Talk:2019 UK Championship/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 05:09, 1 October 2020 (UTC)

Taking this review for the GAN October 2020 Backlog Drive. MWright96 (talk) 05:09, 1 October 2020 (UTC)
 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * Pass/Fail:

Lead

 * "was a professional snooker tournament that took place from 26 November to 8 December 2019." - please include the location and the venue where the tournament took place
 * Done Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 16:55, 3 October 2020 (UTC)
 * "had won the previous two championships, defeating Shaun Murphy 10–5 in the 2017 final, and Mark Allen 10–6 in the 2018 final." - this is not mentioned in the prose. I think it should be and it should also be verified by a reliable source which explicitly states this information
 * Done Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 16:55, 3 October 2020 (UTC)
 * "It was the first maximum break to be made at the UK Championship since 2016, and the third of Hawkins' career." - this needs to be included in the main prose since it is only mentioned in the lead
 * Done Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 16:55, 3 October 2020 (UTC)

Overview

 * Think some mention of the broadcasting coverage the tournament received should be included here
 * done Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 16:58, 3 October 2020 (UTC)

Summary

 * "with matches not televised." - this portion of information is not mentioned in the Sporting Life source. Another source is needed to accompany it
 * removed Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 17:28, 3 October 2020 (UTC)
 * "Murphy had lead the match 3–1," - typo; should be led
 * Done Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs)
 * The second BBC Sport attached to the sentence "Gilbert commented after the match that there were "no positives" from the match, and he wanted to "smash up [his] cue"." makes no mention of it. It can also be used to expand some coverage of the early rounds with fascinating and relevant material
 * Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 17:28, 3 October 2020 (UTC)
 * Added a bit. Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 17:59, 4 October 2020 (UTC)
 * BBC Sport and footage I've seen state Hawkins' 147 was made in the fourth frame not the third
 * Fixed Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 17:28, 3 October 2020 (UTC)
 * "World number 9 Kyren Wilson was defeated by world number 56 Marco Fu on a deciding frame 5–6." - not mentioned by Reference 14 so a new source is needed to verify this piece of text
 * Done Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 17:28, 3 October 2020 (UTC)
 * Judd Trump does not need to be wikilinked for a second time
 * Done Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 17:28, 3 October 2020 (UTC)
 * "Bond trailed 1-3" - en dash is needed here
 * Fixed Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 17:28, 3 October 2020 (UTC)
 * "including a break of 114" - BBC Sport does not state Bond made a break of 114 en route to beating Judd Trump. Another source is needed for this fact
 * I misread the source, removed Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 17:28, 3 October 2020 (UTC)
 * "6-5 having trailed 2–5." - an en dash is needed in place of the hyphen indicated in bold
 * Fixed Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 17:28, 3 October 2020 (UTC)
 * "tie the match at 4-4" - same issue as above
 * Fixed Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 17:28, 3 October 2020 (UTC)
 * "6-3 despite not making a break" - same issue as above
 * Fixed Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 17:28, 3 October 2020 (UTC)
 * "in excess of 50." - close repetition of the BBC Sport source that verifies this portion of text
 * "Maguire completed a 6-0" - en dash please
 * Fixed Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 17:28, 3 October 2020 (UTC)
 * "Post match, Allen commented that he was "shellshocked" - I think you could expand from the Eurosport quote to say "a bit shell-shocked"
 * Done Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 17:28, 3 October 2020 (UTC)
 * "Stephen Maguire had won the event previously in 2004 and reached the final again in 2007 UK Championship," - just 2007 will suffice here
 * Done Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 17:28, 3 October 2020 (UTC)
 * "break of his own to lead 9-6" - another en dash is needed
 * Fixed Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 17:28, 3 October 2020 (UTC)
 * Think it should be mentioned that this the third time Ding won the UK Championship
 * Done Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 17:29, 3 October 2020 (UTC)