Talk:2018 Paris ePrix/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Courcelles (talk · contribs) 16:49, 28 July 2018 (UTC)


 * Might as well do this one, too. Courcelles (talk) 16:49, 28 July 2018 (UTC)


 * " unsuccessfully tried to overtake him. " Needs another word.
 * "clinch his third victory of the season." There's a lot of names before this his, and they're all male.
 * "Construction of the circuit took around six days with workers using 5,000 t (11,000,000 lb) of material shipped to the Port" As a statistic, the GA criteria require a direct citation.  Also, why are we using pounds and not, as the French would, kilograms?
 * "starting order was determined " -> "starting order for the ePrix was determined"
 * "first group's top five drivers." Given each group only had five drivers, this is a "duh" thing to explicitly say.
 * "which meant everyone had to use 4% for the rest of the ePrix" If they had 40%, why could they only use 4%?
 * Other than Abt, who were the other two drivers with FanBoost?
 * "I wanted to win this year it was clearly Paris" is missing the closing quotation marks

Everything else looks fine. Courcelles (talk) 17:19, 28 July 2018 (UTC)
 * All of the above suggestions have been implemented. The winners of the FanBoost can be found in the first paragraph of the race sub-section. MWright96 (talk) 18:15, 28 July 2018 (UTC)
 * Missed that, sorry. Promoted. Courcelles (talk) 18:43, 28 July 2018 (UTC)