Talk:2020 European Masters (2019–20 season)/GA1

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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 07:16, 1 March 2020 (UTC)

Going to review this article. MWright96 (talk) 07:16, 1 March 2020 (UTC)
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Lead

 * "Neil Robertson won his seventeenth ranking title" - won the seventeenth ranking title of his career
 * ✅ Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 10:45, 1 March 2020 (UTC)
 * "with Thailand's Thepchaiya Un-Nooh making the highest, a 146." - clarify that this was during the first round
 * ✅ Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 10:45, 1 March 2020 (UTC)

Tournament format

 * "This was the twenty-first edition of the European Masters tournament," - not mentioned by Chris Turner's Snooker Archive. Please find another source that explicitly states this fact.
 * ✅. The original cite just was to clarify the first event Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 12:19, 1 March 2020 (UTC)
 * "and preceding the 2019 German Masters." - 2020
 * ✅. Good catch Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 12:19, 1 March 2020 (UTC)
 * "The World Professional Billiards and Snooker Association and World Snooker organised the European Masters." - Not mentioned by the Sporting Life source. Please use/find another source that explicitly states this fact

Prize fund

 * The total prize fund according to World Snooker £402,000 not £407,000. However this source confirms the latter figure. Also that source states this was the first European Masters to be held in Austria and the first World Snooker ranking event to be held in the country
 * Added. The reason for the disparity is that WST doesn't count highest breaks as part of the prize fund, but everywhere else does. Incidentally, they used to count it. I would suggest that this is due to the disparity between the old points based rankings and the new one based on prize money. Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 12:36, 1 March 2020 (UTC)
 * "all sponsored by BetVictor" - state that BetVictor is a betting company as you've done in the lede
 * Done Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs)`
 * "The breakdown of prize money for this year is shown below:" - how about the 2020 edition instead?
 * I think we should cut both. It's obvious we are talking about this year's event, as that is the event. Slightly reworded Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 12:36, 1 March 2020 (UTC)

Qualifying

 * "All matches were held as best-of-nine frames." - as the
 * ✅ Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 12:38, 1 March 2020 (UTC)
 * "where he defeated Joe Perry in the final 9–6.[9][7]" - refs should be in numerical order
 * ✅ Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 12:38, 1 March 2020 (UTC)
 * Martin O'Donnell is linked to the video game composer and not the snooker player
 * ✅ Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 12:38, 1 March 2020 (UTC)
 * "Reigning world champion Judd Trump also lost in the first round of qualifying, losing 3–5 to Ian Burns." - was also defeated
 * ✅ Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 12:40, 1 March 2020 (UTC)
 * "World number ten Shaun Murphy was also defeated 2–5 by Alfie Burden and world number fourteen Jack Lisowski was defeated" - repetition of the word "defeated"
 * ✅ Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 12:40, 1 March 2020 (UTC)

Knockout stages

 * "The second round featured John Higgins being defeated 5–4 by Un-Nooh." - you can mention that Higgins is a four-time world champion as stated in the Sporting Life citation
 * ✅ Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 12:46, 1 March 2020 (UTC)
 * "Barry Hawkins defeated three-time world champion Mark Selby" - Sporting Life does not state Selby is a three-time world champion but as a former world champion
 * ✅ Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 12:46, 1 March 2020 (UTC)
 * "The previous ranking event winner Ding Junhui" - The UK champion
 * ✅ Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 12:46, 1 March 2020 (UTC)
 * "Barry Hawkins lose to Zhou Yuelong 2–5," - just Hawkins will suffice
 * ✅ Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 12:46, 1 March 2020 (UTC)
 * "The final was played on 26 January 2020 between Robertson and Zhou, as a best-of-seventeen frames match over two sessions" - not stated by SnookerHQ but it is mentioned by
 * ✅ Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 12:46, 1 March 2020 (UTC)
 * "scoring a century in both the fourth and eighth frames." - century break
 * ✅ Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 12:46, 1 March 2020 (UTC)
 * "the first since the 1989 Grand Prix." - perhaps briefly mention that it was Steve Davis who beat Dean Reynolds 10–0 in the 1989 World Grand Prix final?
 * ✅ Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 12:46, 1 March 2020 (UTC)

Main draw

 * Perhaps state that the numbers in brackets are the players' seedings?
 * ✅ Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 12:16, 1 March 2020 (UTC)

Main stage centuries

 * "The highest was a 146 made by Thepchaiya Un-Nooh in frame six of his first round match." - Maybe mention Un-Nooh's opponent for clarity
 * ✅ Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 11:49, 1 March 2020 (UTC)

Qualifying stage centuries

 * "The highest of these was a 142 made by Michael Georgiou, made in frame four of his first round match." - same issue as above
 * ✅ Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 11:51, 1 March 2020 (UTC)