Talk:2020 EFL Championship play-off final/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 08:03, 8 October 2020 (UTC)

Taking this review for the GAN October 2020 Backlog Drive. MWright96 (talk) 08:03, 8 October 2020 (UTC)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * Pass/Fail:

Lead

 * How about wikilinking extra time, free kick and substitute to the relevant articles?

Route to the final

 * "Championship top scorer Aleksandar Mitrović was unavailable for Fulham through injury." - what type of injury?
 * The term half time should be wikilinked
 * Wikilink aggregate to the relevant article on the first mention
 * The first mention of Swansea City is not wikilinked
 * "gave the home team a 1–0 which they held on to until the final whistle." - a 1–0 lead
 * "and was the last match to be hosted at the stadium before Brentford's move to a new stadium." - the name of the new stadium pleas

Background

 * "they lost the 1997 Football League Second Division play-off Final 1–0 against Crewe Alexandra, the 2002 Football League Second Division play-off Final 2–0 against Stoke City, and the 2013 Football League One play-off Final 2–1 against Yeovil Town." - perphaps reduce the number of times the word "against" is used in this sentence
 * Perhaps state who broadcast the match and who was considered the favourites to win if the information is available?

First half

 * Wikilink penalty area
 * Wikilink corner to the relevant article
 * "caught a Fulham cross three minutes later," - which Fulham player caught the cross?
 * It already says who caught it. The Rambling Man (Hands! Face! Space!&#33;!&#33;) 10:04, 8 October 2020 (UTC)

Second half

 * "Benrahma made a run into the penalty area and his cross was blocked" - blocked by whom?
 * Not mentioned. The Rambling Man (Hands! Face! Space!&#33;!&#33;) 10:05, 8 October 2020 (UTC)
 * Wikilink set piece to Set piece (football)
 * "Onomah then struck a shot over the Brentford's bar" - the text indiciated in bold is a typo

Extra time

 * "On four mimnutes," - typo
 * "while Fulham's Ivan Cavaleiro was brought on by Fulham in place of Kamara." - repetition of "Fulham"
 * "In the 116th minute of the match," - the source and the details section say it was the 117th minute
 * Wikilink time-wasting to Running out the clock