-goes-dark-in-remembrance-of-london-attack-victims-video
 * http://www.express.co.uk/news/uk/782749/london-terror-attack-paris-eiffel-tower-uk-parliament-westminster-shooting


 * OPPOSE. No enduring notability.. Inlinetext (talk) 19:41, 23 March 2017 (UTC)

Inlinetext (talk) What in the world are you talking about? By that logic no reaction to an event has enduring notability. El cid, el campeador (talk) 20:50, 23 March 2017 (UTC)

Why was the car rental details removed and called a factoid?
I wanted to add some details about the car rental. I don't know why someone decided that it was considered a factoid, it did come from BBC which is a generally considered a reliable source. (Cass)


 * It had already been mentioned above, in the Attack section. See . Kablammo (talk) 16:32, 23 March 2017 (UTC)

Substitution of "passers-by" for 'civilians'.
The term civilian was used in the article as so: "2 civilians, 1 police officer and the perpetrator". Dictionary definition (OED) of civilian: not in the military or police. All well and good; so technically accurate, however I am concerned that there is an unhelpful resonance around playing into terrorist narratives around legitimacy of targeting different groups. Anticipating WP:CYCLE Springnuts (talk) 17:09, 23 March 2017 (UTC)
 * In traditional war, the story goes that it's more honourable to kill combatants. But I've never heard anything of the sort from ISIS. Adnani very famously said coalition civilians and military are equally fair game. InedibleHulk (talk) 18:56, 23 March 2017 (UTC)

Edit request
Please add to the top of the article indicating the merger proposal -- 70.51.200.162 (talk) 17:27, 23 March 2017 (UTC)
 * Done. All the best, – The Bounder (talk) 17:56, 23 March 2017 (UTC)

Islamic terrorist attack?
Was this attack technically an Islamic terrorist attack and what criteria/news/data is required in order for it to be considered or not considered as such.2602:30A:C0D3:4FA0:BF:FDE5:BCE1:DACE (talk) 02:16, 26 March 2017 (UTC)
 * As the article puts it, "On 25 March Neil Basu, Deputy Assistant Commissioner at Scotland Yard, announced that investigators believed that the perpetrator had acted alone, adding that, "We must all accept that there is a possibility we will never understand why he did this." A couple of recent events (the stabbing Inc Russell Sqaure, for example), were initially highlighted as terrorism until mental,health issues were identified. Unless police find a reliable connection to a motive it won't be classed as anything. – The Bounder (talk) 06:59, 26 March 2017 (UTC)
 * That doesnt really answer the question. One could easily say anybody that commits an act Islamic terrorism has mental health issues, as somebody in a state of good mental health wouldnt perpetrate such an incident. What I am asking for is what kind of information is required for it to be considered an islamic terrorist attack. Theresa May said, It wasnt 'Islamic Terrorism' it was 'Islamist terrorism' a perversion if a great faith. At what point is a person mentally ill vs an islamic extremist and at what point is their act an act of mental illness vs an islamic/Islamist terrorist attack. There seems to be a reluctance to designate this as an islamic/islamist terror attack, moving forward will these incidents simply be referred to as acts of the mentally ill? We know he used whatsapp right before the incident, if it is revealed he was in contact with some kind of group on social media and he was letting them know he was going to perpetrate the attack, is that when it is decided it can be considered an Islamic Terrorist attack? I'm just wondering what the criteria is. If a politician says it is, or if some news sources say it is? Does it have to come from a police report? Is a lonewolf act of a mentally ill religious extremist an act of islamic terrorism, or does their need to be a news source that documents collaboration with ISIS. If ISIS is taking credit for it is that enough? 2602:30A:C0D3:4FA0:5C1B:250F:7970:DA43 (talk) 11:01, 26 March 2017 (UTC)
 * We reflect what the reliable sources say, and when the official ones are distancing themselves from classifying it as a terrorist attack, we reflect that. – The Bounder (talk) 15:44, 26 March 2017 (UTC)
 * User:2602:30A:C0D3:4FA0:5C1B:250F:7970:DA43 you ask a valid question, for which there isn't a simple answer. However we know that there is usually a much greater rush in both papers and on WP to add various labels and categories (including the org. 'behind the attack'), than there is to 'tidy up' when things become clearer later. What IMO is more important than labels, is that the article text should reflect the 'whole picture', who the perp was, to what extent outside agencies were involved or motivational, which, in several recent instances is not at all, except possibly as an 'inspirational' motive. If, as Bounder implies, we 'err on the side of caution', is that a bad thing? Pincrete (talk) 16:03, 26 March 2017 (UTC)
 * Might be a good thing to also tidy up when things become less clear. We've been calling it a terrorist attack since day one, based on the police's initial hunch. But now police are saying he acted alone and his motive may never be known. For a man who still has no reported ties to terrorists and no reported political agenda, it now looks like a poor first guess. Sometimes people with a history of stabbing people (a decade before the "wave" in Europe, and even pre-9/11) eventually stab someone to death. Even a modern Muslim can be a simple violent asshole, and he wasn't even Muslim yet for the first two attacks. InedibleHulk (talk) 22:18, 27 March 2017 (UTC)

