Talk:2019 UK Seniors Championship/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Sammi Brie (talk · contribs) 21:10, 12 October 2022 (UTC)

Just some copy tweaks, really. Hold to. Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 21:41, 12 October 2022 (UTC)

Copy changes

 * The UK Seniors Championship is an amateur snooker tournament first held in 2019. Looks like this should read 2017?
 * The winner of the 2018 UK Seniors Championship, Ken Doherty did not appear at the event. Complete the appositive by adding a comma after Doherty
 * The oldest man in the field, Cliff Thorburn Same. In the same sentence, remove the comma before "but" (User:Sammi Brie/Commas in sentences.
 * His opponent, Patrick Wallace, however A lot of kludgy commas here but can't avoid them. Perhaps However, his opponent, Patrick Wallace,
 * Michael Judge defeated Willie Thorne also on a deciding frame Comma after Thorne
 * The final quarter-final Judge defeated James Wattana 3–1 I presume a missing "In" needs to be added to the front.
 * After the match, Judge called White his "hero" and winning the event was "a dream come true". a missing "said" before "winning"
 * The results from the event is shown below, players in bold denote match winners. Change "is" to "are" and the comma to a semicolon.
 * All done.  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 07:40, 13 October 2022 (UTC)

Spot checks
Earwig turns up no issues. I do note Ref 3 could use more metadata.


 * [4] (snooker.org): Most things check out, but I don't see Jimmy White's 104 here. It is mentioned in [11], though, so it's a matter of adding another citation. Why is this ref listed as being in Norwegian?
 * It's also in 13, which is cited there. I've removed the Lang parameter.  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 07:42, 13 October 2022 (UTC)
 * [9]: Match information is provided.

I take it the dead link at [7] is unavoidable?
 * Fraid so, I can't find it anywhere online.  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 07:43, 13 October 2022 (UTC)

Other items

 * Archive references.
 * The one image is freely licensed and has alt text.
 * Hi, I've replied to the above. Thanks for your review.  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 07:44, 13 October 2022 (UTC)