Talk:2020 European Masters (2020–21 season)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: ArnabSaha (talk · contribs) 17:02, 1 October 2020 (UTC)

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria


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 * It represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each:
 * 1) Is it stable?
 * It does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute:
 * 1) Is it illustrated, if possible, by images?
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 * Pass or Fail: Didn't find any other issues. Good to go.
 * B. Images are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail: Didn't find any other issues. Good to go.
 * Pass or Fail: Didn't find any other issues. Good to go.

Comments

 * There are some parts in present tense. Change them to past (" The event is being played between 21 and 27 September 2020")
 * Doing Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 16:50, 2 October 2020 (UTC)
 * Think I've got them all. Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 21:24, 2 October 2020 (UTC)
 * An image in infobox will be better.
 * I'll see what I can do.Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 16:50, 2 October 2020 (UTC)
 * I don't think there is an official event poster for the event (there's no fans after all), so I've used the image from the background section
 * I will suggest making a different section for broadcast details.
 * It's not really long enough for its own section. I'd agree if there was more to add, such as at the 2019 World Snooker Championship. Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 16:50, 2 October 2020 (UTC)
 * I checked the 2020 Masters (snooker) article. It also has a small broadcast section, so I suggested. Personally, I will prefer a different one.  ❯❯❯  S A H A  
 * Moved regardless. Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 21:24, 2 October 2020 (UTC)
 * "There was 98 century breaks made during the tournament" --> "There were".
 * Done Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 21:24, 2 October 2020 (UTC)
 * "Matches at the event was played as the best-of-9 frames until the semi-finals" --> Matches were
 * DOne Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 21:24, 2 October 2020 (UTC)
 * "...145 made by Mark Allen. Allen also equalled..." - I will suggest using "He" in place of Allen in the 2nd sentence.
 * Done Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 21:24, 2 October 2020 (UTC)
 * "Cue manufacturer John Parris also offered an new cue to be made as a reward for its return." --> "a new cue".
 * Done Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 21:24, 2 October 2020 (UTC)
 * "was referreed by Ben Williams." --> "refereed" (spelling mistake).
 * done Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 21:24, 2 October 2020 (UTC)
 * "During the first round the World Snooker Tour announced" --> add comma after "round".
 * done Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 21:24, 2 October 2020 (UTC)
 * "The 2020 European Masters (2) was a professional snooker tournament, and" --> comma not required after "tournament".
 * done Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 21:24, 2 October 2020 (UTC)

 ❯❯❯  S A H A   16:58, 2 October 2020 (UTC)
 * - covered the above. Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 21:24, 2 October 2020 (UTC)
 * Congrats, the article is now a GA.  ❯❯❯  S A H A   08:22, 3 October 2020 (UTC)