Anti-Vandalism measures
I checked the history earlier and I saw that their was a vandalism case. Really to debate, should this page have vandalism protections or not? (Cass)
 * Semiprotection against unregistered or new editors usually makes sense in these sorts of articles. That should stay while it's still featured in Google News. Beyond that, I think we're OK. InedibleHulk (talk) 21:22, 24 March 2017 (UTC)

"Pavement" needs a Wikilink
One of the defining characteristics of this attack is that the car was driven along the footway rather than the roadway. Quite properly, the article uses the commonly used British term "pavement", rather than the technical term, to describe this. However, in the international arena, the term "pavement" can be very ambiguous, even in the usage context in this article, as to some it means the hard surface of the roadway (and not the footway). For that reason I linked pavement to sidewalk, the Wikipedia article describing the meaning of pavement in our context, but was reverted. WP:UNDERLINKING gives cases such as this as what generally should be linked. I propose reinstating the Wikilink to aid understanding of the article, especially for those who use different terms, such as "sidewalk" for these. What do we think? -- de Facto (talk). 22:25, 25 March 2017 (UTC)
 * I don't mind a wikilink. I often wikilink crore in Indian English pages. --BurritoBazooka Talk Contribs  22:50, 25 March 2017 (UTC)
 * I'm not sure it is that ambiguous, and the common sense of readers should not be underestimated. Are you prepared to go through the rest of Wikipedia to pipe links to "pavement" every time "sidewalk" is mentioned? – The Bounder (talk) 22:52, 25 March 2017 (UTC)
 * To be fair, "sidewalk" is less ambiguous than "pavement". --BurritoBazooka Talk Contribs  22:54, 25 March 2017 (UTC)
 * I'm not so convinced of that. - The Bounder (talk) 22:58, 25 March 2017 (UTC)

DeFacto and BurritoBazooka are correct. Pavement is ambiguous for those not familiar with the British usage, whereas the term "side walk" describes where it is and what you do on it. Also, it doesn't really matter what other articles do. In this article it is important to distinguish between the bit designated for cars and the bit designated for pedestrians. Yaris678 (talk) 23:09, 25 March 2017 (UTC)
 * We really don't need to over link here. Simply change the word to footpath or footway or sidewalk and the problem is solved. <b style="border:2px solid; color: #17B6F9; background: #305577"> { MordeKyle } </b> <b style="border:2px solid; color: #B8A553; background: #727579">&#9762;</b> 23:13, 25 March 2017 (UTC)
 * footpath is no better really, perhaps even worse! -- de Facto (talk). 23:23, 25 March 2017 (UTC)
 * Neither footway or sidewalk are at all appropriate. – The Bounder (talk) 23:24, 25 March 2017 (UTC)
 * This article is written in British English. "Footway" is not common in British English. "Footpath" typically implies not adjacent to a road. Yaris678 (talk) 23:25, 25 March 2017 (UTC)
 * Agree with DeFacto; this is definitely an WP:ENGVAR issue (over here pavement means what you drive on, not what you walk on), so a link makes sense to clarify for international readers. ansh 666 23:55, 25 March 2017 (UTC)

As there appears to be a consensus here, I've replaced the link, although I deeply disagree with it. I doubt ofther varieties of English would be given the same consideration on AmEng articles. – The Bounder (talk) 00:21, 26 March 2017 (UTC)


