Talk:2020 Nashville tornado outbreak/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Hurricane Noah (talk · contribs) 19:19, 2 January 2022 (UTC)

Will do. Noah Talk 19:19, 2 January 2022 (UTC)


 * including a high-end EF3 tornado that hit Nashville and Mount Juliet Link EF scale. Noah Talk 01:42, 3 January 2022 (UTC)
 * ✅ United States Man (talk)
 * The threat for severe weather across Middle Tennessee and surrounding areas add "the" before surrounding. Noah Talk 01:42, 3 January 2022 (UTC)
 * ❌ I fail to see how this makes the sentence better, as there is no grammatical error the way it is. United States Man (talk)
 * Link coordinated universal time on UTC. Noah Talk 01:42, 3 January 2022 (UTC)
 * ✅ United States Man (talk)
 * Link to the central time zone on CST. Noah Talk 01:42, 3 January 2022 (UTC)
 * ✅ United States Man (talk)
 * longer-tracked EF2 tornado which tracked across much of Carroll County I would avoid using tracked twice in the sentence. Noah Talk 01:42, 3 January 2022 (UTC)
 * ✅ United States Man (talk)
 * seven miles (11 km) --> 7 miles (11 km). Noah Talk 01:42, 3 January 2022 (UTC)
 * ✅ United States Man (talk)
 * will check over the tornado sections and the rest tomorrow. Hopefully the storm events database is back up by then. Noah Talk 01:42, 3 January 2022 (UTC)
 * Storm events finally came back online yesterday for me so I was checking things out there. Noah Talk 12:59, 6 January 2022 (UTC)


 * Kroger, Panera Bread, Petco --> Kroger, Panera Bread, and Petco stores. Noah Talk 12:59, 6 January 2022 (UTC)
 * ✅ United States Man (talk) 13:11, 6 January 2022 (UTC)
 * The tornado caused five fatalities and 220 injuries Would recommend changing five to 5. Noah Talk 12:59, 6 January 2022 (UTC)
 * ✅ United States Man (talk) 13:11, 6 January 2022 (UTC)
 * Recommend adding alt text for the other images. Noah Talk 12:59, 6 January 2022 (UTC)
 * ✅ United States Man (talk) 13:11, 6 January 2022 (UTC)
 * That should be it. Noah Talk 12:59, 6 January 2022 (UTC)