Talk:2020 Macau Grand Prix/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 09:15, 9 May 2021 (UTC)

That's all I have. On hold. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!&#33;!&#33;) 09:09, 12 May 2021 (UTC)
 * ", part of" and was part of? This sentence isn't scanning quite right for me at the moment.
 * "Smart Life Racing" in the lead and "Smart Racing Life" in the main text, check throughout.
 * "from the pole position" no need for "the".
 * "22 November, 2020 with" no comma needed.
 * "first time in 2019, the series" again, doesn't scan, are these really separate sentences?
 * "nearly every driver" perhaps "most drivers"
 * "two minutes, 34.106 seconds" it would be easier to read this as "2 minutes, 34.106 seconds"
 * No good reason to reduce size of text in the table.
 * Q1 Time -> Q1 time etc.
 * Check MOS:BOLD for the use of bold only, people with accessibility issues may not easily be able to pick out bold alone.
 * MOS FLAG, those should be explained at least on the first use.
 * I guess "gap" applies to the best lap time for each driver?
 * "to set the" to determine the
 * "local time" which was?
 * In sortable tables, linked items should be linked each time.
 * Does en-dash mean retired? Shouldn't it say "retired"?
 * Thank you for taking on the review. I have made the necessary changes to the article MWright96 (talk) 13:25, 12 May 2021 (UTC)
 * Nice work, happy to promote this now. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!&#33;!&#33;) 20:53, 13 May 2021 (UTC)