 * Comment In the article on the 2016 Nice attack, also written in British English, a similar problem with pavement arose. In the analogous "attack" section it was later solved (not by me) by adding sidewalk in parentheses after pavement: see 2016_Nice_attack. Perhaps the same thing could be done here, avoiding mentioning the word "pavement" in the lede (as happens in the Nice article). I should add that Scotland Yard have announced that the whole attack in London lasted 82 seconds, which is something that could be included somewhere in the article. Mathsci (talk) 07:54, 26 March 2017 (UTC)
 * As I recall, there was no clear Engvar when the 'Nice' article started, and of course no tie to any particular Eng country. I think the link to the US term is standard practice, and preferable to brackets (or do I mean parentheses?). Pincrete (talk) 17:15, 26 March 2017 (UTC)
 * Was added fairly soon by a Scot. Mathsci (talk) 18:49, 26 March 2017 (UTC)


 * Comment aside from parens and wikilinks, there's a different solution, which displays pavement  -- 70.51.200.162 (talk) 23:10, 26 March 2017 (UTC)
 * Not really since the documentation for the template says in bold font:
 * "Please note: Do not use undefined or to mark up material other than abbreviations or acronyms. Using it to generate tooltips elsewhere is a misuse of the underlying HTML and causes accessibility problems."


 * Nil Einne (talk) 16:17, 27 March 2017 (UTC)

redirects here. Per talk Talk:2017_Westminster_attack/Archive_1 it was roughly determined to turn that into a disambiguation page. That has since been reverted into a redirect here. The current hatnote is insufficient to the cases of attacks on Westminster that were determined to have occurred in history, and clearly lacks non-terrorist attacks on Westminster (such as in wartime). The target "London terrorist attacks" page also lacks various incidents in centuries past that could be construed as terroristic if they occurred in the modern age, but in their day and age had no such thing called terrorists.

Thus this remains a problem. -- 70.51.200.162 (talk) 03:50, 28 March 2017 (UTC)

Ping creator of the dab page -- 70.51.200.162 (talk) 03:50, 28 March 2017 (UTC)

WP:RECENTISM
Per the discussion at Talk:2017_Westminster_attack; issues with recentism (the lack of historical context, historical thinking, WP:NOTNEWS) the primacy of something In-The-News needs to take into account historical facts. Therefore a disambiguation page should occur here, at. Wikipedia is not a news source, so should not treat the generic title as a redirect to the latest news story as a "primary topic" automatically. Since this issue was discussed at the TALK:2017 page, BOLDly redirecting it there should not be done without a new discussion. -- 70.51.200.162 (talk) 23:23, 26 March 2017 (UTC)
 * NOTE the discussion was archived to Talk:2017_Westminster_attack/Archive_1 -- 70.51.200.162 (talk) 04:12, 28 March 2017 (UTC)
 * There was not a consensus per se at the move discussion for such a disambiguation, only a rough number of editors voicing their openness to one. By all means, if you're that determined to create a solid consensus, please consider WP:RFC. Personally, I would disagree with your recentism charge, since the attack of which Britain is still reeling from has been predominately referred to as the "Westminster attack" by the mainstream media (i.e. Guardian, Telegraph, CNN) without much reference to any previous attacks on the Palace that may cause confusion. Furthermore, before the events of last Wednesday "Westminster attack" wasn't even a redirect to anything, let alone a dab or a page of its own. It's best we wait a while, and see how the investigation and subsequent analysis pans out, given that there is still so much about this event that remains undisclosed. Until a stronger case/consensus emerges for a dab, I strongly recommend we leave "Westminster attack" as a redirect. FWIW, there is only one article on Wikipedia with, but I guess you knew that already.--Nev&eacute;–selbert 15:37, 27 March 2017 (UTC)


 * There was a discussion, and your reversions to redirect did not involve a discussion, with many editors expressing the opinion of conversion to dab. Therefore it should not stand. Instead you should have opened a new discussion, instead of a bold conversion to redirect without a new discussion. Just because the page didn't exist previously does not make the case that the discussion that did occur does not matter. Wikipedia does not only take into account the current news cycle, rather historical context is also of import. The current news cycle will always refer to the current news cycle, so any dateless term would usually in the news refer to the news, that doesn't indicate any context since Wikipedia is not a newspaper. The current hatnote at the target is also insufficient since it does not indicate the cases that were listed on the dab page that was here before. So even though you converted to a redirect, you should have made a large hatnote instead of a short one that did not take into account non-terrorist attacks. You could always have moved this page to Westminster attack (disambiguation) to go along with your redirection, which would solve many problems with the problematic hatnote if that pointed to the displaced dab page. -- 70.51.200.162 (talk) 03:54, 28 March 2017 (UTC)

