Talk:2018 Santiago ePrix/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Courcelles is travelling (talk · contribs) 13:45, 8 June 2018 (UTC)


 * I'll take on this one. Courcelles is travelling (talk) 13:45, 8 June 2018 (UTC)


 * What is a "lollipop sign"?
 * "In response to concerns over several dogs that frequent the Parque Forestal from straying onto the circuit" Does not flow well.
 * "The session had fewer incidents this time round" 'This time round' is too informal, and by my count, there are the same number of incidents listed?
 * which led to an improved in how his car would operate" Bad grammar
 * " this success would strive his team " Not sure "strive" is the word you want?
 * "This promoted race organisers " Promoted is the wrong word.


 * That's all I see. Courcelles is travelling (talk) 14:10, 8 June 2018 (UTC)
 * Thanks again for another review. Everything you have raised above has been dealt with and I have made some of my own improvements. MWright96 (talk) 15:30, 8 June 2018 (UTC)
 * All is good here, promoting. Courcelles is travelling (talk) 19:35, 8 June 2018 (UTC)