Talk:2019 English Open (snooker)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 06:51, 5 July 2021 (UTC)

Am reviewing for the July 2021 GAN Backlog Drive MWright96 (talk) 06:51, 5 July 2021 (UTC)
 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * Pass/Fail:

Lead

 * "It was the fourth ranking event of the 2019–20 snooker season and the first event of the 2019 Home Nations Series." - repetition of "event"
 * "In the event's semi finals, Mark Selby defeated Mark Allen, and David Gilbert defeated Tom Ford to reach the final." - repetition of "defeated"
 * "71 century breaks were made during the tournament." - don't begin with a number
 * Wikilink deciding frame to the relevant frame for non-snooker readers
 * Done all. Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 11:14, 6 July 2021 (UTC)

Format

 * "The event was the fourth ranking event of the 2019–20 snooker season, and the first of four Home Nations Series events." - repetition of "event(s)"
 * The World Snooker source that is attached to this info does not state any of the above so another reliable source is needed to verify all this information
 * "Chinese sports prediction website 19.com sponsored the event[6] which" a comma is missing before the reference
 * "was broadcast in domestically by Quest; in Europe by Eurosport;" - this sentence is not gramatically correct; can be was broadcast by Quest in the United Kingdom and the Republic of Ireland; Eurosport in Europe;
 * The Thai and Canadian broadcasters of the event is mentioned in World Snooker and that can be included here
 * Done all Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 11:15, 6 July 2021 (UTC)

Prize fund

 * Entire section is unreferenced and will need to be verified by a reliable source(s) stating all the information contained herein
 * added a cite. Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 11:15, 6 July 2021 (UTC)

Summary

 * Please add the dates of the earlier rounds for completeness and clarification
 * "Tom Ford, seeded 24, completed 4–0 wins over Peter Lines and Lu Ning before defeating Kyren Wilson 4–2." - needs to be verified by a reliable source
 * "Ford completed a whitewash over Tian." - clarify this was a 5–0 whitewash
 * Wikilink the terms pot and frames to the relevant articles only on the first mention
 * "Selby won the last three frames to win the match 6–5." - repetition of wo(i)n"
 * The terms sessions, breaks and century breaks can be wikilinked to their relevant articles only on the first mention in the final paragraph
 * "This was the 16th career ranking win for Selby.[20][21]" - The Sporting Life reference can't be used to verify this claim since it does not mention it so it will need to be removed and let the BBC Sport reference verify it which it does
 * The same Sporting Life reference can be used to expand coverage of the final where possible
 * Frame was already linked, otherwise done. Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 11:15, 6 July 2021 (UTC)