Ping creator of the dab page -- 70.51.200.162 (talk) 03:59, 28 March 2017 (UTC)


 * per WP:PRIMARYUSAGE right now it can stay as a redirect, but I'm not sure about long term usage. There have been a lot of attacks in Westminster historically. be careful on not to have this slanted for too long towards the current event. - Knowledgekid87 (talk) 04:13, 28 March 2017 (UTC)

I guess we should redirect London attack to 2017 Westminster attack also. /sarcasm, anyway, this discussion should be taking place at Talk:2017 Westminster attack Gamebuster19901 (Talk║Contributions) 04:18, 28 March 2017 (UTC)


 * and are also problematic. Not everything is a terrorist incident. There's been much war involving London, Civil Wars included. (and Guy Fawkes is not listed at the terrorist list either, even though if someone tried to blow up Parliament tomorrow they would be called a terrorist) -- 70.51.200.162 (talk) 02:58, 29 March 2017 (UTC)


 * I don't really have a strong opinion, I took what appeared to be consensus and put it into effect, I would definitely be pro-dab though. - Knowledgekid87 (talk) 13:36, 28 March 2017 (UTC)


 * Support dab - A redirect resoundingly fails WP:10YT. We don't edit with a primary concern for what people will be searching for today, or even this year, and the argument that we can basically leave it a redirect for now, and change it when the hype dies down is basically the definition of recentism. Timothy Joseph Wood  13:57, 28 March 2017 (UTC)


 * Agree about DAB, and 'for other uses see List of terrorist incidents in London' is problematic. Pincrete (talk) 17:11, 28 March 2017 (UTC)

Since there is a rough consensus here, I have restored the disambiguation. Laurdecl talk 03:52, 30 March 2017 (UTC)


 * Bad dab - this isn't a normal dab page, more a list of attacks on Westminster, so I've changed to an WP:SIA. Suggest further discussion should go on it's talk. Widefox ; talk 19:00, 31 March 2017 (UTC)

"Attribution" at the beginning of the lede
I found Inediblehulk's change to the beginning of the lede confusing. His edit summary stated that New Scotland Yard's statements were contradictory. From what I have heard and read, that does not seem to be the case: from the their first statements, the phrasing in their briefings has been careful and measured. I also noticed that the word "occurred" was not spelled correctly in the lede. I slightly modified the phrasing of the first sentence to reflect the local geography a little better. Mathsci (talk) 12:42, 29 March 2017 (UTC)
 * They call it a terrorist attack, which means it was done to coerce someone into something. They say they don't know why the attacker attacked, which means they don't know whether it was done to coerce someone into something. Both statements are plausibly true, but the idea of taking someone's word for something while they admit they have no evidence of it is absurd. InedibleHulk (talk) 13:57, 29 March 2017 (UTC)


 * Might I suggest a footnote, if there is a need to attribute to the Met? I don't see a huge contradiction between "we believe this was intended to convey a political message" and "we aren't clear what that message was, nor why this individual personally wanted to send that message", which are both elements of 'motive'. Pincrete (talk) 20:47, 29 March 2017 (UTC)
 * That would work, if calling it "police-described" is clunky. There's nothing wrong with believing in something without evidence for it. The Great Pumpkin is testament to that. My gripe is with our assertion, based on their belief, that it was a terrorist attack. InedibleHulk (talk) 02:58, 31 March 2017 (UTC)
 * I wouldn't be opposed to removing 'terrorist' from the opening sentence and putting "Met Police describe as..." towards the end of the lead (before 'Masood had no known links'), but the general drift seems to be going against that. The one idea I really detest is 'terror attack', because I don't know what it means, and suspect that it is just a way to fudge the issue by implying but not stating anything. BTW there is often no 'official' designation, the Jo Cox example (now removed), was sinply on the basis that the police used provisions in anti-terrorist legislation in the way they handled the case. Terrorism wasn't involved in the charges, nor the rhetoric of prosecution against the accused. Even Rigby was not I think ever 'officially' called 'terrorism', and the guys were tried for murder rather than t******** . I don't know what we do in these cases, but would rather trust 'the Met' that's a police force rather than an opera house! than leader writers at this stage. … … … ps I loved the 'Oxford comma' story. Pincrete (talk) 21:21, 31 March 2017 (UTC)

Numbers injured
This recent article gives 50 injured, and victims from 11 countries. Our article lists 48 injured totalling 49, from 12 countries. Just to point out the inconsistencies - someone might want to check these numbers. -- zzuuzz (talk) 14:33, 7 April 2017 (UTC)


