Talk:2019 Tour Championship/GA1

GA Review
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GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria


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Reviewer: HawkAussie (talk · contribs) 03:01, 12 July 2019 (UTC)

Lead

 * See no issues here

First Round

 * It's probably just me but you have the first round in this section and then in the draw you have the quarter-finals. Which is it
 * Same thing. An eight person tournament has the first round as the quarterfinal. Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 06:30, 16 July 2019 (UTC)
 * Selby then won 6 frames - Possible change to Selby then won the next six frames.
 * ✅ Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 06:30, 16 July 2019 (UTC)
 * ...which included 3 centuries - Change the 3 to a three.
 * ✅ Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 06:30, 16 July 2019 (UTC)
 * ...match at 6–6. - Maybe change to six all.
 * ✅ Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 06:30, 16 July 2019 (UTC)
 * Selby then won frame 14 - Remove the word then.
 * ✅ Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 06:36, 16 July 2019 (UTC)
 * ...won 4 of the next 5 - won four of the next five.
 * ✅ Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 06:30, 16 July 2019 (UTC)
 * Wilson then captured the next three frames - Remove the word then
 * ✅ Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 06:36, 16 July 2019 (UTC)

Semi-finals

 * ...best of 19 frame matches, played between two sessions, held between 21–22 March 2019 - Properly need to break that sentence there.
 * ✅ Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 16:00, 16 July 2019 (UTC)
 * In addition to the Masters, the two also met in the final of the 2018 Northern Ireland Open, Trump winning on both occasions. - Is this sentence really needed?
 * I think so. It's important that they had met in two finals of tournaments in the season prior to this match. Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 16:00, 16 July 2019 (UTC)
 * ...tied the score at 1–1 - Change it to one all.
 * ✅ Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 16:00, 16 July 2019 (UTC)
 * ...won frames 3 and 4 - three and four not 3 and 4. That is also the same with frame five instead of frame 5.
 * ✅ Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 16:00, 16 July 2019 (UTC)
 * ...two of the next three frames to lead 8–5. O'Sullivan won both... - You could incorporate the previous sentence into the other one.
 * ✅ Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 16:00, 16 July 2019 (UTC)
 * I don't know if it's just me but that last frame seems to be a bit long to go WP:SUMMARY.
 * RS also go into large depth about this frame. Deciders are a big deal, especially winning a match on the final ball. Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 16:00, 16 July 2019 (UTC)
 * ...won the next 5 frames - five instead of 5.
 * ✅ Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 16:00, 16 July 2019 (UTC)
 * ...to tie the match 6–6. - six all not 6-6.
 * ✅ Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 16:00, 16 July 2019 (UTC)

Final

 * ...match would also win the Coral Cup, awarded - Change this to "...match also won the Coral Cup"
 * ✅ Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 16:20, 16 July 2019 (UTC)
 * ...tie the match 2–2 - two all
 * ✅ Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 16:20, 16 July 2019 (UTC)
 * ...frames 5,6 and 7 - frame five, six and seven. This is also the same with frame 8 and 9 as they should be frame eight and nine.
 * ✅ Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 16:20, 16 July 2019 (UTC)
 * ...to lead 7–5, and after the interval 8–6 - This is missing something here.
 * Not sure I see it, quite common to ignore frames where both players win one where it's unimportant. I've changed the wording, however. Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 16:20, 16 July 2019 (UTC)
 * ...session to tie the match 8–8 - eight all not 8-8
 * ✅ Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 16:20, 16 July 2019 (UTC)
 * This is the same with 9-9 and 10-10 as they should be nine all and ten all.
 * ✅ for 9-9. MOS:NUM says 10 can be written either ten or 10. Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 16:20, 16 July 2019 (UTC)
 * ...the frame and tournament - the frame and the tournament.
 * Common wording to win frame and match as well as frame, match and tournament. "the" is just an added word Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 16:20, 16 July 2019 (UTC)

Prize fund

 * See no issues here

Coral Cup
✅ Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 07:39, 12 July 2019 (UTC)
 * For all three events qualification was based on players - Missing a comma between events and qualification.

Final Comments
Reference 10 and 27 both have redirects as they are now in orange. The copyvio is only at 12% so that bit is fine. Other than that this probably needs a bit of work on it before I will be able to give this a GA. HawkAussie (talk) 02:35, 16 July 2019 (UTC)

EDIT: Just realized that the picture of Judd Trump might cause an issue in the future. I am just putting that up there.
 * This all seems very easy to fix. Shouldn't take long. I'll get on with it as soon as I can. Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 06:28, 16 July 2019 (UTC)
 * I've fixed/commented on all of the above thanks for your speedy response. What is the issue with the Trump image? Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski  (talk • contribs) 16:24, 16 July 2019 (UTC)
 * This is because it has a personally rights warning isn't something that I rarely see. So when I saw that, I thought it could be a possible issue but I might just be over worrying about something. HawkAussie (talk) 23:01, 16 July 2019 (UTC)
 * , snooker images on commons are quite often like this, as - despite my atrempts- getting companies to release images so far hasn't worked. The image is properly attributed. Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 05:54, 17 July 2019 (UTC)
 * That does suck in a way, right looking through the rest of them, it's good to go for a GA. HawkAussie (talk) 00:19, 18 July 2019 (UTC)

- It's the bane of my life. Thank you for a prompt and hassle free GA review. Have a great day. Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 06:43, 18 July 2019 (UTC)