Talk:2019 Kim Kim River toxic pollution

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The writing in the heading has been suggested to suffers from poor grammar and must be changed to meet Wikipedia's quality standards. I agree and thus i am rewriting the opening paragraph. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Williamxaviertanner (talk • contribs)
 * with article rewritten.  Night Lantern halo? 07:42, 16 August 2019 (UTC)