Talk:2019 Scottish Open (snooker)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 11:38, 24 July 2021 (UTC)

Shall be reviewing this article for the July 2021 GAN Backlog Drive MWright96 (talk) 11:38, 24 July 2021 (UTC)
 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * Pass/Fail:

Lead

 * "The 2019 Scottish Open (known as the 19.com Scottish Open due to sponsorship) was a professional snooker tournament. It took place from 9 to 15 December 2019 at the Emirates Arena in Glasgow, Scotland." - these sentences can be merged together
 * "It was the eighth ranking event of the 2019–20 snooker season and the third event of the Home Nations Series." - repetition of "event"
 * "but lost 5–6 to Jack Lisowski in the semi-finals." - but he lost
 * "Selby became the first player to win two Home Nations events in a single season after a 9–6 win over Lisowski in the final," - repetition of "win"
 * "and was Selby's 17th ranking title" - needs to be mentioned in the prose with a reilable source verifying it
 * "in his quarter-final win over Thepchaiya Un-Nooh." - in which frame was the highest break made?
 * All changed. Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 17:32, 26 July 2021 (UTC)

Format

 * "The Scottish Open was first played in 1981 as the 1981 International Open, and was won by Steve Davis." - first played as the 1981 International Open, which was won by Steve Davis.
 * "The 2019 edition was the third of four Home Nations Series events, and the eighth world ranking event of the 2019–20 snooker season." - repetition of "event(s)
 * You can include the UK & ROI and Canadian broadcasters of the event
 * Done Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 17:34, 26 July 2021 (UTC)

Summary

 * All the dashes in the first paragraph should be replaced by en dashes per MOS:DASH
 * "who completed victories over Eden Sharav, Chang Bingyu, Xiao Guodong and Shaun Murphy - and second seed Judd Trump, who completed 4-0 victories over Amine Amiri and Yuan Sijun before 4-1 victories over James Wattana and Graeme Dott." - repetition of "victories"
 * The term century break can be wikilinked only on the first mention
 * "The semi-finals were played on 14 December" - how about held for variety?
 * "The final was played between Selby and Lisowski on 15 December" - maybe change the text in bold to contested for variety?
 * "and led at 5–3 winning the next two frames." - a word appears to be missing from this text sample
 * "Lisowski won two of the next three frames before Selby won frame 12 after a prolonged safety battle." - repetition of "won"
 * "Selby, however, won the match in frame 15 after a break of 79." - how about adding the final score of the match?
 * All done. Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 17:38, 26 July 2021 (UTC)

Century breaks

 * "The highest was a 143 made by Lisowski in his quarter-final win." - in which frame was the 143 century scored in?
 * fixed Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 17:28, 26 July 2021 (UTC)