Talk:2020 Atlantic hurricane season/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Hurricanehink mobile (talk · contribs) 01:54, 11 August 2021 (UTC)


 * I am currently reviewing the article. Hurricanehink mobile (talk) 01:54, 11 August 2021 (UTC)
 * I provided off-wiki comments, reviewing the article up to Marco. Hurricanehink mobile (talk) 02:52, 11 August 2021 (UTC)


 * "An early estimate from La Prensa placed damage and losses in Honduras from Eta and Iota as high as $10 billion – roughly 40 percent of that nation's GDP." - since that was in December, try finding a more recent estimate.
 * "There were no reports of casualties or damage associated with the storm." - usually we don't include this
 * Fixed--12george1 (talk) 16:54, 11 August 2021 (UTC)


 * "In its early stages, Sally dropped heavy rainfall in South Florida, causing street flooding. However, in Key West, up to 6 in (150 mm) of water was reported in some businesses and homes." - why the "however"?
 * Fixed--12george1 (talk) 16:54, 11 August 2021 (UTC)


 * "However, there were no reports of damage or fatalities directly caused by Vicky."
 * Fixed--12george1 (talk) 16:54, 11 August 2021 (UTC)


 * Is it worth mentioning that Gamma was absorbed by Delta?
 * Fixed--12george1 (talk) 16:54, 11 August 2021 (UTC)


 * "The city was left "underwater"" - can you rewrite so you don't have an unattributed quote?
 * Fixed--12george1 (talk) 16:54, 11 August 2021 (UTC)


 * "The hurricane caused one indirect death; a 27-year-old man drowned in Epsilon-induced rip currents in Daytona Beach, Florida." - why was this indirect?
 * Fixed--12george1 (talk) 16:54, 11 August 2021 (UTC)

All in all, a very good job on such an important season! It shouldn't take much to get it to GA. ♫ Hurricanehink ( talk ) 15:29, 11 August 2021 (UTC)
 * Make sure you add a source for Zeta being the latest MH in the US