 * Two people have died since initial figures, therefore it would not be surprising if 'injured' dropped by two, though I can't verify detailed figures. Pincrete (talk) 20:05, 7 April 2017 (UTC)
 * I've reduced the UK injured figure by one, since the '12' figure seems to have been there since before UK victim 4 died. Pincrete (talk) 23:05, 7 April 2017 (UTC)

Edit warring
, I fail to see how using British English can be described as "heartless". The use of the word "Attacker" is common in British English and has been present on the page for some time, and you trying to edit war in the more American terms "perpetrator" is perplexing and jarring in such a context. It's similarly jarring to see the American "stepfather" rather than the more British "step-father". It is a shame that despite my edit summaries explaining this, and the note on your talk page, you feel it more fitting to edit war to your preferred version, rather than accept the WP:STATUS QUO of the page and discuss it on the talk page, as WP:BRD advises. Is there a reason that BRD and ENGVAR are not applicable in this circumstance? I will only add that if you think the justification of "All the other articles use perpetrator" is acceptable, you really do need to read the ENGVAR guidelines again, and then have a look at WP:OSE. - The Bounder (talk) 16:05, 7 April 2017 (UTC)
 * I agree about 'perp' and 'assailant', I checked with OED, and they seem to find stepfather normal these days in BritEng. I'm someone who tends to hyphenate everything and can never understand why people refer to their colleagues as "female-bovine orkers", what's an "orker"? Pincrete (talk) 23:01, 7 April 2017 (UTC)
 * Urgh, I blame journalists and their love of copying horrible Americanisms for what I will always think of as sloppy grammar! Hyphens and definite articles should be protected against such neglect! (Maybe the orkers should join the movement?!) - The Bounder (talk) 06:11, 8 April 2017 (UTC)

Flags on casualty figure
In so far as this has been discussed here, my impression has been that editors find flags inappropriate, since these people are in no sense representatives of their countries. Thoughts? Pincrete (talk) 22:54, 7 April 2017 (UTC)
 * I agree. Flags are entirely pointless when we are able to use words to say the same thing. The victims were not "representing" their country in an official sense, so the flag icons are not helpful. –. The Bounder (talk) 06:06, 8 April 2017 (UTC)
 * Decidedly so… Finally, some sanity prevails. Thanks, --  Ohc  ¡digame! 15:57, 8 April 2017 (UTC)

Title
Title needs to read "2017 Westminster Terror attack" Cllgbksr (talk) 18:53, 9 April 2017 (UTC)
 * It doesn't look like that's how these articles get named. See September 11 attacks, 2008 Mumbai attacks, and 7 July 2005 London bombings. But precedent set at other articles is generally not a compelling reason to do anything per WP:OTHERSTUFF so I'll ask: can you explain why this article needs to have "terror" added to its name?  City O f  Silver  18:57, 9 April 2017 (UTC)

UK reactions removal
That an attack took place in Westminster and at one of several entrances to the Houses of Parliament is significant. The reactions of the Mayor of London, the Prime Minister and the Speakers of both Houses are informative. I do not see how they could be described as "meaningless". In six months time, it will be helpful to have a brief but clear record of these reactions. Mathsci (talk) 03:51, 4 April 2017 (UTC)
 * Don't have a strong feeling either way, the three block quotes seemed a bit excessive, maybe shorter and in text would work. Pincrete (talk) 09:25, 4 April 2017 (UTC)
 * Politicians are quite used to making vacuous sound bites. It's part of their job (when they're not fiddling expenses, that is ). And it's not even a fine line between a valid expression by a political leader of shock and revulsion, and meaningless rhetoric calculated to make the morning tabloids, and I really have a problem seeing how what I deleted was in any way "informative". Wikipedia is neither a soapbox nor the news. Is it not sufficient to write that Khan condemned the attack and May as saying Britain would "never waver in the face of terrorism"? --  Ohc  ¡digame! 08:34, 5 April 2017 (UTC)
 * I have no strong feelings, but it is fairly customary to include a statement from Mayor/Governer and Head of State, the justification for Speakers I guess is the location. Pincrete (talk) 20:23, 5 April 2017 (UTC)
 * Customary is well and good, but what encyclopaedic purpose would the inclusion of words of political bravado serve?, and would they not be more suited to inclusion in Wikiquote? Actually, I'm not targeting my comments at you specifically, but more interested in hearing from the person who reverted my change… before I revert. --  Ohc  ¡digame! 08:29, 6 April 2017 (UTC)
 * The statement from the speakers was significant both for being made jointly by both of them and for its prompt release. Quotes should sue quotation markup per HTML standards. Andy Mabbett ( Pigsonthewing ); Talk to Andy; Andy's edits 19:26, 10 April 2017 (UTC)

