Talk:2020 Players Championship (snooker)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 16:18, 4 July 2021 (UTC)

Shall review for the July 2021 GAN Backlog Drive MWright96 (talk) 16:18, 4 July 2021 (UTC)
 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * Pass/Fail:

Image caption

 * "Judd Trump won the event, his sixth championship of the season" - picture two caption has a factual error in bold

Lead

 * "and the second leg of the Coral Series." - Coral Cup
 * These terms are interchangable as per . Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 15:12, 6 July 2021 (UTC)
 * "It was the 16th ranking title of Trump's career, and his fifth ranking title of the season." - repetition of "title"
 * done Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 15:12, 6 July 2021 (UTC)
 * The above text will also need mentioning in the prose
 * Done Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 15:12, 6 July 2021 (UTC)
 * "With it, he equalled the record held jointly by Stephen Hendry, Ding Junhui, Mark Selby and O'Sullivan for the most ranking titles in a single season." - needs to be mentioned in the prose with a reliable source verifying it
 * Done Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 15:12, 6 July 2021 (UTC)
 * "the highest of which was a 140 made by Neil Robertson." - in which round and which frame was the 140 break made?
 * done Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 15:12, 6 July 2021 (UTC)

Format

 * "Points scored at events from the 2019 Riga Masters until the 2020 Snooker Shoot Out added towards qualifying for the event." - were added towards qualifying for the tournament.
 * "It was the 13th ranking event of the snooker season," - should be 14th
 * Wikilink world rankings to the relevant article
 * "with the 2020 World Grand Prix and Tour Championship." - some words missing from this text
 * Fixed all. Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 15:14, 6 July 2021 (UTC)

Prize fund

 * "with £125,000 to the winner." - going to or awarded
 * fixed Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 15:08, 6 July 2021 (UTC)

Summary

 * "Murphy led 4–1, was pegged back to 5-5" - Murphy, who led 4–1, was pegged back to 5–5
 * "The quarter-finals were played between 26 and 28 February." - how about from 26 to 28 February.
 * "World number one Trump defeated Higgins 6–3," - no mention of Trump being world number one in the Sporting Life source verifying this information
 * Wikilink break to the relevant article for non-snooker readers only on the first mention
 * "Maguire won the match in frame 11, his second 6–5 win of the tournament." - repetition of "wo(i)n"
 * "but Magurire won the next four frame." - spelling error
 * "Murphy won the opening three frames," - BBC Sport says it was the first two frames
 * The term session can be wikilinked to the correct article so that non-snooker readers can find out its meaning
 * "Trump won the two following frames to win the match 10–4," - repetition of "wo(i)n"
 * I have covered these. Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 15:16, 6 July 2021 (UTC)

Century breaks

 * "the highest of which was a 140 made by Neil Robertson." - in which match and which frame did Robertson make his 140 break
 * Added Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 15:08, 6 July 2021 (UTC)