Talk:2019 Veldhoven Open/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 20:18, 24 September 2019 (UTC)

Comments
 * Heading over infobox should be consistent with article title I guess.
 * ✅ Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 15:28, 30 September 2019 (UTC)


 * "in the final 9–8" -> " 9–8 in the final"
 * ✅ Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 15:28, 30 September 2019 (UTC)


 * "Oliwia Czuprynska " has a diacritic missing.
 * ✅ Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 15:28, 30 September 2019 (UTC)


 * "with the winner receiving €4,500." each winner? Was the fund across both men's and women's events?
 * I thought it was the same for each. Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 15:28, 30 September 2019 (UTC)


 * Infobox is pure sexist as it doesn't include the women's champion/runner-up. That needs to be addressed.
 * ✅ Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 15:28, 30 September 2019 (UTC)


 * Venue in infobox is "NH Koningshof" that's not mentioned anywhere else.
 * ✅ Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 15:28, 30 September 2019 (UTC)


 * " double-elimination knockout tournament" no need for knockout, that's what "elimination" means.
 * ✅ Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 15:28, 30 September 2019 (UTC)


 * Sortable table is a bit of a mess, total moves when sorted, and why no heading for "round" or whatever the first column means? And once again, needs clarifying, this funding was the same for both the men's and women's events?
 * ✅ Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 15:28, 30 September 2019 (UTC)


 * " The event had a total of 193 participants, including all top-16 players" across both men's and women's? Worth noting.
 * As below Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 15:28, 30 September 2019 (UTC)


 * In fact, the "Tournament summary" should really be a top-level heading under which you have "Men's event" and "Women's event" as next-level headings.
 * ✅ Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 15:28, 30 September 2019 (UTC)


 * "Mateusz Śniegocki" is missing a diacritic.
 * ✅ Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 15:28, 30 September 2019 (UTC)


 * Mark Gray is a snooker player, not a pool player!
 * ✅ Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 15:28, 30 September 2019 (UTC)


 * "He was awarded a walkover" why?
 * Because there's 193 entrants. I can't find a source saying exactly this though. Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 15:28, 30 September 2019 (UTC)


 * "Francisco Sánchez Ruíz" more diacritics missing.
 * ✅ Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 15:28, 30 September 2019 (UTC)


 * " Reigning World nine-ball champion Joshua Filler " no need to capitalise "World".
 * ✅ Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 15:28, 30 September 2019 (UTC)


 * "in 2018.[20][14] " numerical order.
 * ✅ Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 15:28, 30 September 2019 (UTC)


 * "championship 9–2.[16][14]" ditto.
 * ✅ Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 15:28, 30 September 2019 (UTC)


 * "both had 2,400 points.[22]" first and only time you talk about points, not sure it's relevant after you've already said they were tied for number one spot.
 * agreed. Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 15:28, 30 September 2019 (UTC)


 * Apply all the diacritic changes to the tournament summary table.
 * ✅ Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 15:28, 30 September 2019 (UTC)

That's it first time through. The Rambling Man (Staying alive since 2005!) 09:53, 30 September 2019 (UTC)
 * I think I have it all . Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 15:28, 30 September 2019 (UTC)
 * Ok, I made a few extra tweaks which you are, of course, free to remove. Otherwise we're good to go here.  Nice updates, another good article for cue sports. The Rambling Man (Staying alive since 2005!) 15:54, 30 September 2019 (UTC)