London attacks again
In light of this shouldn't it rather be disambiguated with the month in which this occured?Walsak (talk) 23:08, 3 June 2017 (UTC)
 * The newer attack is not Westminster (London Bridge/Borough Market).Pincrete (talk) 08:48, 4 June 2017 (UTC)
 * True, but it would make sense to move this to March 2017 London attack. There's no sense in using the area in the title of this one, but the month on the other. Jim Michael (talk) 19:34, 5 June 2017 (UTC)
 * support mentioning month. Many different google search lead to one or the other first, a month in the title would make which attack is which clearer, particularly to those whose London geo knowledge is vauge.Icewhiz (talk) 19:38, 5 June 2017 (UTC)
 * Permanent naming on other attack is still undecided, with possibility of 'London Bridge' rather than month. Westminster and London Bridge are both fairly well known worldwide. Bear in mind that 'London' is bigger and more populous than some countries. Pincrete (talk) 20:53, 5 June 2017 (UTC)
 * Considering this article also starts with an attack on a bridge in London, namely Westminister bridge, that would be ambiguous for people who are not well versed in London's different bridges.Icewhiz (talk) 21:23, 5 June 2017 (UTC)
 * Should we open a move request or RfC? Jim Michael (talk) 22:02, 5 June 2017 (UTC)

Perpetrator
An editor (WWGB) has claimed in an edit summary that word "perpetrator" is not used in British English and substituted the word "assailant". The BBC News service have used the term perpetrator (and attacker) for this terrorist attack and the more recent vehicular attack in Stockholm. I have not heard or read the word "assailant" used in this context. I think lots of UK editors have been editing or watching this article, so it is unlikely at this stage that there are systematic errors of this kind in the article. Mathsci (talk) 07:07, 8 April 2017 (UTC)


 * Assailant doesnt seem right to me from a British point of view and would expect the more usual attacker to be used for a UK article, perpetrator would be seen as an Americanism. MilborneOne (talk) 07:55, 8 April 2017 (UTC)
 * Agree with WWGB and MilbourneOne. Although the word is present in British dictionaries, it definitely carries an American flavour. - The Bounder (talk) 12:27, 8 April 2017 (UTC)
 * Perpetrator seems acceptable to me, since a lot of Americanisms have entered the British language. The classic one is jail vs gaol, both of which are used (though it tends to be the former rather than the latter). Assailant doesn't seem right to me. It would be appropriate in the context of a robbery, mugging, etc, but not here. We can't even use the term suspect in this case. This is Paul (talk) 12:34, 8 April 2017 (UTC)
 * It is not better (and arguably worse) than "attacker". Just because lazy journalists use Americanisms, that should not affect the formal encyclopaedic English for which we are aiming. – The Bounder (talk) 12:37, 8 April 2017 (UTC)
 * Also thessaurus.com (which I always find helpful when writing) doesn't list assailant as an alternative for perpetrator. I don't think any of the other terms there would work either. This is Paul (talk) 12:40, 8 April 2017 (UTC)
 * Attacker or offender are probably the two most usable words. This is Paul (talk) 12:42, 8 April 2017 (UTC)
 * Attacker is closest to common Brit Eng, I find "assailant" strange and as US as 'perp', we understand all these words but they are not the "default terms". Attacker has the advantage of simplicity - a murder is done by a murderer, an attack by an attacker, why make it more complicated? Pincrete (talk) 17:35, 8 April 2017 (UTC)

We had a long wrangle (now archived) as to the exact model of car used in the attack, and the main article tells us that it was a "grey Hyundai Tucson." I was able to work out, from newspaper accounts of his birth, that the driver was a Kentish Man rather than a Man of Kent, but that vital distinction has been obscured to merely saying that he was "born in Kent." NRPanikker (talk) 18:41, 10 June 2017 (UTC)
 * A "vital distinction"? Sorry, I just think it is pompous nonsense. What does his crime have to do with the side of the river on which he was born? WWGB (talk) 03:48, 11 June 2017 (UTC)