Talk:2019 European Pool Championship/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 18:25, 29 March 2020 (UTC)

Going to review this article. MWright96 (talk) 18:25, 29 March 2020 (UTC)
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Infobox

 * Italy does not need to be linked in the first infobox per MOS:OVERLINK
 * ✅ Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 19:54, 2 April 2020 (UTC)
 * The flagicons on the majority of the champions are the wrong ones
 * Flags removed Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 19:54, 2 April 2020 (UTC)
 * Jasmine Ouschan should be spelt as Jasmin Ouschan
 * ✅ Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 19:54, 2 April 2020 (UTC)

Lead

 * "was a series of professional pool championships that took place at the Best Western Premier in Treviso, Italy. The event was played between 26 April and 8 May 2019." - Think these two sentences can be merged into one and made less wordy in the process, particularly the second sentence
 * ✅ Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 19:56, 2 April 2020 (UTC)
 * "The series most medals were won by Russian players," - Russian players won the most medals over the course of the series,
 * ✅ Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 19:56, 2 April 2020 (UTC)

Overview

 * "annual series of pool tournaments for players in Europe, first held in 1980" - which were first held
 * ✅ Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 19:07, 3 April 2020 (UTC)
 * "125 points in the men's event, and 75 in the women's event." - try to avoid close repetition of the word "event"
 * ✅ Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 19:07, 3 April 2020 (UTC)
 * mentions of "race-to-xx" should have the en dash replacing the dashes
 * ✅ Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 19:07, 3 April 2020 (UTC)
 * "as race=to-6 racks" - the stray equals sign needs to be removed
 * ✅ Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 19:07, 3 April 2020 (UTC)

Tournament summary

 * "to complete an all Polish final." - all-Polish
 * ✅ Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 19:17, 3 April 2020 (UTC)
 * "Skowerski won his first individual European championship by defeating Skowerski" - you mean Skowerski defeated Skoneczny?
 * ✅ Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 19:17, 3 April 2020 (UTC)
 * "whilst Netherlands' Tamara Peeters-Rademakers" - the Netherlands'
 * ✅ Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 19:17, 3 April 2020 (UTC)
 * "and featured over" - more than
 * ✅ Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 19:17, 3 April 2020 (UTC)
 * "100 participants in the men's, and 40 for the women's division." - AZBillards state that 101 male participants and 43 women players entered the ten-ball event
 * ✅ Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 19:17, 3 April 2020 (UTC)
 * "defeating Latvian player Kaspars Turks in the final 6–1." - 6–1 in the final.
 * ✅ Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 19:17, 3 April 2020 (UTC)
 * "The eight-ball event began on the 2 May." - The eight-ball competition commenced on 2 May.
 * ✅ Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 19:17, 3 April 2020 (UTC)
 * "World Pool-Billiard Association world number 1 player Eklent Kaçi and Ralf Souquet" - AZBilliards does not mention that Kaci was the WPBA world number 1
 * Removed Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 19:17, 3 April 2020 (UTC)
 * "Kaçi won rack 14 to win his first championship" - repetition of the word won/win
 * ✅ Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 19:17, 3 April 2020 (UTC)
 * "where she met Jasmine Ouschan." - Jasmin
 * ✅ Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 19:17, 3 April 2020 (UTC)
 * Please avoid using Jasmin Ouschan's first name and use her surname instead
 * ✅ Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 19:17, 3 April 2020 (UTC)
 * "defeating Roy Kimberley 5–2 to win his 25th European medal." - European gold medal.
 * It wasn't his 25th gold. Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 19:17, 3 April 2020 (UTC)
 * "The Portuguese team of Vania Franco and Sara Rocha reached the final without losing a match, where they met the German team" - repetition of the word "team"
 * ✅ Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 19:17, 3 April 2020 (UTC)
 * "Russian player Fedor Gorst played 2018 WPA World Nine-ball Championship winner Joshua Filler" - No mention of Filler being the 2019 WPA World Nine-Ball championship by AZBillards
 * Removed Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 19:17, 3 April 2020 (UTC)
 * "with Filler's break shot being dry on most occasions." - not to sure what is meant by the phrase "being dry". Either reword it or wikilink it
 * ✅ Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 19:17, 3 April 2020 (UTC)

Medals title

 * "having won three events and winning seven medals." - reeptition of the word won/winning
 * ✅ Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 19:57, 2 April 2020 (UTC)
 * "with seven titles, but only two event wins." - and two event victories.
 * ✅ Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 19:57, 2 April 2020 (UTC)